Shelved Character Riluaneth

Discussion in 'Character Sheets' started by HeyItzAPotato, Feb 16, 2021.

  1. HeyItzAPotato

    HeyItzAPotato rip me out the plastic Premium

    Joined:
    May 19, 2016
    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    147
    [​IMG]
    ╔═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╗
    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████

    [​IMG]
    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████
    ╚═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╝
    [ Theme ] [Theme 2] [Voice Claim]
    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]
    .·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.
    Full Name: Riluaneth
    | Nicknames: Rilu, Ghosty, Freak, Spectre
    | Previously: i̸̼̲̇̐͐͝͝ ̴̘̉̋͊ĉ̸̡̛͇̥̳͐ä̵̩͉̓n̶̠̎͌̆͘'̷̧͉͙̓̒̀̀̍ṫ̸̼̌̊͠ ̴̢̦̩̟̤̆̆r̸̮͍͍̈́̚͜͝e̶̗̟̩̯̩̾̑͊̀m̷̹̭͇̼̝̓͋͂̔e̶͓͔̣̦̪͒m̸̨̮̹̊̉̀b̷̛̬̬̯͑͆͝e̴̛͓̗̔̑̂̌r̴̢̛͕͚̐̎ͅ

    Race: Avanthar
    Affliction: Morvali
    Age: 58 (23 at the age of death)
    | Birthday: ẅ̷̥̩̹̟́̈́̈h̷̖̣͈̋͝ě̸̛̺̖͜n̴̡̢̤͎̟̅̇ ̸̐͜w̶͙̜̟͕͗͑̀̒a̵͔̩͕̟̍̀̉š̶̡̼͎̈́̇̐͘͜ ̷̘͍̱͎̓́̑i̸͕̗̮̐͘ ̵̻͉͌͊̐̀͝b̸̭̬͛̾̈́̔͛o̸̢̦̤̱͛̄̾̌ŕ̶̨̑̊͐n̵̛͎̘̟̝̾̈̍̇
    | Zodiac: Capricorn

    Gender: Male
    Eye Color: Blue
    [​IMG]
    [​IMG]

    .·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.
    Religion: Riluaneth finds himself drawn to the Bintaar Entities when it comes to worship. His past of Avanthar Estellianism has long vanished, and he has forgotten his old ways.

    Character Concept: A childish Morvali that died too young, and has to cope with the loss of his memories while also trying to survive.

    ╔═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╗
    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████
    [​IMG]
    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████
    ╚═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╝


    [​IMG]
    42/50 Age Points || 10 Hobby Points || Racial Boost Active
    [​IMG]
    (15) Bola Combat (10 Core + 5 Racial Boost)
    (10) Fist Combat
    (10) Perception Training
    (9) Linguistics
    (3) Roguery

    [​IMG]
    (6) Dancing Art
    (4) Wooden Art

    Physical Stat: (15 Bola Combat + 10 Fist Combat + 3 Dancing Art + 2 Wooden Art = ) 30
    [​IMG]
    [​IMG]
    .·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.
    [​IMG]
    AVANTHAR KIT - 7 Abilities

    [​IMG]
    - Echo Shade
    - Banshee Shade
    - Memory Feeding
    - Remember Death

    [​IMG]
    Rogue Gift 4

    [​IMG]
    Common (Free)
    Saan (Parental)
    Daendroque (Linguistics)
    Calem (Linguistics)
    Altalar (Linguistics)
    ╔═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╗
    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████
    [​IMG]
    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████
    ╚═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╝

    [​IMG]
    .·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.
    Riluaneth possesses no mutations or abnormal traits.

    Rilu is a 6'5" Avanthar. He has blue eyes, dark auburn hair, and a semi-muscular body build. His clothing consists of tribal-themed Avanthar wear and a few bone necklaces.

    BANSHEE SHADE
    Riluaneth becomes an almost transparent spectre. He sometimes appears angry or sad, and sometimes even with no face. His hair floats wildly and his clothes become a tattered mess. He floats around with occasional chains, but choses on average to not use them.

