Approved Sheet Remus Kessler

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  1. Koyote

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    Basic information
    Full name: Remus Kessler "The Farm Guardian" "Beast of Rage"
    Age
    : 47
    Race: Bolven Ailor

    Culture: Anglian
    Gender: Male
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Preferred Weapon: Crossbow
    Ambidextrous

    Inventory:
    Pouch of 24 Regals, Necklace of his parents jewels, Note in the language of Daen that reads "Only the pure may find true power. Clear thyself of all thoughts and ambitions, then reach for enlightenment."



    Skill Information:

    Total Points: 50 Core Points

    Core Proficiency's

    Arcanology +15(Core)
    -Artifact Knowledge, Essence Knowledge, Affliction Knowledge, Archblood Knowledge, Arken Knowledge.

    Light Ranged Combat +20 (Core)
    -Light Shot, -Evading Dash, -Marking Shot, -Pinning Fury, Rapid Shot.

    Shielding Combat + 9 (Core)
    -Heavy Shot Deflect, -Knocking Shot Deflect

    Linguistics + 6 (Core)
    -Kathar Altalar
    -Faraddi


    Points 50 - 20 - 15 - 9 -6=0 remaining points.


    Hobby Proficiency

    Writing Art +10

    Body Shape
    14.5

    Toned Body Shape

    Extreme Low Body Fat

    Languages


    Common (Free/first language. Fluent)
    Alt-Regalisch (Learned from mother and father. Fluent)
    Kathar Altalar (Studied himself, average.) +3
    Faraddi ( Studied himsel, average.) +6



    Werebeast curse(Inactive)
    Strength of the Ursarr
    Bunkering of the Cave Bear
    Growl of the Grizzly
    Stagger of the Sloth



    Zikiel Bloodline(Inactive)
    Common Kit

    Mutations:
    Lich Mastery
    Lich Mindward
    Lich Spiderweb
    Lich Frostwall
    Lich Horrorwall
    Lich Deathstorm
    Lich Reachwall
    Lich Faithwall
    Lich Speechwill
    Lich Wordwill




    Racial Abilities
    Body Morph 1
    Super Self 1
    Super Self 3



    Visual Information
    Eye Color: Dark Blue
    Hair Color: Dark brown
    Hair Length: Long
    Skin Color: White
    Height: 6'0
    Facial Appearance: Rough skin, boney.
    Body Appearance: The back of his body has slashes, claws and bite marks all over his back
    Clothing Preference: Comfortable casual clothes. Training Clothes. Robe wear.


    Personality: The Core List
    Character Alignment: Chaotic neutral - Remus will do what he needs for himself and those close to him regardless of the law.
    Character Personality: Logistician
    Character Religion: None





    Life story
    Early Era (Birth to Then)
    Remus Kessler, a man of terrifying strength and ability. A man so bold he'd stand in front of a bull's way. A man so bold he'd run towards a bear instead of away from it. A man so bold he'd face a group of wolfs and would not feel fear towards them, but cocky and confident in his own self that he'd think he'd take them all. But why would a man be this bold and confident? Why would this man be arrogant and foolish enough to run towards a bear? Why would a man face a pack of wolfs knowing he'll be surrounded? Well start reading.

    A baby had been born to a proud family of the Bolven lineage, an Ailor born in the Anglian region, one focused around a farm further from the inner region where forests are nearby. This baby who had shortly grown to be rather annoying in a sense that it cried for everything it wanted, and everything unpleasant. It cried because this little fella did not know what it was doing or where it was. After a few years, this baby grew up to quite the energetic child, one who were not afraid to talk with strangers and one who interacted with the farm more. So energetic to work in the farm, his parents let him try it out one day and see how it went. This energetic kid had went around in the farm, running and completing some small work on the field capable of a child, but he completed it so well that his parents decided to continue teaching him the work and got him started at this young age in strength training along with teaching him combat skills. His father who in this region were particularly strange in combat wielded a mace, one blunt weapon that this child Remus could not yet left but soon trained so that he could. Both his mother and father were supportive in teaching him how to crop, protect the crops, how to defend himself in some ancient out-fighting boxing, and when he were old enough along with having the strength, mace combat. Time.. Oh the time..

    Time passes by and little Remus who has trained greatly. The energetic boy had became quite the farmer as a teenager. The strength gained from his special training with his father, his lineage genetics and his energetic personality supported a superb growth. He did not overtrain but kept a solid training enough to the point where his high metabolism showed. His body as a teenager was nearly the best for his age. Though thoughts started coming to this boys mind as he would grow ever so boldy, but also cocky after his puberty had hit, which had sprouted his height greatly. As a teenager this one decided to focus on training over the farm. One day he went to his parents and decided he does not want to work in the farm, but with the strength he has and the strength he will obtain, he wants to protect the farm. His parents both agreed and Remus shortly went to the other farmers telling them of his goals and what he has accomplished so far. He told them of his goal to protect the farm and seeing as how no one had such a roll, they gave this boy a chance. Here begins his training and farm protecting schedule as he'd now focus on his ancient fighting and mace fighting. Remus who had an above average style in both the ancient style and mace combat had decided to go into town where many martial art schools were present in this Anglian region. Excited to see them, he immediately enters a school solely for archery where his interests only sparked for the idea of archery though he never had the time to find a teacher for it. Remus who had continued training and gaining a bit of strength had decided he needed to be able to hunt and hunt well as his weapon is a mace and his hands. Going back to his parents who both knew of hunting happily teached him the ways of hunting successfully with his weapon. A few years pass and he had finally completed his goal of hunting and protecting the farm as a young adult.


