Approved Sheet Seishan Wei

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  1. Bookwormpower

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    • Full Name | Suijin Seishan Wei
      • Courtesy Name | Seishan Wei
      • Nicknames | Sei
    • Race | Sihai, Beian Kingdom
    • Age | 26
    • Sex | Female
    • Gender | Female
    • Sexuality | Bisexual
    • Eye Color | Brown
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    • Seishan worships the Loong Dragons from Dexai, the faith of her home, and is devout.
    • Seishan is a curious sort of person, with a love for her culture and her former home. She writes poetry, and prefers the pen over the sword.
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    • Strength | 0
    • Constitution | 1
      • Heavy Shielding Pack
    • Wisdom | 7
      • Affliction Wisdom Pack
      • Dimenthist Wisdom Pack
      • Common Alchemy Pack
      • Morphing Alchemy Pack
      • Healing Alchemy Pack
    • Dexterity | 1
      • Pinning Pack
    • Magic | 2 (Primal)
      • Earth Magic Pack
      • Cosmic Magic Pack
    • Charisma | 3
      • East Language Pack
      • Ancient Speech Pack
      • Pet Husbandry Pack (Jong-li Nightingale)
    • Dragon Worship Ritualism (no cost involved)
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    • Common (Free)
    • Sihai (Wai'lan) (Parent)
    • East Language Pack
    • Ancient Speech Pack
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    • Seishan is entirely mundane.
    • Seishan is 5'4", with long black hair. She often keeps it either done up in a bun-like style, or down and flowing. She prefers traditional Sihai garb, though can also be seen in westernized outfits, usually red.
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    • Seishan was born the eldest of twins as Suijin, in the Beian Kingdom. Her mother stayed at home to care for her and her brother, and later her younger sister as well. Her father was a scribe, working for the local administrative government.
    • Suijin was raised to be polite, and proper. She developed into a mixture of her parents, with a love for both the arts and the more analytical work. She began writing poetry as a teenager.
    • As she grew older, her father paid for her to receive sword training, for both self defense and as a method of practiced meditation. She found comfort in this, and continues to practice. She still writes poetry, and studies other subjects fervently. Upon her 18th birthday, she chose the name Seishan after receiving her prophetic dream.
    • Seishan immigrated to Regalia after a family death. Unable to deal with the ghosts of their memory, she moved in hopes of learning more, and finding a new life.
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    @Bookwormpower After reviewing your application, one thing needs correction:
    • Please include a Vampiric form section.
    Once you have done this, tag me once more.
     
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    @Follower

    Is that okay? I'm not really sure what to do otherwise for a description.
     
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    @Bookwormpower Perfect, Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    Removed Fan Combat
    Bumped Sword Combat from 5 to 10
    Added Common Dynasty Racial Boost to Writing for a total of 15
    Changed Religion to be 0/10 due to her Vampirism

    That should be the changes! Thank you. @Follower
     
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    Bigger update:

    Removed all aspects of Vampirism due to being cured!
    Added Sorcery and Languages with Point Buy

    I'll be slowly adding these actual abilities ICly, but I wanted to apply for all to start so that I wasn't constantly pestering you.
    @Follower
     
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    @Follower Hi I updated to the new format, but also slashed a lot of stuff to warrant a re-review.
     
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    changed from diplo 3 to sage 3 before any progs start sorry,,,,,,, for ping,,,
     
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    Removed all aspects of sorcery bc i dont use it. TY ily
     
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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Howdy! App looks great, love the clean formatting. There's one thing that needs to be addressed before I can approve, but it's an easy fix:
    • You currently have 29 points listed as 'unspent', however there is an additional 3 points unaccounted for. Please go ahead and clarify if you would like these to be unspent as well (for a total of 32 uninvested points), or invested into another proficiency.
    Please go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary changes and we can continue the review from there. Thank you for your patience!
     
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    @Yurs edited to have 32 unspent! thanks for catching that ^-^
     
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    No problemo!

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    Added some points! no more 32 unspent lolol
     
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    Looks great! Very diverse spread of points

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    @Yurs Dragon Warden time :3c
    Updated Eye Color and all that fun stuff that needed to be updated for this.
     
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    @Yurs Removed Dragon Warden from Seishan! Not sure if I need a re-approval or not, but I've edited to reflect that.
     
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    @Yurs Hi I need a re-review! Updated to fit the new lore, and updated some stuff to make more sense for her character.
     
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    lolol jk sorry Yurs... I need a new reviewer, someone help me please
     
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    Claimed for review haha
     
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    @Bookwormpower Approving anyway because the only edit is extremely minor - 9 unspent not 10.
     
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    @sonofthestars I added Healing Alchemy, but no points were moved bc I already had 7 in wisdom. So. Yeah. Re-review needed? Maybe?
     
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    APPROVED!!
     
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