Rejected Sheet Pyotr Valeryko

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  1. Wolfen_

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    Character Information

    • Full Name: Pyotr Vasiliy Valeryko

    • Race: Ailor (Krainivaya)

    • Age: 25

    • Sex: Male

    • Sexuality: Heterosexual

    • Eye Color: Brown
    Core Concept

    • Once a devout Unionist, Pyotr ultimately fell from his faith after years of fighting with no purpose but bloodshed, leaving him struggling to hold onto the last few traces.

    • A man ruined by his experiences, Pyotr’s life has gradually been locked away by his own decision; keeping himself going by forgetting better days.


    Proficiency Information

    Total: 50 + 10 hobby
    • Glaive Combat | 20
    • Bola Combat | 15 ( 10 invested, +5 Seizing Innovation)
    • Unarmed Combat | 5
    • Dagger Combat | 5
    • Horticulture Art | 5 (invested)
    • Sailing Art | 2 | Hobby
    • Strength Training | 10 | (5 invested, +5 Wildland Ailor Boost)
    • Hunting Art | 4| Hobby
    • Leatherwork Art | 4 | Hobby
    Body Shape

    • Physical Stat: 30 (Racial cap)

    • Body shape: Muscular- Low bodyfat


    Ability Information:


    • Dark Empathy
    • Seizing Innovation
    • People of many tongues
    • Great Force 1
    • Gate Smash
    Languages

    • Common (Free)

    • Kriv (Parent)

    • Katharic (People Of Many Tongues)


    Visual Information:

    • Eye Color | Brown

    • Hair color | Dark brown

    • Hair style | Unkempt;, neck length hair parted down the center

    • Height | 6’0

    • Clothing style | Typically ragged and baggy clothes, paired by a bright red sash around his waist.
    Appearance Information:

    • Noticeably, Pyotr is missing the majority of his left arm, ending at the shoulder; it is entirely replaced by a magitech prosthetic, which has been lined with silver in line with Krainivaya traditions about gold.

    • Pyotr stands at 6’0 with a stocky build, his pale and rugged features sporting a light stubble.
    Life Story

    Childhood: Born in the year 284 to a family of poor farm workers, growing accustomed to the unforgiving environment of his circumstances from an early age. As the most able bodied child of his sizable family, Pyotr’s time growing up was spent mainly on assisting his father Gennady tilling the fields. Eventually the monotony of farm life blossomed a growing desire to broaden his self contained horizons, eventually culminating in a complete departure from his family all together to the disapproval of his father, Pyotr began training as a Schilder with dreams of becoming a Bloodcast.

    Adolescence: Pyotr soon would spend his early teenage years migrating from his homeland during the Consortium Crisis. Now in tow with his mentor and lending a hand to his mentor however possible, learning all he could.

    Early Adulthood: Having completed his training, Pyotr’s childhood dream had come to fruition. Now a fully fledged knight, he would return to his familiar surroundings within the North Belt, living with distant family. Returning from a walk to find his village being raided, and the locals being captured, Pyotr would put up a fight, but not enough - overwhelmed, cut down, and dragged off in chains, he would ultimately find himself sold off, palmed between owners until he reaches the slums of Paarthalaar.


    Adulthood: Forced to fend for himself in bloodsports for his captor's amusement, Pyotr locked away nearly all memory and emotion, instead focusing on his very survival solely until his captivity would eventually come to its end. Though fighting tooth and nail to see the next day the price of such would be the sacrifice of both his body and mind, and he was moved between owners - and pits - for years.

    Coming to Regalia:
    After the camp in which he was held one year had been raided, Pyotr found his binds freed unexpectedly by one of the pirates, whose crew he joins - later taking him to Regalia. Now alone once more, Pyotr drifts his way through Regalia in search of both purpose and identity.
     
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    claimed for review
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Supremium

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  4. Wolfen_

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    AyYy ty
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Supremium

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    @Wolfen_ unapproved until you get rid of some of the similarities to viktor from arcane league of legends. (Like the arm and name. Pick one.)
     
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    Done and done
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    @festiveCorvid Beep boop, made some changes to backstory, edits in Red hot chili peppers
     
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    @festiveCorvid Ayy updated proficienies and abilities to suit the rework, changes made in Red Dead Redemption
     
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    OH hype ty!
     

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