Rejected Sheet Seishan Hanyang

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  1. G0atfather

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    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Luyin Seishan Hanyang
    • Used Name: Seishan Hanyang
    • Race: War Dynasty Sihai
    • Age: 26
    • Gender: Male
    • Sexuality: Heterosexual
    • Eye Color: Brown
    • Alignment: Neutral Good
    • Personality Type: The Consul/Commander
    Core Concept
    • Despite having spent most of his life in Regalia, Seishan continues to be a strong worshiper of the Loong Dragons.
    • A tanky sihai warrior who has a rather laid back personality and fun-loving attitude when off duty.
    Proficiency Information
    Total Points: 40/50 Skill Points 10/10 Hobby Points
    • 15 Two-handed Blunt Combat (+15 Skill Points)
    • 10 Strength Training (+10 Skill Points)
    • 5 Unarmed Combat (+5 Skill Points)
    • 5 Perception Training (+5 Skill Points)
    • 5 Hunting Art (+5 Hobby Points)
    • 10 Brewing Art (+5 Hobby Points +5 Skill Points)
    Body Shape

    • 15 Two-Handed Blunt Combat + 10 Strength Training + 5 Unarmed Combat = 30
    Ability Information

    Racial Abilities
    • Sihai Racials | 7 Abilities
    Languages
    • Common
    • Wa’an
    Appearance Information
    • Seishan does not have any mutations or abnormalities about his appearance
    • Seishan is a large man, standing at six feet and three feet tall (190.5 cm) and being very strong with a strongman body shape and built body fat. He has black hair that is often tied back into a bun or ponytail, but is shaved into patterns on the side of his head. He is lightly tanned.

    Life Story
    • Born in Dexai to the Hanyang family, who were close friends with the Xian family. The two families eventually migrated to Regalia after hearing of the empire’s prosperity. He grew up on the crown isle and was raised closely with Liushu Xian. The two were nearly inseparable as children and were best friends.

    • Seishan’s father was a warrior and began teaching his son the basics of military theory and combat from a young age. When Seishan turned 14, he attended the Regalian Marshal academy, where he learned to be a front line commander. Seishan also developed his knowledge of combat further during this time.

    • After his training, Seishan married Liushu, who took on his last name. After their marriage, Liushu went on to study at the Regalian Finance Academy while Seishan worked in the military.

    • When the two were both done with their schooling, they settled into life in Regalia fully.
    Progression Information
    • Level 2 Warrior (Forced)
    • Level 1 General
     
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    #1 G0atfather, Aug 10, 2021
    Last edited: Jan 11, 2022
  2. Mollymock

    Mollymock The Verdant Preacher Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Hey there! Claiming this app for review. Let's get started.

    Unfortunately, this name is not lore compliant with Sihai names, and seems to be instead lifted from IRL Japanese. I ask that you read over the Sihai page, and look towards the naming customs and come up with something from there.

    Make this edit, tag me and we should be good to go.
     
  3. G0atfather

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    changes made
     
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    @Mollymock Updated Yumieku to the new format and redid his proficiencies after removing schooling.
     
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  7. G0atfather

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    @Mollymock In need of a Re-review please!

    Changes made in Orange
    • Changed name to match what I've been using in game and to match the upcoming sihai update
    • removed voluism and moved his proficiencies around a bit.
      • Didn't see the need for 20 Two-handed blunt Combat, lowered it to 15
      • Replaced Mixology with Hunting Art, as Mixology serves the same purpose as Brewing art for Seishan
      • Left 10 points to add in later
    • Adjusted his faith to Loong Dragon worship as this is what he'll be sticking with upon the sihai update's release
    • Lowered his height by three inches due to no longer having Voluism
    • Swapped out names in his life story to match the new sihai naming customs and cleaned up the life story a bit.
    • Non-essential change: I modified his alignment to Neutral Good as opposed to Lawful Neutral.
     
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    Claimed for staff review!

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