══════⊹⊱❖⊰⊹══════ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ══════⊹⊱❖⊰⊹══════ Theme 1 [x] | Theme 2 [x] << ◉ Character Information ◉ >> ✧ Full Name: Nynx Siora Darrath ✧ Race: Life Isldar ✧ Age: 19 ✧ Sex: Female ✧ Gender: Female ✧ Sexuality: :) ✧ Eye Color: Purple [Archon] << ◉ Core Concept ◉ >> ✧ Beliefs ||Nynx strongly believes in seeing stuff before truly believing. She follows Dragon Worship, but often bounces between several dragons. She is a true wild card at times. ✧ Character Concept || Nynx strives to be around for people, to be someone to talk to, or hang out with. She is a kind soul, but is often more emotional than calm. She believes in kindness first, before she makes her true decisions in many manners. ══════⊹⊱❖⊰⊹══════ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ══════⊹⊱❖⊰⊹══════ << ◉ Proficiency Information ◉ >> << Strength: 2 >> ✧ Melee: Unarmed Pack ✧ Melee: Blades Pack << Constitution: 2 >> ✧ Training: Bruteforce Pack ✧ Crafting: Thread Craft Pack <<Wisdom: 0 >> << Dexterity: 3 >> ✧ Firearms: Longneck Pack ✧ Roguery: Parkour Pack ✧ Roguery: Vandalism Pack << Magic: 2 >> ✧ [Racial] Magic: Ice Magic Pack ✧ Mythic: Draconic Healing Pack ✧ Mythic: Draconic Adjudicator Pack << Charisma: 5 >> ✧ Language: West Linguist Pack ✧ Husbandry: Mount Husbandry ✧ Husbandry: Pet Husbandry ✧ Draconic: Dragonbeing ✧ Draconic: Dragonkin << ◉Abilities◉ >> | Archon Abilities | ✧ Draconic Attuned ✧ Dragon Speech ✧ Dragon Armor ✧ Draconic Manifestation ✧ Draconic Form | Isldar Racials | ✧ Frost Immune ✧ Armor Summon ✧ Scouring of Ellador ✧ Manifesting Frost ✧ Cleansing Snow ✧ Ageless ✧ Frostmancy ✧ Soul Attuned ✧ Planar Script ✧ Tail Manifest ✧ Dragon Speech | Languages | ✧ Common [Parent] ✧ West Pack [Learned] ══════⊹⊱❖⊰⊹══════ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ══════⊹⊱❖⊰⊹══════ << ◉Appearance Information◉ >> ✧ Appearance | Nynx stands at six feet. She has a rather athletic build, but still rather slim. Her natural hair is white, but she often dyes it black. Though, her hair is very curly and difficult to manage at times. Her clothing is based off her mood that day, sometimes it's a pants day, sometimes it's a dress day. << ◉Life Story◉ >> ✧ Childhood | Nynx was born and raised in the city off Regalia. Ever since she was old enough to hold up a sword she was trained by her Father with a sword, but with her Mother she was trained to use her fists. While growing up she learned many other skills, such as cooking, sewing, and how to climb. ✧ Adolescence | As she grew older she learned to be more proficient in her skills and grew stronger. When the vision came through to decide which type of Isldar she could become, she chose to be a Life Isldar, formally a Voltalar. When she turned eighteen she chose to become an Archon, turned by her father.
@BeaneyBaby Your backstory is missing some information. You don't need to describe anything physical here. What was her childhood like? How did her parents raise her? How did her parents acquire a wyvern without access to the holds? A ten year old isn't really going to be a master at fighting. They're more likely to start learning around this time.
Looks great for the most part, there's just one thing that needs to be fixed before I can give this the greenlight: You have 3 Core Points left unspent. Please clarify whether you'd like to leave these for IC learning or allocated into another proficiency. Go ahead and ping me for review when you've made the necessary changes, thanks!
You can only have one language pack. If there's a certain ability that's allowing you to have two that I'm not remembering here, make sure to indicate it on your sheet.
