Needs Help/Review Panduh Asur Character Sheet~

[ItzPandahhh]

Character Information

• Full Name: Panduh Ashur
  
  
• Heritage / Culture: Ailor
  
  
• Age: 22
  
  
• Gender / Pronouns: He/Him, Male
  
  
• Religion: N/A
  
  
• Occult: N/A
  
  
• Character Occupation: Wanderer

Appearance Information:

• Eye Color: Blue
  
  
• Skin Color: Pale
  
  
• Hair: Short/Shoulder Length at most
  
  
• Hair Color : Brown
  
  
• Height: 6'2
  
  
• Body Type: Athletic
  
  
• Additional Features: Wears a mask that covers head.

Skill Information:

• Hobbies and Talents: Athletic Hobby

Mechanics: Ailor are masters of many languages. Even for languages they do not speak, if someone insults them in their native tongue, they will know what was said.

Ailor are the preferential lords of the Regalian Empire, Ailor are by nature always considered more seriously for job applications and positions of authority.

Ailor have preferential treatment by the Knight Orders (excepting Argentum/Senleya), giving them more leeway to break their Code (within reason).

Ailor may spontaneously generate Divinium (either alone or shared with other Ailor) during Staff Events if they act within the ideology of their faith.

Ailor willingly can close their heart and mind to certain emotions or their conscience, allowing them to commit acts of great evil without feeling bad.

• Languages: Common

Backstory/Plothooks: Born into a common household in some far away town, Panduh Ashur was destined for greatness as well as tragedy. He led a fairly ordinary life, assisting his father as he worked the fields as well as assisting in the defense of his small village whenever the need arose (When he became capable of combat ofc). Panduhs life was going to change on the days following his seventeenth life day (B-Day) however, when the devastating revelation that his parents mysteriously disappeared without a trace after he returned in the evening after a long day in the fields. Fast forward five years and the path he has taken is one of adventure and hardship. Ever since that life changing day, he has dedicated his life to training.

• Primary goals are to find any instances of people going missing like his family.
  
  • To travel the realms far and wide in search of quests and trials to help better himself.
    
    
  • As well as trying to find people with similar aligning goals or ones that just need a helping hand.

((As far as backstories go, I realize it's shaky at best but this will evolve the more I roleplay and develop the character.))


Combat Proficiencies and Abilities

Attack Stat: Strength (7)

Defense Stat: Constitution (5)

[14/14 points spent]

Proficiency Points:

• Strength: 7
  
  • [Diving Tackle]
    
    
  • ]Tangle Strike]
    
    
  • [Concussive Blow]
    
    
  • [Bruiser Agony]
    
    
  • [Bruiser Feint]
    
    
  • [Bruiser Slam]
    
    
  • [Bruiser Parry]
    
    
  • [Bruiser Stance] (Free)
    
    
  • [Bruiser Rampage] (Ailor Free Pack)
• Constitution: 7
  
  • [Interception]
    
    
  • [Rebound]
    
    
  • [Debuff Endurance]
    
    
  • [Rage Counter]
    
    
  • [Shield Wall]
    
    
  • [Shield Slam]
    
    
  • [Shield Deflect]
• Intelligence: 0
  
  • [N/A]
• Wisdom: 0
  
  • [N/A]
• Dexterity:
  
  • [N/A]
• Faith: 0
  
  • [N/A]
• Magic: 0
  
  • [N/A]