Basic Information Full Name: Onihrulir Joulainor Uliekuler Name Pronunciation: On-knee-hroo-ler Jaw-lie-nor Ool-ee-koo-ler Age: 61 Gender: Male Race: Kathar, Variant of Lightburning Sexuality: Straight Weapon of Choice: Atrave Staves or simple staffs. Skill Information Total Points: 60 - 60 Spent +20 Stave Combat Skill +10 Athletic Training +15 Magical Knowledge Sanguinology Arkenism Demonology +8 Lightgiver Ritualism +2 Stealth Rogue Skill +3 Historical Knowledge Nelfin History Body Shape 30 Stat Slim Body Shape Average Body Fat Languages Kathar Elven Dialect - Native Language Common - Free Language Olt'venn - Ritualism Knowledge Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Spoiler: Von Kerle Mutations - Inactive (Cured) [*]Von Kerle Vampire Mutations - Active Spoiler: Von Kerle Mutations - Inactive (Cured) Harlord Bloodening Harlord Chasing Harlord Stonewall Harlord Drawling Visual Information Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Blonde Hair Style: Long, and let loose. Skin Color: Super pale Clothing: Generally anything that looks nice. Height: 6'10 Personality and Abilities Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type The Architect - INTJ-A Choose your Character's Religion Faith of Estel - 7/10 Life Story ~Born in the Dread Empire, Saivaile in a city known as, Etlaroell, April 19th, 217 A.C~ {0-12} Onihrulir was born in Etlaroell, a city in the Saivaile landmass in April 19th, 217 A.C. His mother’s name was, Analwalwa, and his father, Joulais. He had sibilings as well, his twin sister, Thelacie, and older brother, Tolarth. Not much happened in his infancy, nor his pre-teen years. {13-18} Nothing much happened in Onihrulirs teen years, mostly just him practicing music, art, and literature skills. He’d begin to learn Lightgiver Ritualism in secret, and bleaching his hair to blend into Saivaile society a bit better at age seventeen. To take more steps to blend in, he'd dress Saivale, act Saivale, worship like Saivale, and other Saivale cultural means. {19-30} As Onhrulir got older, he began to get a good grasp on Lightgiver Ritualism. He’d also begin to get a good grasp on ritualism from fellow Lightburners. Around age twenty five, he began to improve his rogue skills, and age twenty seven, he’d begin to secretly kill various local Saivale and Shenath in the military, priests, and others. While also aiding lesser peoples who are oppressed, and secretly aiding in the escape of few lucky slaves. {30-40} Turning thirty five, the locals in the city began to find out who was doing the killings. As one final anti-Dread Empire move, he burned a Void house of worship before slipping off into hiding. Making his way out of the Dread Empire, and making it to Daendroc by sneaking on a boat just before it began to embark for the Woland Walds. Here, he’d travel his way out of the Dread Empire through the Woland Walds, and out of the Dread Empire. Integrating himself in a Daendroc city, Hallonq at age forty, getting jobs as bartenders and getting into the Daen underworld occasionally. He’d also meet a Shenath girl, named Halea Nalsirie, who’d he’d fall in love with, and eventually date. {41-61} Onihrulir and Halea would move to Daenshore, and get jobs as bartenders. They’d make a nice living, and stay here for years. However, Halea would contract, Qui’quilli Disease, and end up dying. Onihrulir stayed in Daenshore til he saved up enough to move out to the Regalian Holy City at age sixty. However, within the city he’d be bitten and turned into a Von Kërle vampire. Though, was quickly captured not long after turning..
Here is my review: Personality and Abilities In your first paragraph, elaborate on how his demeanor might shift for the better if people show him respect. Also detail how he would behave if the opposite happened. In your second paragraph, I would like for you to elaborate on his anxieties. How do they portray themselves through him and how does this alter his behavior, if at all? And to what lengths does he take to conceal them? Write a few more sentences to describe the change in personality Onihrulir takes when in the presence of family, friends or loved ones. Discuss this in detail. In your fourth paragraph, I would include a point of how he might view corruption in the Ailor world and the Kathar world. Life Story Include a point or two in his teenage years how he took to blending in with Saivale lifestyles. Mark your edits in a legible red then tag me when you've completed them. @xXKingDraugarXx
@MantaRey I did a bit of a proficiency re-write for blonde boi. If it's not all that well, I can revert the sheet back to what it was originally.
Hi there @xXKingDraugarXx - just noticed one thing about your Proficiency Points. You marked Stave Combat as +16 but put +15 in the parenthesis. Please correct this so this all adds up. Go ahead and replace Kathar Ritualism with Cielothar Ritualism. Lightburning Kathar automatically work with Cielothar Ritualism, so including the sub-point of him turning to it is unnecessary. Tag me when you get these things edited and fixed.
Hi there, thanks for your patience! I was on a very lengthy vacation and just got back and situated. @xXKingDraugarXx All looks good, so consider this re-approved.
Approved, however I will note the following. You have 58 points spent. If you'd like, you have 2 whole points that you can apply to the skill section if you so choose. Tag me if you decide to make the following edit in a color of you choosing.
