Spoiler: Art By gloomybrd By @Ghirko Pinterest | Music Character Information⛧Full Name: Riviel Laralta ⛧ Race: Mesmer Kathar ⛧ Age: 135 ⛧ Gender: Female ⛧ Eye Color: Pale pink ⛧ Occult: Void Mage ⛧ Personality Type: ESTP-A The Entrepreneur ⛧ Voice claim: Taylor MomsenCore Concept⛧ An intelligent, yet impulsive, Kathar trying to find her way in the world ⛧ Riviel follows a void sect worshiping a mixture of Eloblina and Inthalis, gathering arcane knowledge to keep it from dangerous hands while empowering themselves. Inventory Information A pouch of regals - 40 regals Several rings of different metals - 5-35 regals each A wooden opium pipe - 10 regals A pouch of opium - 15 regals A notebook with various mundane notes written in Katharic - 10 regals An ornate dark oak wand - 50 regals Appearance InformationAppearance ⛧ Eye Color: Pale pink ⛧ Hair Color: Pure White ⛧ Hair Style: long and wavy ⛧ Skin Color: Very pale pink, almost white ⛧ Clothing: Kathar robes or functional combat wear ⛧ Height: 6'5 ⛧ Body Shape: Athletic, Moderate Body Fat Mutations and Abnormal Traits: ⛧ Riviel has glowing light red tattoos all over her body, being written in void script ⛧ Riviel has several piercings: ⛧ Ear piercings ⛧ Septum piercing ⛧ Labret Piercing ⛧ Arcade (Eyebrow) Piercing ⛧ Belly button piercing⛧ She has a forked tongue ⛧ Mutations: ⛧Black blood and tears Expanded Appearance Information Spoiler Riviel has a well pronounced jaw line with full lips and a small nose. Her eyes are about average in size, and rather sharp. Her cheekbones are high and well pronounced, her cheeks themselves not being full. Her forehead is small, often covered up by her hair. She has thin, hard-to-see eyebrows, partially due to them being stark white against her porcelain palor. her jawline is somewhat wide, though comes to a soft point at her chin. Her mouth has very full lips, albeit not very wide, giving almost a pout to them, though not quite. From her eyes, down to the height of her nostrils, she has pink glowing void-script tattoo's. From her eyes up her forehead, she has the same. Each are written in three columns of individual symbols. From her bottom lip, down to her chin, she has two columns of similar void script tattoo's. More often than not, Riviel wears dark eyeliner and dark red or purple lipstick. Riviel has long, white hair. Her hair when not put up goes down to past her butt, and is noticeably wavy, but not curly. Often she will put up her hair for ease and to show off the tattoo's on her back. She likes to adorn her hair with golden rings, or beads. Rivi has pinkish-red eyes. Riviel has an hourglass figure, being rather shapely and elegant in her form. Both her hips and chest are exaggerated and on the larger size, while her waist is thin. Her shoulder's are somewhat wide. Her void script tattoo's line her entire body, a large portion on her upper chest, then more directly under her breasts, though the middle of her stomach down to her bellybutton are not tattoo'd. Under her bellybutton the two sides of void script tattoo's come together down to her legs, where they wrap around the top of both her thighs. Then the outside of her thighs are tattoo'd down to her knees, though the inner thigh, aside from the top, is untattoo'd. On her arms, her upper arm is wrapped in void script tattoo's, though most of her forearm is bare, save for just above her wrist and her wrist. Her hands are not tattoo'd, however she does possess sharp, well manicured, void claws. These claws are black in color. On her back, her shoulder blades are tattoo'd, though the middle of her back is left bare. The two sides of tattoo's come together in a single curve of void script lettering, before leaving the small of her back untattoo'd. Her hips, going down to her thighs are tattoo'd. Riviel's skin is alabastor pale and in most places, soft to the touch. Her hands, however, are rather rough due to years of fighting. Similarly, her feet are rather rough as well. Riviel wears a variety of colors, though her favorite colors are black, red, and pink. She tends to wear revealing clothing, as is common for Kathar and likes skirts that leave slits to show off her legs, though also so that it is easier to fight should she need to. Otherwise, she does like to wear pants for the sake of fighting, even if she prefers skirts. She also likes to show off her tattoo's, often leaving her arms uncovered. On particularly sunny days, Riviel will wear sunglasses as the sun hurts her eyes, though she tries to avoid daylight whenever possible. Riviel has a sultry tone to her voice, being in the lower end of a siprano voice, though with a good range when she is singing. Typically she speaks somewhat quickly, though not to the point of being at all difficult to understand. Proficiency Information⛧ Strength: 0 ⛧ Constitution: 0 ⛧ Wisdom: 4 ⛧ Scholarly Point Buy ⛧ Affliction Wisdom Pack⛧ Arcana Shift Pack ⛧ Arcana Bolt Pack ⛧ Arcana Protect Pack⛧ Dexterity: 0 ⛧ Magic: 7 [Void Mage] ⛧ Radiant Push ⛧ Radiant Feather ⛧ Radiant Shield ⛧ Sinistral Leap ⛧ Sinistral Execute ⛧ Sinistral Break ⛧ Chem Revive⛧ Charisma: 1 ⛧ West Linguist Pack⛧ Faith: 0 ⛧ Arcane Invocation Pack [Kathar] ⛧ Body Invocation Pack [Kathar]Languages ⛧ Common (9/10) ⛧ Katharic (10/10) ⛧ Altalar (8/10) ⛧ Sulvaley (6/10) ⛧Agasi (6/10) ⛧Pidato (4/10) ⛧ Vasar (2/10) Life Story ⛧ Riviel's mother was a member of a Kathar Cabal. Due to this, Riviel was raised as a member of the cabal and indoctrinated into it's practices and beliefs. From an early age she was taught sorcery and arcanology. ⛧ Riviel also learned how to fight with Daggers at this age, utilizing her ability to summon them at will in combat, though this she only learned the basics of. She continued, throughout her childhood and early adulthood, to learn about magic, and the world at large. Her studies mostly focused on the arcane and the different dimensions, but also on society and politics. Not to the point of her knowing how to be a politician, but enough that she knew what was going on in the world. ⛧ Her training and work with the cabal lasted until she was 100, when she had a major falling out with the leadership due to the suppressive nature of it, where Riviel would have preferred freedom. For this, she left the cabal on bad terms, and started traveling the world with a sense of adventure. During her adventure, she learned artificer skills, primarily using alchemy. ⛧ Riviel made her way to Regalia several times, taking part in different events and learning more about the world through exposure. She would leave, travel, but tended to return to the large city. She made friends, particularly a trio of Allar, and was there during the vampire insurrection. During this event, she experienced the loss of her friends, and abandonment, causing her to leave the city when she was able, and become more guarded for some time. She eventually returned, however, as she always did...
And now, I am in need of a review once again. If possible, could the thread also be cleaned up? So many replies from the years...
Here's my review: Character Information -Please include an eye color for Riviel. Core Concept -Specify whether Reviel follows a religion, or if she's agnostic. Proficiency Information -You only have two points invested into your wisdom; however, your point spread comes out to be 14 evenly. Please adjust your wisdom to reflect you have 3 points invested. Life Story -Please make mention of where Riviel learned her artificer skills. Was it during her training in the Cabal or after? Please make the above changes, and tag me when your finished or if you have any questions!