    ╔═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╗
    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████
    [​IMG]

    ████████████████████████████████████████████████████
    ╚═══════════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════════╝
    [​IMG]
    • Born in the Daen plains to two Avanthar within a tribe. He had two olders brothers and was a happy child growing up.
    • While growing up, Rilu found it difficult to speak to people. He learned different languages to accomadate, as well as being taught combat from his brothers who took on a mentor role for the teenage Avanthar.
    • Once an adult, Rilu decides to travel to Regalia. He made friends, and met a girl named Rohesia. He eventually asked for Rohesia's hand in marriage. The night before their wedding, Rohesia was possessed by an unknown force of sorts, and killed Rilu in his sleep by slitting his throat.
    • Unable to pass on peacefully, Rilu finds himself cursed as a Morvali, and unable to cope with the powers bestowed upon him. Although years have passed, he continues to roam and haunt the streets of Regalia, feasting on the memories of those who have such compassionate love to give.
    ╚═══════════════*.·:·.☽✧ ✦ ✧☾.·:·.*═══════════════╝
     
    • Powerful Powerful x 4
    • Winner Winner x 2
    #1 HeyItzAPotato, Feb 16, 2021
    Last edited: Jan 24, 2022
  2. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2012
    Messages:
    1,791
    Likes Received:
    2,137
    Hello! Claimed for review! Expect a review in the next 24 hours.
     
    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
  3. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2012
    Messages:
    1,791
    Likes Received:
    2,137
    @HeyItzAPotato Sorry for the delay! My school work roundhouse kicked me unexpectedly and I had to focus on that! Here is my review:


    Basic Information
    - No issues​
    Skill Information
    - No issues​
    Visual Information
    - No issues​
    Personality
    - No issues​
    Life story
    - No issues​

    Approved!
     
    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
  4. HeyItzAPotato

    HeyItzAPotato rip me out the plastic Premium

    Joined:
    May 19, 2016
    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    147
    @Lizmun Hi!! I made a few changes to my boy here after playing him for a hot minute.

    Aged him from 29 to 138 Though he still appears and acts as if he is 29.
    Upped him from 12 Unarmed to 20 Unarmed.
    Added Bola Combat with racial boost.
    Swapped Vocal Singing and Stealth Rogue
    Dropped one level of Lingustic Science

    Physical Stat is updated accordingly. All changes in blue!
     
    #4 HeyItzAPotato, Mar 3, 2021
    Last edited: Mar 6, 2021
  5. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2012
    Messages:
    1,791
    Likes Received:
    2,137
    @HeyItzAPotato The age up from 29 to 138 seems REALLY jarring, and with what you have provided so far I cannot in good faith approve it. I'd like you to address the following:
    - If Rilu died at around 29 (which I assume they did), what happened to the 109 years you added onto their age? Their backstory is REALLY short for somebody who is 138 years old. What did they do for the century after their death? Just roam aimlessly? Did anything at all interesting happen during that time? Do they acknowledge how much time has passed, or do they still act 29 because they consider themselves still that age? There's a lot of gaps with the drastic age up, and I'd like you to expand your life story to justify why you wanted to make them that old.
     
  6. HeyItzAPotato

    HeyItzAPotato rip me out the plastic Premium

    Joined:
    May 19, 2016
    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    147
    Knocked him down to 58 instead since I did too realize that 138 is kinda crazy. Fixed some backstory things as well. uwu

    @Lizmun
     
  7. HeyItzAPotato

    HeyItzAPotato rip me out the plastic Premium

    Joined:
    May 19, 2016
    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    147
    @Lizmun Bump! Just in case you missed this one. Very sorry for @ing you again.
     
  8. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2012
    Messages:
    1,791
    Likes Received:
    2,137
    @HeyItzAPotato I looked at it just forgot to respond like a dingus, thanks for the bump!

    It looks good! Approved.
     
    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
  9. HeyItzAPotato

    HeyItzAPotato rip me out the plastic Premium

    Joined:
    May 19, 2016
    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    147
    @Lizmun
    Did some prof update things! All in Red! <3
     
  10. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2012
    Messages:
    1,791
    Likes Received:
    2,137
    @HeyItzAPotato You are 2 points over the cap, and you get 10 free hobby points, not talent points.
     
  11. HeyItzAPotato

    HeyItzAPotato rip me out the plastic Premium

    Joined:
    May 19, 2016
    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    147
    @Lizmun Fixed it! Dropped two points from Fist Combat, and changed Talent to Hobby.
     
  12. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2012
    Messages:
    1,791
    Likes Received:
    2,137
    @HeyItzAPotato Alright! I am going to approve your current point spread, but I also want to let you know, assuming you are using your 10 free points on theatre arts, you still have 10 core points unused.
     
    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
  13. HeyItzAPotato

    HeyItzAPotato rip me out the plastic Premium

    Joined:
    May 19, 2016
    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    147
    @Lizmun ayooo I overhauled the boy completely. I am aware that Morvali don't need sheets, but he is a played character with a personality, so I decided to bring it back for the sake of my sanity.
     
  14. Yurs

    Yurs real life catgirl

    Joined:
    Jun 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,285
    Likes Received:
    163
    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
  15. Yurs

    Yurs real life catgirl

    Joined:
    Jun 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,285
    Likes Received:
    163
    APPROVED
     
    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice