Rejected Sheet Osiris Ur "the Jackal Of The Shadows"

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    Osiris Ur

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    • Basic Information
      • Full Name: Osiris Ur

      • Age: Died at 20
        • Visual Age: ???
      • Gender: Male

      • Race: Previously Senef Asha, Now Undead
        • Phantom Type

        • Affliction: Never
      • Eye Color: Glowing Ordial Green

    • Core Concept
      • Osiris follows Bintaar-Baskarr very loosely, believing completely in hopefully joining the afterlife as explained once he's finally completely put to rest, however he doesn't follow any God closely, although respects them.
      • He is an Undead Phantom Asha who was a slave wishing to pursuit his intense hobby as a Navigator and explore, but his goal was cut short by a rogue pirate crew in which he claims revenge upon.

    • Proficiency Information

    • Total Points: 50 Core , 10 Hobby , 5 Free
    • Diplomat
      • 10 Perception Training [5 Invested, +5 Racial]
      • 10 Theater Arts [10 Hobby]
    • Pathfinder
      • 15 Sailing Art [15 Invested]
      • 15 Drawing Art [15 Invested]
    • Phys Stat
      • 0 Phys Stat

    • Ability Information
      • Undead Abilities:
        • Dead Shell 3

        • Haunting 1

        • Arcane Mastery 1

        • Darkness 4

        • Magic Sight 3
      • Perception:
        • Rogue Gift 1 countered
        • Rogue Gift 2 cannot be used on character
        • Rogue Gift 3 does not work
        • Rogue Gift 4 partially countered
        • Rogue Gift 5 completely countered
        • Guard Forgery and Government Forgery countered
    • Theater Arts:
      • Any emotional state reading or detection abilities countered
    • Languages
      • Common
        • Free Language
        • 10/10
        • Learned in life
      • Free parent Language
        • Ibeth
        • 6/10
        • Learned from parents?
    • Appearance Information
      • Mutations
        • Phantom Form:
          • Normally, he is just a shadow of what he once was, with no real features able to be made out besides his shape, and his glowing green eyes.
          • His jackal ears reach high up and then fades into shadows. His tail is long, and wispy, which also fades into shadows.
          • His mouth glows green if he opens in, showing each individual canine tooth.
          • Sometimes, he wears a cloak as to hide his shadowy form, but that can easily be removed or if examined in the facial area long enough, you would see his face is made up of shadows and not flesh.
          • If he is intensely powered by emotions, he can switch into his past form, but a shadowy version of it. He is currently learning how to do this at will, making him appear to be the Asha he once was with the patterns on his fur and everything, except with shadows drifting off from his fur.
    • Additional Visual Information
    • Eye Color:
      • Glowing green
    • Fur Color:
      • Black with darker leopard spots
    • Fur Length:
      • Mostly medium, hyena-like mane, long fur length on tail
    • Clothing:
      • Unknown, seems to be engulfed in shadows if any clothes are worn. Wears a cloak on occasion to blend in, in public. Cloak is able to be removed to show his true shadowy form.
    • Height:
      • 6’6
    • Voice Claim:

    • Relationships
    • TBA eventually

    • Life Story
      • Age 0-16
        • Osiris Ur was born into a tribe long ago. His mother was a beautiful dark-furred Asha, and his father had an array of leopard spots on his fur, and a long, wispy tail. They gave birth to Osiris who turned out to be a dark-furred Asha with a difficult to see leopard spot pattern, and a long, wispy tail, and blue eyes. He was beautiful. They raised him up to the age of 5, when the tribe was raided by slavers. They took in the entire family but sold them separately into slavery. He was separated from his family, alone, and afraid… which made him perfect for training to be a good laborer. As time went on, and Osiris got older, the memories of his family faded until he had no hope left.

        • Osiris was enslaved for many years, on a crew for a cargo ship. He was tasked to move cargo to and from the ship, keep the ship clean, and anything else that was needed on-board. He rarely saw land, and got used to being on the sea consistently. This also helped Osiris to learn some things on the ship, and he became very interested in mapping and cartography. When he ever got the chance, he would often use some scrap paper and loose pencils to draw and map as much of the sea and nearby islands as he could, as well as learn to use a compass and the stars for direction. He picked it up quickly, as if it was in his blood to learn tasks such as those.
      • Age 17-20
        • While he was onboard the cargo ship one night, mapping, he heard a commotion stirring up. He was quickly dragged from his rest, and instructed to man the nets and keep a close watch. He was given a scabbard that he wasn’t aware of how to use properly. Cannons shot off from a nearby ship, a ship with black flags and huge cannons. Pirates? Osiris only heard of those in stories! The cargo ship was blasted once… twice… The ship closed in on the cargo ship and swerved to avoid crashing. Osiris was frozen in fear, he ran off to hide behind a barrel, afraid of what fate was going to become him. Harpoons shot out and wrapped around the cargo ship, a board was slammed onto the ship and his crew got their swords out and began to fight the pirates. The pirates cut through the crew like butter, they were generally more experienced. One of them spotted Osiris and he stood his ground, holding his sword out shakily. The pirate laugh and tossed him overboard easily.

        • The water was so cold it felt like knives digging into his skin, Osiris went into shock and started to drown. The waves overtook his form, and the shadows engulfed his soul. Anger rushed through his bones and the Asha was driven by adrenaline and rage. He lived his life in shackles just to get cut down by a fiend. Osiris spent his whole life just taking it, and never getting a chance to speak up. As his final breath was taken, his soul left his body… but only for a moment, it was shot back into his dead body by the pure force of his will to live. Osiris was undead, at the bottom of the ocean, and without a clue of what to do. His memories faded slowly. What was his last name? Who was his mother? What was his favorite color? All that seemed to stick was his first name, why he died, and the skills he picked up onboard the cargo ship. His shadowed form exited his body and floated to the surface. His green eyes glowed against the waves as he watched the overtaken cargo ship float away, and finally for the first time in his ‘life’, he let out an angry howl, the inside of his mouth gleaming green with his Bintaar energy. The jackal of the shadows has arisen.

    • Progression Information
      • Admiral Level 1
        • Referencing Sailing Arts +15, being raised on the sea, and learning tactics on-board the cargo ship over the years
      • Sage Level 2
        • Referencing personal intelligence and interest in learning, +15 Perception

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    Osiris Shadow (Edits by me)
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    Osiris Fursona Badge (Yes I made him into a fursona)
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    Osiris art I made
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    Fursuit of Osiris (I made it)​
     
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    @Follower Heyo, updated to the new rework!
     
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    @Follower Because of removal of Pathfinding (his main concept), I have changed around some things. All changes marked in gold. I did change his past sub-race to better match his personality and Prof boosts.
     
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