〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████████ 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 || THEME || VOICE CLAIM || 〚════⚔════〛 "Could be the wedding coming up. Or you need therapy." 〚════⚔════〛 〚════⚔════〛Full Name | Seydou Kassambara Nicknames | Sey, San'dora Titles | Honorable Race | Songaskian Age | 43 Physical Age | Early Twenties Birthday | February 27th, 268 AC Zodiac | Pisces Sex | Male Pronouns | He/Him Eye Color | Amber [Songaskian Default] 〚════⚔════〛Religion | > Seydou is semi-devout to Mussaktu. Since his arrival in Regalia it has grown ever stronger, but he would not consider himself a practicing worshipper.Character Concept | > Seydou is a blacksmith and ex-military soldier for the Songaskian Masaya. He has a smartass personality, and like his family, has a loyalty to the Masaya. 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████ 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 Strength: 7 Bruiser Stance - Free Bruiser Flurry Pack Bruiser Parry Pack Bruiser Agony Pack Bruiser Feint Pack Bruiser Rampage Pack Steady Body Pack - Racial Unarmed Expert Pack - Racial Diving Tackle Pack Force Toss Constitution: 6 Rage Counter Pack Debuff Endurance Pack Interception Pack Dexterity: 0 Arcane: 1 Sinistral Rage Pack Charisma: 0 Faith: 0 〚════⚔════〛 Sofawaati Form Armor Summon Subjugation Immune Sofaal Common 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████ [PLACEHOLDER] ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████ 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 〚════⚔════〛⚔ | Seydou is a mundane Songaskian. ⚔ | Seydou has a build closest to powerlifters or blacksmiths. Being built with muscle but under a thin layer of fat. 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████████ 〚 ⚔ ┇ ══════════════════════ - ‹ •◦ ❖ ◦• › - ══════════════════════ ┇⚔ 〛 〚════⚔════〛 ⚔ | Seydou was born as a middle child in the city of Korbamakora. As a child he showed a love for crafting items, and picking on people. ⚔ | As a teen Seydou apprenticed under blacksmiths to learn more about the trade he began to love. ⚔ | When he grew to 22 he enlisted as a smith in the Masayan military but never saw the front lines. Though he served in both wars and civil war. ⚔ | After the civil war he moved to Regalia, in search of his younger brother. Spoiler: The Long Version Seydou was born with three brothers in the city of Korbamakora. As the middle child he didn’t have much attention paid to him, because of that he’d always get up to no good, including picking on his younger brother’s friend for fun. He also enjoyed making and crafting things in any way he could. As he got into his teens he decided he wanted to learn the proper way to begin making these things, so he started learning more about smithing and asking around about apprenticeships hoping to eventually find someone willing to take him in to pass on their trade. As Seydou got older, he got better at crafting and eventually found an apprenticeship under a blacksmith in order to further expand his knowledge of these things. As he grew and the First Songaskia War came around and, he enlisted at the age of 22 as a support role to smith the weapons and armor needed for the war. As such, he was trained as a regular soldier but maintained his status behind the front lines, never really seeing much combat. After both wars ended, Seydou continued making armor and weaponry for the military until he was 39 during the Civil War. After the war he was slowly realizing he was unable to find work, at the age of 40 he decided to follow after his younger brother to a city called Regalia.
Here is my review: The backstory is lacking some crucial details. Where was he born? When? The story goes from him as a child to a soldier to modern day. Was he a soldier for 40 years? Why did he leave? What else did he do? Tag me with @AlphaInsomnia once you have made the edits.
@AlphaInsomnia Hey! Last update I'm gonna do for a while. But I wanted to give my character wall climb 3 cause of guard work to make chases more interesting. I pulled 4 points from Shielding, put 1 into Spear, and then 3 into Roguery. Changes are marked in Red!
Approved. Try not to make these changes so soon after previous edits. It makes it seem like you may be trying to edit proficiencies to gain an advantage over others.
Technically, you can keep them there if you're not gaining any abilities from them, I had just assumed that you put them there with no buy. You can put them back if you'd like, otherwise approved.
