Basic Info: Name: Saffron Michiko Age: 31 Race: Half-Varran, Half-Ailor Preferred Weapon: Greataxe Skill Info: Total Points: 36 (+10 hobby) (+10 talent) +15 Greataxe Combat +9 Metallurgy Science +12 Sorcery 2 Chaos Sorcery Abilities + 2 Chaos Sorcery Aesthetics 2 Elemental Sorcery Abilities +2 Elemental Sorcery Aesthetics Talent Proficiencies: +5 Conning Rogue +5 Stealth Rogue Hobby Proficiencies: +10 Dance Art Body Stats Physical Stat- 35 (Calc: +15 Great Axe Combat, +4.5 Metallurgy Arts, +5 Dance Art, +10 Bolven Lineage) Body Shape: Athletic Body Fat: Average Languages Common, Khanehi Spells Chaos Sorcery: - Stay Put/ Can't Hold Me Back (ability) - Who Needs Skill (ability) - Rearrange (aesthetic) - Useless (aesthetic) Elemental Sorcery: - Elemental Branding [Magma] (ability) - Elemental Intercept (ability) - Elemental Influence [Ice] (aesthetic) - Primal Design Visual Info Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Orange Hair Style: Messy & short Skin Color: Light pink Height: 6' Clothing: Tank tops and loose fitting pants Personality Alignment: Chaotic Good Character Personality Type: Prankster Religion: The Draoidh Feya- (5/10) Backstory: Saffron was born during a bit of a rough patch in his parents life. His mother was Varran and his father was Damascus the II, an Ailor of the Bolven lineage who worked in the cities militia , which was unfortunately where the problem lie. His fathers family strongly disapproved of the relationship between the two and it resulted in the couple being looked down upon by the town in which they lived. One night, an intruder armed with a dagger snuck into they're home in an attempt to murder his mother. Luckily, Damascus had returned from his nightly patrol in time to take down and bind the intruder in an attempt to apprehend him. It was discovered that a member of Damascus' family, his uncle, had sent the order to have his wife killed. He was filled with so much rage that he snuck up into his uncle's residence, and killed him in his sleep that same night. Knowing full well that his actions would have severe consequences, he packed as many rations as him and his wife could carry and they set off into the surrounding wilderness to find a new life. By morning, the entire community was made aware of Damascus' treason and the royal guard was quickly dispatched to bring them both to justice. Many months passed as the couple continued to flee from place to place, avoiding any run-ins with the guards that were on hot on their trail. During this time, they ended up giving birth to a child they decided to name Saffron, after the highly valued spice that was popular throughout the realm. After being chased after for almost an entire year, the family was able to find refuge in a hidden town on the edge of the sea. The royal guard were not able to track them to their new home, and from there the search had ceased. Saffron was raised studying the art of metal working and fishing, while also helping to provide for his family. As the years went on, Saffron began to delve deeper into learning sorcery and magic from the towns librarian Elanor. She taught him the magic of Chaos, and everyday he came closer and closer to mastering his newfound abilities. As well as magic, she practiced the ways of the Draiodh Feya which she also taught to Saffron in between honing his magical prowess. Though we wasn't a firm believer in the religion, it gave him something to focus on besides the monotony of daily life. At age 28, he took once last look at this town and his parents which he loved oh so much, and took a ferry across the ocean into unknown territory. After a week long trip over some testy waters and learning some new dance moves from the crew, Saffron arrived in Regalia to start his brand new life. He took his newly made great-axe, 500 regals, and a pair of his finest dancing shoes as he began scouting the town for suitable real estate. However, there weren't many homes available for rent nor did he know anybody in town. In order to make some more money, he began dancing on the street for tips and other donations which included the occasional loaf of bread and half-eaten fruits. Soon enough, he was approached by another traveler who showed him around the city a bit. From then on, Saffron has stuck with his new companion in hopes to finally live in a house and sleep on an actual bed, rather than the streets of Regalia.
Hey there! Claiming this app for review. Let's get started. Please include what racial mix your character is. Half-Varran and Half what else? Please include a Physical Stat Calculation. This is a really strange faith for a seeming Half Varran Half Ailor to have adopted. Please include how devoted they are out of ten and a sentence or two justifying their faith. Your character's parents shouldn't be anyone noteworthy without a special character permission. I reccomend you remove the term "high ranking". Make these edits in Purple and tag me when complete!
@Mollymock I've finished most of the edits requested, but im not sure how to do the physical stat calculation. Could you possibly tell me how?
https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Physical_Stat_Calculation Include the calcualtion how you came to your Physical Stat value. So 15 (from Great Axe Combat) + 4.5 (from Metallurgy Arts) and so on and so forth. Keep in mind Physical Stat is always rounded up, and should always be a whole number.
@Mollymock Thank you very much! I think I've calculated it correctly, is there anything else that needs to be fixed besides that?
