Rejected Sheet Old Cecil App Do Not Use (i Am Keeping It For Now For Aesthetics Later)

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    sonofthestars chaotic stupid Staff Member Lore2

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    • BASIC INFORMATION || to note one's identity.
      • « NAME » Cecil Sireillan
        • ↬ [ By Alias: Cecil. ]
        • ↬ [ Nicknames: Cece, Cee, Cici, Slick. ]
      • « AGE » Twenty-three years exactly.
        • ↬ [ Birthday: November 29th, 286 A.C. ]
        • ↬ [ Star Sign: Sagittarius. ]
      • « GENDER » Male.
        • ↬ [ Presents As: Male. ]
        • ↬ [ Pronouns: He/him. ]
      • « RACE » Manathar of the Lector Legion.
        • ↬ [ Originally: Half-Altalar. ]
        • ↬ [ Formerly: Zolathar Kathar, Fin'ullen Altalar. ]
      • « SEXUALITY » Gay.
      • « EYE COLOR » Boiling gold.
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    "You and me, we're not the same.

    I am a sinner, and you are a saint!"
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    ( PROBLEMS | MOTHER MOTHER )

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    • CORE CONCEPT || to discover one's true self.
      • « BELIEF SYSTEM » Cecil has gone through many different phases of religion and belief in his life, but after being betrayed, hurt, and condemned by more than enough gods, he has finally placed his belief back into the only hands he can trust: his own. The Xenophane, a Manathar's commitment to self-improvement and self-worth, rules his personal philosophy.
      • « IDENTITY CONCEPT » - Cecil is a magic-obsessed mage and occultist who is continually running from his Sanguinism-stained and fire-scorched past on a search for power, belonging, and the certainty of his continued survival.
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    "And now, a riddle to guess if you can!

    What makes a monster, and what makes a man?"
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    ( THE BELLS OF NOTRE DAME | HUNCHBACK THE MUSICAL )

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    • PROFICIENCY INFORMATION || to harness one's skillset.
      • « TOTAL POINTS TO SPEND » - Fifty points spent alongside ten hobby points.
      • « POINTS ALLOCATION »
        • Point-Buy Proficiencies
          • +6 Arcanology { +3 from Core. } ( +3 from Honed Skill 1. )
            • ↬ Purging Knowledge
            • ↬ Volacorum Knowledge
          • +3 Linguistic Science { +3 from Core. }
            • ↬ [ Bought: Kathar Altalar. ]
          • +21 Void Sorcery { +15 from Core. } ( +6 from Sorcery Skill 2. )
        • Core Proficiencies
          • +16 Caster Ranged Combat { +16 from Core. }
          • +15 Sailing { +5 from Core, +5 from Hobby, +5 from Fin'ullen Racial}
          • +1 Body Care Art { +1 from Core. }
          • +3 Dagger Combat { +3 from Core. }
        • Hobby Proficiencies
          • +5 Theater Arts { +5 from Hobby. }
      • « PHYSICAL STAT » 13.
      • « LANGUAGES » Three Total Languages.
        • ↬ [ Ithanian: Upbringing ]
        • ↬ [ Kathar: Linguistics ]
        • ↬ [ Common: Necessity ]
    • SPECIAL TRAITS || to utilize one's abilities.
      • « AFFLICTION » Manathar of the Lector Legion.
        • ↬ [ Base Kit: Available. ]
        • ↬ [ Lector Legion: Available. ]
      • « SORCERY » Void Darkness attuned.
        • ↬ [ Magic Spell: Magic Sight 1. ]
        • ↬ [ Magic Spell: Flux Shift 6. ]
        • ↬ [ Target Curse: Astral Being 1. ]
        • ↬ [ Magic Spell: Elemental Control 2. ]
        • ↬ [ Magic Spell: Darkness 3. ]
        • ↬ [ Target Curse: Exorcism 1]
        • ↬ [ Target Curse: Dark Curse 2. ]
        • ↬ [ Magic Spell: Exorcism 2. ]
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    • VISUAL INFORMATION || to show one's self.
      • « APPEARANCE » A violet-skinned young man with dark, shoulder length hair and golden eyes. He has two curling horns, often wrapped in finery and metal, and a harpoon-tipped tail that is similarly decorated. He bears a multitude of scars and old injuries. Most often, he can be seen wearing gold-laden clothing in hues of white and grey, with a beloved opulent overcoat on top.
      • « MUTATIONS » Cecil's skin is a map of the Veil, touched by stars and golden lines. His right eye is viscerally corrupted by the Void, shining an ultraviolet sort of saccharine that looks beyond the mortal coil.
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    • LIFE STORY || to know one's background.
    • ACT ONE | THE WRETCH
      • CHILDHOOD: Cecil is born as the illegitimate child of a Vierzehn Celate and an Altalar. His heritage leads to ostracization and abuse.
      • ADOLSENCE: Cecil leaves home at thirteen and lives on the streets until sixteen. Then, he joins a theater troupe which turns out to be a Vampire coven of misfits.
    • ACT TWO | THE MORNINGSTAR
      • TEENAGE YEARS: Cecil is infected at seventeen and falls in love with the coven leader, ascending to lead at his side. He swears revenge on his parents and on the upper class of his homeland.
      • YOUNG ADULTHOOD: Cecil terrorizes the city for two years, earning the nickname 'Morningstar' after burning down a Temple. This garners his mother's attention, prompting her to hunt him down.
    • ACT THREE | THE BROKEN CIRCLE, MADE WHOLE
      • ADULTHOOD: Cecil's coven is scattered as his lover is executed and he is cured and thrown in prison. Freed in the night by a stranger, he flees to the Archipelago and furthers his newfound obsession with the Void.
      • PRESENT: Driven by mistakes and regrets, Cecil runs away again at twenty two, arriving in Regalia in search of power, opportunity, and a reprieve from his past.
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    • PROGRESSION TALENT || to master one's talents.
      • TALENT: Mage 3 (Forced +2 Mage, +1 invested)
     
