Basic Information Full Name: Rolim Yllayra A.K.A Razor Breeze Age: 24 Gender: Male Race: Half-Cielothar Sexuality: Pansexual Inventory: Pair of Cestus, walking stick, Silver amulet, Longbow Half-Cielothar Abilities Total Points: 40 (10 unspent) Core Group: 16 Points Fist Combat: 4 Stave Combat: 4 Light Ranged Combat: 8 Talent Proficiency: 10 Points Medical Training: 10 Hobby Proficencies: 15 Points Dancing Art: 10 (15) Vocal Art: 5 Body Shape Body Score: 20 Body Shape: Toned Body Fat: Average Linguistics Common: Free Altalar: Birth-Rite Sorcery & Archaeology Sorcery: 6 Points Light Mend 1 & 2 Archaeology: 3 Points Curing Knowledge Visual Information Eye Color: Cyan Hair Color: Originally Platinum Blond, dyed Sky Blue to give a more 'free' sense Hair Style: Long and Straight Skin Color: Light-Tan Clothing: Blue, red and black garments Height: 5"2 Personality How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness? Often with a happy tune and a bounce in his step. This could include shimmies, shakes, twists, bounces, and other forms of dance. Razor is often someone who holds a lot of positive energy and is unable to hold still when filled with joy, which tends to be his natural state How would your character respond to experiencing Fear? They will often try to identify the cause of the fear and rationalize it. If it is from a phobia, he will stay as far away as possible or fly into a battle frenzy if he can't escape, using whatever is near him to destroy or remove the phobia. How would your character respond to experiencing Stress? Often trying to hum a soothing tune and showing small, yet restless movement. This could include tapping feet, drumming fingers, chattering teeth, and leg bouncing. The movements become far more subtle as if trying to imitate his joyful mood to try and calm himself down. How does your character view Law and Authorities? He sees law as a necessity, rules that everyone should follow to the best of their ability to help keep the betterment of the people. Authority is often to be respected but not seen as a higher power. They are born of the earth, and they will return to it just like everyone else. How does your character feel about Races other than their own? With his philosophy of "We are born of the earth" he sees no reason to hate someone for what they are and will often treat strangers kindly; offering rations, healing, and treatment unless they have proven to be unsavory. How does your character feel about Religion for themselves and other faiths? Faith and religion are some of the most powerful things civilizations have. So they would be endlessly curious about other's faiths to figure out their reasoning and how to best befriend the individual or not offend them. How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world? He believes magic is the invisible force that binds the world. It is the invisible threads of fate that lead each person to their destiny and everyone can control magic, even if it's the smallest amount. To forsake magic is to forsake a natural part of yourself. How does your character feel towards their family? Where he loves them as much as any child would love their parents, he understands that his family's safety is no longer his responsibility when he left his village. He writes and often tries to send supplies and gifts to his parents, but he has absolute trust they don't need him as much as the world needs him. What is your character the proudest of about themselves? When he learned one of the strongest healing spells his village had to offer at such a young age. What motivates your character to move forward and better their life? The Eternal Strife and Pain that ravages the land. He will travel the world, healing the wounded and sick, seeking to achieve the impossible dream of "Peace." What is your character's biggest insecurity? His Phobias; such as spiders and heights. He understands the importance of arachnids, but their design and built sends chills along his spine as well as the knowledge of the potent poisons many of them have. What is your character's biggest fear? That despite all of his training, all of his magical prowess, all of his advantages and hopes of healing the world and making everyone's lives better; that he will be used to forever push chaos and suffering upon others around him. Life Story Razor Breeze, an unusual name for a child who was supposed to be born as a strong warrior who would one day prove to be a powerful person in the lands of Altalar. Born of a Cielothar Mother and a Qadir Father, The unlikely union had birthed a sickly, frail young child. Underweight and small, it was expected the poor half-breed would not survive his first quarter-life. However, his mother's love and Father's ingenuity persevered and allowed the child to not only live but thrive. Through his childhood, Razor was fond of dancing and singing, often known to never stop moving all throughout the village. He would greet the sun with dance and greet the moon with a song. It seemed he was a child with endless hope and a glimmering beacon of joy, even as he grew older. Upon his coming of age, he began training under his tribe; He learned how to hunt and treat certain wounds from the tribe and his father taught him how to defend himself with his hands and a staff. However, he didn't find his calling until he matured into a full-grown man that his mother and the shaman of his village began to train him in the art of magic. The shaman implored Razor to learn some offensive or defensive sorcery in order to help him defend himself, But his teachings from his mother and his desire not to harm anyone meant he lacked the ferocity to learn such spells. So, he focused his training on healing magic, and studying ways to cure diseases; both magical and not. A few years later, constantly hearing of the strife outside of his village, Razor decided to head off to help the world and do what he could to support those less fortunate. Even though his father wished for him to fight to help his village, both him and his mother knew their son wasn't a warrior, he was a healer. So, with their blessings, they allowed Razor to go off on his adventure, to heal what could not be healed.
Hello there, welcome to Massivecraft! I'll be claiming this application for staff review, expect a response shortly! @RazerBreeze
Alrighty, let's get down to this review! @RazerBreeze Razor Breeze is an incredibly peculiar name for an Elf of any kind to have, perhaps make this an alias and instead provide them with a more Elven name. You have spent 40 Skill Points and 10 Hobby Points, as you are provided 50 Skill Points and 10 Hobby Points (Hobby Points are only applicable in the Arts Proficiencies.) Please mark your 10 unspent Points as unused. Your Physical Stat would be 20, as your Racial Boost to Dancing Arts also counts towards this, and would be rounded to 8. How is their hair blue? Is it dyed? Please note their normal hair colour as well as the colour they have dyed it to. Please expand on each answer in your Personality section by two or three sentences, really elaborate on what things and situations illicit these sorts of feelings in your character! A very nice Life Story, it's great to see something so upbeat! Make the requested edits and tag me when you're done, and we'll get you approved!