    Many years pass and the roll he had taken was praised upon by the farmers and workers around the farm. Remus as an adult though had grown quite bold knowing he were able to protect well, hunt well and saw how shredded his body were compared to the other farmers, but this is where his life changes for good. Upon a night stroll through the farm, Remus had seen something rather strange and creepy. Two eyes glared from the darkness of the forest directly at Remus before they sprinted towards him at speeds in which the man had never seen. Remus who had grown this rather confident and bold ego decided he would fight it, these pair of eyes that made their way into the farmlands still dark and hidden. He were not fast enough to unsheathe his mace but decided to punch right for the pair of eyes that immediately made it's way towards his leg until this beastly form, one that looked as if a wolf had morphed with a human towered over the man and clawed right at the back of his shoulder from where he threw a punch. A grunt released from Remus as he'd be clawed, sending another punch for the creature only to have realized it were no longer in front of him but behind him. The time he spent stunned by the claw were seconds enough for the beast to circle behind and begin an onslaught of bites and claws towards his back. Soon Remus having blood everywhere would have been bitten one last time on the back of his shoulder not knowing what had happened and blanking out shortly after. The day next Remus is found by a farmer and immediately calls for his father and another few farmers to take him to a nearby medic where they would proceed to treat Remus and his deep cuts/bites all over his back and arms. A day passes by and Remus wakes up only to cough out in memory of what happened, but this cough was rather nasty and almost sick. As the two days passed Remus would seem to have grown infected and sick in which their medics had stated it was because of his wounds. His parents deeply worried take him home with medicine, oils, herbs and molds to treat him. It would seem as if his sickness were getting worse. Remus who had been getting treated only felt as if he were getting worse, though noticed his appetite had grown. As time and time passes, Remus who had seemed to have been getting sicker, had been eating but it was not enough. Having this hunger that felt as if it would never be filled, having lashes of rage out, envisioning his attack over and over, he falls ever so slightly into these mixtures of emotions before he wakes up one day.. Blood over his mouth and hands.. his hunger filled to the stomach.. and the sickness.. gone. Happy to finally be whole again, he'd see the ones who had loved him and supported him the most had been butchered, dismembered, torn limb from limb and had multiple chunks of their body missing. There would be no words for how loud Remus screamed and fell into a rage.

    Remus many years later travelled to the land of Regalia, scars on him both physically and mentally, rage almost morphed into his face, had found his way to a land where many more experiences awaited him. The rage was not as much as it was from when he butchered his parents but he remained strong, bold and cocky after figuring a few things out with this beastly form of his.


    Recent Life

    Remus having joined only to leave the mercenary group, "The Ivory Company" found himself at a great loss and had been wondering off into the sewers and crookback. One day in the sewers, he found himself talking to a Zikiel sanguine and ended up being infected. Remus now seeks to further increase his knowledge and connections as a Zikiel Vampire.​





     
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  2. Antimreoir

    Antimreoir Forza dei Male Staff Member Lore1

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    Hello! I'll be picking this application for review, expect a response soon!
     
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    Antimreoir Forza dei Male Staff Member Lore1

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    Here's my review!

    Basic Information

    All good here!
    Skill Information
    Please note your 22 additional points as unspent, or invest them wherever you like.
    Bolven only get a single Lineage Boost, please only take one of Strength Training or Hunting Arts. However you have 10 Talent Points and 10 Hobby points, so you can just note that these are in use instead.
    Special Traits
    All good here!
    Visual Information
    All good here!
    Personality
    All good here!
    Life Story
    All good here!

    Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved!
     
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    @Antimreoir Finished, Removed the bolven boost on both since I have 10 points in each. Points are stated as to remaining unspent.
     
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    Remus got cured so made the curse Inactive
     
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    @Antimreoir Added in Heavy Ranged Combat, +4 points. (Student RP). Teacher = Ingemar of Rustwood.
     
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    @Antimreoir Reworked prof points. Added in the Zikiel bloodline and abilities. Reworked some abilities. Changed fonts. App is up for re-review.
     
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    Everything checks out, reapproved. @Koyote
     
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    @Antimreoir I made a mistake. Removed the points for warlash and transferred to Void Sorcery. Zikiel can only have 5 combat prof.
     
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    @Antimreoir changed warlash to light ranged combat.
     
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    @Antimreoir Removed Sorcery, added in light ranged and utility ranged after the curing. App is up for review.
     
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    Antimreoir Forza dei Male Staff Member Lore1

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    @Koyote Taking both Utility and Light Ranged is a little strange to me, as you cannot use both at the same time or on the same weapon, please change the Utility Ranged.
     
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    @Antimreoir Not only changed the utility to shielding, Remus is infected with the cratos bloodline. I'll rp his sickness for the next few days
     
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    @Koyote When being re-infected with Vampirism, you re-infect with the same bloodline you had before, with the exact same mutations as you selected prior. Please remove the mention of Cratos Vampirism.

    Also, these reviews are within 72 hours of each other, you cannot be re-infected with Vampirism or Werebeastism within 72 hours of curing.
     
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    @Antimreoir Made the requested changes and removed the Infection/cratos bloodline
     
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    Awesome, reapproved.
     

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