Ritari-maza Suulan

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    」《 BASIC INFORMATION || Required
    Full Name: Ritari-Maza Suulan
    [ Altalar Name: TBA ]
    [ Nickname(s): Rita, Ri ]
    Age: 34 years old
    [ Birthday: March 13th 243 AC ]
    Gender: Biologically Female, goes by either gender depending on the day.
    Race: Altalar - Suvial - Vadyalocaï
    Eye Color: Soft Pink
    」《 CORE CONCEPT || Required
    Ritari is a smith and a scholar, defined by past betrayals and suffering. Through demonics and metallurgy, they have forged themself a new heart fit to handle the violence they intend to bring. Due to such a past, they do find themselves struggling with religion itself but very loosely follows Estelsoor.
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    」《 SKILL INFORMATION || Required
    Total Points | 14 Proficiency Points
    Strength: 0
    Constitution: 2

    Crafting
    Metallurgy
    Training
    Physique Pack
    Wisdom: 0
    Dexterity: 1

    Roguery
    Parkour Pack
    Magic: 7
    Control
    Thanhicism (Greater)
    Illusionism (Greater)
    Spellsword (Greater)
    Casting
    Enchanting
    Mimicry

    Specials -
    Dressage Cleanse, Sanctum Vessel, Self Control, Health Call, Life Wall, Memory Break, Arcane Sight, Arcane Wardrobe, Metal Element, Shadow Element, Thanhic Therapy, Wraithwalking, Guardians, Echoes of the Past, Time Cleanse,
    Charisma: 4
    Theurgy
    Free -
    Bidden
    Hosted
    Vested
    Anchored
    Bought -
    Spirit Weapon
    Spirit Enfeeblement
    Spirit Hexlord
    Spirit Parasite

    Languages | 3 Total languages.
    [ Common: Upbringing (Fluent) ]
    [ Suvial: Upbringing (Fluent) ]
    [ Altalar: Learned (Fluent) ]

    」《 SPECIAL TRAITS || Required

    Racials | Suvial
    [ Base: Enemy Linkproof ]
    Specials| Ageless, Arcane Mastery, Elder Voice, Fireform, Firerage, Magic Coalescence, Spirit Coalescence, Void-Out Revenge, Reject Fanatisicim, Destroy Barbarism, Fiery Lifebreath, Karamat Masters, Karamat Expulsion

    」《 ANCHORED SPIRIT|| Optional

    Ritari's Attendant is a Demon of Morrlond, grafted to them after its last host died. Orias, as it is called, takes the form of a swirling mass of bloody water and darkness that thieves the vague appearance of a Nelfin, cut by horns and obscured by a veil over its ever-changing face. When incorporeal, it skips a step, and simply renders itself as Ritari’s horned, rippling shadow, visible by a set of violent red eyes. Ritari has named it Shyamal on several occasions, but in referendum to its old master it has kept Orias. It ever-jabs Ritari toward a sense of order, but has its more horrible urges curbed by clear, Suvial control.
    Wisdom: 2
    Artificier - Dark Metal
    Communicator Pack
    Tracker Pack
    Constitution: 2
    Metallurgy
    Ironheart
    Magic: 4
    Illusionism (Greater)
    Materialism (Greater)
    Casting (Greater)
    Blessings
    Control
    Protection
    Breaking
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    」《 VISUAL INFORMATION || Required
    Abnormalities | Exposure to demons has left Ritari partially mutated, with hair a silvery white and their eyes a gleaming pink. They hide blackened claws and hands beneath gloves.
    General Appearance| Ritari is 5’6 with a dark brown skin tone and a look about them that seems designed to scowl. They’ve a rather soft body type, a more natural hourglass figure to them that makes them seem more approachable than they actually are. Notably, they wear their hair half-up half-down with a veil that flows down the long hair they have adorned with golden trinkets.
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    」《 LIFE STORY || Required
    [ Paragraph One | Childhood ]
    Ritari is a child born into wealth and happiness, having avoided the age of Voidouts and having so many siblings that responsibility did not come easy to them.
    Their family begins to go through money troubles by the time they are fourteen. They are too young to properly notice, though the gravitation of their father to the bottle brings them to worry.
    [ Paragraph Two | Young Adult ]
    Ritari finds an interest in binding demons, as is commonplace for their people. Their father shells out some dwindling coin to get them proper lessons in Karamatology, and it is here that they bind their first set of demons. Magic comes easy after that.
    Ritari’s parents begin to fall apart, though for business reasons they cannot split. It is here Ritari experiences their first injustice- they are cast from the house early for money reasons, sent to the streets of Avela to fend for themselves by seventeen. They become a smithy’s apprentice to get by, cutting upkeep costs by an ever-growing selection of demons.
    [ Paragraph Three | Adult ]
    Ritari experiences their second injustice as their smith mentor lets them graduate only by the fang, infecting them with Vampirism.
    By subconscious need or otherwise, Ritari flees to Regalia.
    [ Paragraph Four | Recent Years ]
    They work with Altalar for a time, Allorn Revanchists in private. Eventually, they are once again cast out when they are deemed not worthy of their time. They fall further. They find a Desprince's cadaver and a demon that once haunted it, capturing the monster by contract and binding. They are cured of Vampirism after that, but the second presence at their back is now here to stay.
     
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    tba section
     
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    @Lizmun |
    So I've decided to bring back my demon gal, I'd like a full re-review please.
     
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    Hey @Messtro Just make some mention of religion in your core concept you'll be set.
     
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