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    @KrakenLord01 Hello! I'm switching threads for Cecil's app. Please reject the last one and use this one from now on; otherwise, the only thing changed in this update besides aesthetics was switching 3 Body Art to 3 Alchemy. EDIT: Removed, I can't do math.
    (the formatting is rather fucked up, give me time to fix it. i am so sorry for your eyes.)
     
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    Dudonka2 I'm actually very tired

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    Just some things: You spent 53 core points instead of 50. Also, I think you mean Honed Skill 1 instead of Honed Skill 2 as you cannot get an additional Arcanology/Metallurgy/Linguistic pack with Honed Skill 2.

    Correct me if I am wrong, though.
     
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    sonofthestars chaotic stupid Staff Member Lore2

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    @KrakenLord01 Both a bump and an update! Due to conflicting styles and a want for more flavor, I've re-distributed ten of his core points. Changelog:
    • Removed 10 Warlash
    • Removed 5 Circus
    • Added 15 Sailing ( 5 Core, 5 Hobby, 5 Racial Boost)
    • Added 3 Strength training
    • Added 2 Cooking
    • Adjusted physical stat accordingly
     
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    Re-approved!
     
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    sonofthestars chaotic stupid Staff Member Lore2

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    @KrakenLord01 Slight overhaul due to the new proficiency update. Changelog:
    • Removed 10 Stave
    • Removed 2 Cooking
    • Removed 3 Strength Training
    • Removed 3 Sorcery
    • Added 20 Casting Ranged
    • Re-shuffled Sorcery spells
    • Updated physical stat
    • Updated app to reflect new format
    • Updated life story
    I understand that you wanted some of your apps taken by newer staff members; if you want to keep this one, please let me know within 48 hours. If not, I will toss it to the wolves. Thank you!
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Looks good, but needs a few small edits:
    • You've spent 53 Core Points in total. Please remove 3 somewhere.
    Once you've made the necessary changes ping me again for a re-review, thanks!
     
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    sonofthestars chaotic stupid Staff Member Lore2

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    @Yurs Removed one sorcery spell to fix his points. I swear I can do math.
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    I would believe you if you didn't somehow forget to remove the invested points in your proficiency section. Fix that and I'll approve
     
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    sonofthestars chaotic stupid Staff Member Lore2

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    @Yurs coping and seething. Fixed
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    APPROVED
     
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    sonofthestars chaotic stupid Staff Member Lore2

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    @Yurs H-h-hewwo!! Miss Yuws!!! I have an update fow you!!!!
    • I finally added Arcanology packs to the points I spent for them. Nothing else changed.
    Thanks miss Yuws!!!!!!
     
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    Appwoved!!
     
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    Spread updated to accommodate for progressions. Proficiency points are pending Birdsfoot_Violet's approval via #permission-info on discord.
     

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