Basic Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list.Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Full Name: Ra'narin Age: Later Gender: Male Race: Rashaq Main Ambition: To eventually form his own pride Special Permission: Not applicable yet Basic Information (Expansion) Spoiler The following is not required when filling out your character application. You may use bullet points or paragraphs, and are welcome to add more or less information as you see fit. The information in this section will not be reviewed. Want to be extra helpful to your reviewer? Use the Spoiler feature to make the content hidden so readers can read it when they want to, or skip it! How did he arrive in regalia: Ra'narin arrived in regalia shortly after the bone horrors struck aloria. Lifestyle: He lives the typical life the the typical Rashaq. The Tribe live Secondary Life goals: Even if he fails to become a pride leader, he wants to make sure his clan is the strongest. Skill Information (Optional) Spoiler The following is optional when filling out your character application, though mandatory when registering a Special Permission, or when your character has been trained by one of the Military/Magic Schools. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information as simple and confined as possible. This information mostly pertains to combat/magic education and training to declare a skill level. School: The Hokage of the cat man ninja-village Level: NA Source: Evokai island life Visual Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Eye Color: Dark green Hair Color: Red Hair Style: Brushed back Skin Color: A deep tan Clothing: Normal browned pants, and a vest with as much blue cloth as he could possibly add. Height: 3'9 Weight: 67lb Body Build: Mesomorph Weapon of Choice: A broken walking staff with a dagger tied to the front. Visual Information (Expansion) Spoiler The following is not required when filling out your character application. You may use bullet points or paragraphs, and are welcome to add more or less information as you see fit. The information in this section will not be reviewed. Want to be extra helpful to your reviewer? Use the Spoiler feature to make the content hidden so readers can read it when they want to, or skip it! Describe the Character’s facial features, like the shapes of their eyes, mouth, ears, the size of their forehead, what kind of expression they usually carry, any freckles, scars etc, hair color, hair style and more. This description is purely for the head (and by extension neck) alone. Describe the Character’s body. Go into detail about height, weight, the color of their skin, the size of their bones and muscles, their amount of fat, any physical disabilities they may have, their amount of body hair if applicable and more. This description is purely for the body. Describe the Character’s fashion appearance and accessories. Talk about what kind of clothes they usually wear, preferred colors, what jewelry they have, weapons they carry on them or any item of note that they may always have on them. Describe the character’s voice. How do they speak? What is their typical tone and speed? Do they have an accent or a tendency to stutter? Any quirks about their voice listed here. Maybe also add a list of the languages they can speak. Personality and Abilities (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Personality Traits Brash- Ra'narin is of the opinion that he is unbreakable, and is more than willing to take on any opponent to prove that he is right. Be it Orc, Dakkar, Mekket, or Maiar, everything is fair game to this little rascal. Of course, just because he thinks he is able to take on these creatures does not mean it is necessarily true... Bright-eyed- Hailing from (I FORGOT WHAT THE ISLAND IS CALLED), he has had no interaction with races other than Ailor, Lampar, and his own. To take this even further, he has never been in any sort of city, making nearly everything in regalia into a glorious wonder! Greedy- Monetary wealth means little to this Rashaq, but anything ranging from cool stones to pretty trinkets must be his! Having a tendency to adorn the walls of whatever cave he lives in with stolen goods, he has a rather poor history with the regalia guard. Extroverted- Always out, always happy, Ra'narin seems to simply exude happiness and energy! This is bolstered by his "bright eyed trait", motivating him to go even further, and be even more energetic. Knowing that he only has so long to explore, this has pushed him to try and connect with as many of the more alien races as possible. Trigger-fingers- Energy can't always be put towards great things, and Ra'narin is a fine example of this. Always quick to jump the gun in any situation, while this may have once served him in less civilized places (although not particularly well), it is less than helpful in places such as regalia where civility is valued. Quick witted- From witty remarks to tricky tactics in battle, Ra'narin has a reputation back on (I FORGET THE NAME OF THE ISLAND) for his fast paced mind. This is a lifesaver for Ra'narin because it us usually paired up with his natural "outgoinginess", generally making him both a pleasant and amusing person to be around. On rare occasions he even has success in things such as bartering and negotiations. Strengths Bullet out character’s strengths with at least three sentences expanding on each. Three strengths minimum. Weaknesses Bullet out the character’s weaknesses with at least three sentences expanding on each. Three weaknesses minimum. Personality and Abilities (Expansion) Spoiler The following is not required when filling out your character application. You may use bullet points or paragraphs, and are welcome to add more or less information as you see fit. The information in this section will not be reviewed. Want to be extra helpful to your reviewer? Use the Spoiler feature to make the content hidden so readers can read it when they want to, or skip it! Describe any number of Character Quirks your character has, strange behavior that they exhibit in certain situations. For example, a character rubbing a beard when nervous is a quirk, or a character biting their lips when doing math is a quirk, or a character shuffling their feet when talking to someone is a quirk. Quirks are not mandatory and may be left out if the writer doesn’t want to include them or can’t think of any. Describe your character’s skills; abilities they’ve developed, but not necessarily put at the forefront of their lives. For example, if your character is a good cook, but not a chef, or if they are a good horse rider but not necessarily a competition racer, you would mention them here. Feel free to mention multiple skills but try to keep your character from becoming over skilled. Describe your character’s talents, their inherent abilities that truly set them apart from the common population of Aloria. These talents are the kind of abilities other people would want to go to your character for to teach them. These are things they haven’t specifically developed, but have a natural affinity for. Likes Trinkets of any kind Anything that shines Dislikes Freya Lo (challenged the Arch-Alpha) Anything unclean Spoiler Relationships (Optional) Add Relationships to NPC and player characters. Write this list of relationships with a bullet point. Describe what their current relation to one another is, and how they originally met. If you want to, you can add flavor by @tagging the player behind the character next to the character name. Relationships are a great way to socialize with other players! Speculate on relations, ship characters and create lasting friendships and nemeses! This section, while optional, is especially recommended if you want to create a social feel to your Sheet. 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Raised as a blue sand Not particularly well known for much Suffered a number of burns from the destruction of her home due to the number of volcanic eruptions in the area. Was moved to the outer Evokai Islands, where Ra'narin underwent a gender change.
So, I just read through the whole thing very quickly and i noticed a few things, You did well on your personality traits, very well developed, However every one of them requires four sentences, please add one or two more to most of these. Thanks for bearing with me and alert me when you are done!
"Their iris is often a shade of green.." "their hair is always bright ranging from dark blonde to bright platinum blonde, however, crimson red like that of the Solang has also been witnessed..." Quoted from the Rashaq Wiki Page
https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Rashaq tells us that both red fur and green eyes are possible. That would be the Lampar. The Rashaq are a little different. I know the race pages can be confusing. It's all good XD.
