Sakaido Thomasin "If I ignore the wrongdoings of what's happening around me it'd leave a bad taste in my mouth" Spoiler: “Appearance” Basic Information -Full name | Cyair Sakaido Thomasin -Nickname(s) Sakai, Kai, Sai (short for Cyair) -Age | 25 -Gender | Male -Race | Ailor Culture: Breizh -Sexuality | Straight -Weapon | LongSword Spoiler: Weapon Visual Skill Information Total Points |30 points (+10 Hobby Points) - Blade Combat Skill +10 (Proficiency Points) - Athletics +15 (Proficiency Points) - Unarmed combat +5 (Proficiency Points) - Dancing Arts +5 (Hobby Points) - Culinary Arts +5 (Hobby Points) Body Shape -Physical Stat |Ailor: 25 ( +10 From Blade Combat +7.5 from Athletics +2.5 From dancing arts +5 from Unarmed Combat) -Body Shape | Toned -Body Fat | Low Languages -Picaron language -Common Visual Information -Eye Color | Very Dark Brown -Hair Color | Jet Black -Hair Style | Medium Messy -Skin Color | White -Clothing | Long black overcoat/jacket that he likes to leave open and underneath he wears a blue shirt with a small white scarf around him tucked under the coat in the back. He also has dark-colored pants and a brown belt that connects to a brown strap that slings to his scabbard -Height | 5'11 Personality and Abilities Option Two | The Core List Alignment | Neutral Good Personality Type | Logician (INTP-A / INTP-T) Personality Description | This means Sakai is someone who looks at everything around him and tries to make a logical analysis of his own situation based on his experiences and what is happening. However, he is also one to follow his feelings and to joke around when he feels its safe or he's feeling cocky. Character's Religion | Muz'have (2/10) Quirks | Despite basing his actions on his experiences and situations, he acts and does things without thinking too far ahead as doing this on a normal bases tires him out so he goes with the easier non-thinking options. He is also always found to be looking for something to do, he isn't really content being by himself. Additional Skills | He's a pretty good survivalist, being able to survive alone in the woods if needed. Life Story Spoiler: Life Story Cyair was born on the far North island of Kintyr within the Regalian Archipelago where he lived with his mother and father, Theodtyr and Tristanne. Cyair’s father was a mercenary, while his mother would forage and sell anything she found that seemed of worth. Though Cyair’s parents were very caring, they struggled to keep a roof over their heads, as well as food on the table. Since they did not have much money, Cyair’s father would tell him many stories he heard or made up, filling his mind with imagination to keep Cyair entertained. They also taught him Picaron and common in the house as it was the language mostly spoken by the Briezh culture Throughout the years, his parents struggled even more with their finances, skipping meals some days in order for Cyair to be able to eat. One day, Cyair’s parents made the decision to try and give him a better life, stowing him away on a ship to Regalia, telling him he would be better off without them. They packed him a bag with a small amount of food as well as a dagger, for protection. Though Cyair did not want to leave his parents, he knew that there was no way for him to stay with how they forced him onto the ship at the last second. Cyair arrived in Regalia hungry, dirty, and exhausted, not knowing anyone or where to go. Cyair tiredly walked the streets of Regalia until he stumbled upon a market, he became overwhelmed by the smells of the foods he’d set his eyes upon on a tray of fresh bread. Cyair looked through his bag looking for even a since coin, but to no avail. While consumed in his thoughts, he noticed a young boy, around his age, grabbing the freshly made bread, paying the baker and taking a bite. The boy then glanced at Cyair, looking him up and down seeing Cyair’s matted hair and dirty clothes. The boy broke off a small piece of the bread offering it to Cyair, with a small smile Cyair took it thanking the boy. The boy later introduced himself as Ramel Xerva, who was visiting family with his father in Regalia. Cyair introduced himself, leaving out his last name, saying he was forced here by his parents since they could not support him. Ramel then looked at Cyair asking if he would like to join him and his father which Cyair quickly accepted. When Ramel’s father laid his eyes upon the almost starved boy in front of him, he quickly took action, readying a bath and sending Ramel to find a pair of clothing for the young boy. At dinner Cyair described where he was from and why he was in Regalia. Ramel’s father looked at the boy sadly and told Cyair he was welcome to stay the night. Ramel smiled at Cyair, causing him to accept the offer. Later that night Cyair retold some of the stories his father told him when he was younger, Ramel was amazed at the stories and how they were the best stories he had ever heard. The next day Ramel begged his father to allow Cyair to join them back home, which his father agreed with a small smile to Cyair. Once the trio arrived back to Ramel’s home country, he was given a new name to erase his past and welcome him to a new home. Sakaido, was the name he was given, after an old family friend who was beloved by Ramel’s family. Cyair and Ramel, being raised as brothers, spent almost all their time together. Both desired to help and protect people who couldn’t do it themselves, promising each other one day they would fight side by side. With both Cyair and Ramel grown, they have decided to travel back to their first meeting place, Regalia, seeking jobs after hearing of the recent attacks happening around Regalia. Cyair has always desired to be strong, and make his own story rather than living in anothers. Believing that as long as he has his brother, he can do anything.
Hi, Sunshine! Not staff, but I thought I'd give you a quick peer review! You should also specify what culture he is here. You can find a list of ailor cultures here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Ailor#History_.26_Society You may want to include the calculation for how you got 26 Physical Stat for your reviewer as well. You can't have the sculpted Body Shape without investing +5 points in Body Care Training. You should add a vague region for where Sakaido is from in his backstory matching with his culture. Hope you get approved soon!
Thank you to @BiBiBirdie for getting this started! This character's name feels rather eastern for a character from Breizh. You might want to keep this name as an alais, whilst having a more traditional Breizh birthname. The nature of their naming customs can be found here! All points invested in Unarmed Combat Skill constitutes towards Physical Stat. Additionally, only round up your total Physical Stat value, rather than the individual numbers. The Breizh people speak the Picaron language primarily. As your character is Breizh, you might want to include this language here. Please give a small description of the type of clothing to accompany the image reference. There's a handful of spelling mistakes, and some strange ordering of things in this life story. I'd reccomend that you comb through this for mistakes and iron them out, and keep everything in chronological order. Please make these edits in Purple @supersonicxl, and tag me when they're complete!
I am working on it I've just been really sick the last week and haven't feel motivated because of it.
Although your total is correct, your calculation is a little off. You would gain 2.5 from Dancing Arts, and the full investment of 5 from Unarmed Combat Skill. Make this edit in Purple, and tag me when complete @supersonicxl!
