Rejected Sheet Shamas Gishkim

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  1. Karthadon

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    Character Information

    • Full Name: Shamas Gishkim

    • Race: Eronidas

    • Age: 27

    • Sex: Male

    • Gender: Male

    • Sexuality: idk bruh

    • Eye Color: Sapphire Blue
    Core Concept

    • Shamas is a serious man, both in conversation and in regards to his work. He does not joke around much nor involve himself with things that do not seem of much importance to him. He will make exceptions for family gatherings or events where he is required to make attendance, as what is expected of him. He is a bit introverted, and will likely be seen standing in the corner having a drink as opposed to talking to strangers at a party or festival.

    • Like his family, he lives by the Ra’ah.
    Proficiency Information

    • Strength Training +10

    • Fist Combat +15 (+5 Eronidas)

    • Construction art +15 (+10 hobby)

    • Metallurgy Point-buy +6

    • Linguistic Point-buy +6

    • Engineering Point-buy (Honed Skill: free)
    • 13 unspent points
    Physical Stat: 37

    Ability Information


    Point-buy

    • Metallurgy:
      • Utility

      • Iron Family
    • Linguistic:
      • Altalar

      • Sulvaley
    • Engineering: Steamtech Branch
      • Pack One: Environment

    • Eronidas Racials:
      • Skin Purge 1

      • Brawn Power 1

      • Brawn Power 2

      • Pure Body 2

      • Honed Skill 1

      • Home Upgrade 1
    Languages

    • Common (Free)

    • Vasar (Parent)

    • Sulvaley (Point-buy)

    • Altalar (Point-buy)
    Appearance Information

    • Was a 6’8 eronidas with teal skin and deep sapphire blue eyes. He was muscular but not bulky, having a slightly more slender frame than a barbarian. He had dirty blonde hair.
    Life Story

    • He is the second child to Hadad and Kal Gishkim in Merredweg.

    • He spent his adolescence being educated and trained in Engineering, tinkering and building various mechanical devices. As a child, he found interest in languages of other people, and made it a point to begin learning some of them, Sulvaley and Altalar.

    • Becoming an adult, Shamas would be known for producing many mechanical devices, his specialty being heaters and water boilers. He is talented with repairing technological devices.

    • Several of his family members being deployed to Regalia after the vampire crisis, Shamas decided to join them, heading the Sipir Order of Engineers with his brother Srak
     
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  2. Yurs

    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
  3. Yurs

    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Looks good for the most part, there's just one thing that needs to be clarified before I can approve:
    • You currently have 37 spent core points, with 13 remaining unaccounted for. Please clarify in your proficiency section whether you'd like these 13 points to stay unspent for IC learning or invested into a proficiency.
    Go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary edits. Thank you!
     
  4. Karthadon

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    @Yurs Fixed. Thank you!
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Looks great!

    APPROVED
     
  6. Karthadon

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    @Yurs Can you reject this sheet please? I have no desire to play this character unfortunately. Thank you so much!
     
  7. Yurs

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    Gotcha! Please let me know if you'd like to unshelf this character later, I'll go ahead and re-review from there.
     

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