Niriana Dzekh'aar

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    Basic Information
    • First Name: Niriana
    • Surnames: Dzekh'aar | di Caitagna | Aldaos
    • Age: 98
    • Gender: Female
    • Race: Shenathar Kathar
    • Sexuality: Bisexual
    • Preferred Weapon: Spear & Fists
    • Theme: Obession | Revenant
    Skill Information

    Total Points: 60/60 (Age & Hobby)
    • 15+ Spear Combat | from points.
    • 12+ Fist Combat | from points.
    • 9+ Roguery Training | from points
    • 6+ Arcanology Training | from points
    • 5+ Perception Training | from points.
    • 5+ Sailing Art | from hobby points.
    • 5+ Mixology Art | from hobby points.
    • 3+ Linguistic Training | from points
    Body Shape
    • Body Stat: 25
    • Body Build: Muscular
    • Body Fat: Average Body Fat
    Languages
    • Katharic | Native
    • Common | Fluent
    • Altalar | Linguistic
    Special Traits

    Fallen Archblood (Always Active)
    • Void Corruption Kit
    • Primal Base Kit
    Racial Abilities (Always Active)
    • Kathar Binding 1
    • Kathar Binding 2
    • Arken Sense 1
    • Arcane Mastery 1
    • Flux Shift 6
    • World Shift 1
    • Body Claws 1
    • Power Curse 2
    Roguery Skills (Always Active)
    • Sleight of Hand Pack
    • Rogue Gift 1
    • Rogue Gift 4
    Arcanology Knowledge (Always Active)
    • Arken Knowledge
    • Essence Knowledge
    Visual Information
    • Eye Colour: Glowing crimson
    • Hair Colour: White
    • Hair Style: Short
    • Skin Colour: Ashen
    • Scarring: Around her back and left arm
    • Clothing: Anything
    • Height: 6’6
    Personality and Abilities
    • Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    • Personality: The Mastermind – INTJ
    • Religion: The Xenophane (8/10)
    Life Story

    Childhood
    • During the year of 210 AC, a new Crimson Witch Shenath was born within the city of Paarthalaar named Niriana Aldaos.
    • Niriana started her life off slow, usually reading books and playing with her siblings, usually getting in trouble the most for being the problem child.
    • Though never too fond of combat Niriana did practice using spears and even throwing them in certain situations.
    • What Niriana did find interest in however was reading, often reading fiction and non-fiction books from local libraries.
    Teen years
    • Though not all was peaceful in Niriana’s teen years, the young Abyssal took to thievery whilst out on the streets, often pickpocketing the Saivale and anyone else that looked moderately wealthy, often getting away with it though sometimes getting caught and punished.
    • Once old enough Niriana was taken on trips through the ocean with her cousin, her cousin teaching the Abyssal how to properly sail though Niriana would never pursue getting a ship of her own, only ever enjoying working on one.
    • Niriana took to bartending at a local bar after realising that stealing from others wasn’t a stable source of income, often using her haruspex to seem less threatening to the patrons.
    Adult Years
    • Niriana went on a few more sailing trips around the oceans of Daendroc with her cousin though soon grew bored of it, choosing to instead to remain in Paarthalaar.
    • Niriana studied for most of her adult years, spending a large amount of time in libraries, learning more and more about Arcanology and the various topics it covered.
    • Niriana soon grew bored of Paarthalaar too, and after hearing mentions of Regalia she decided to pack up her things, giving her farewells to her family and left.
    • Soon enough the Abyssal made her way to Regalia on a merchant vessel, curious to see what the city she had heard so much about was like.
    Present Day
    • After spending months and months in the sewers in Regalia and after working for multiple different gangs and businesses Niriana decided she wanted more for herself and sought out an Altalar called Bel-Gyarbrin.
    • After being convinced by the Altalar into worshipping Estel the Abyssal was purified, turning her into a Teledden Altalar.
    • A few months passed and her faith stayed the same till her friend told her the truth about her worship, the Altalar abandoning the faith soon after then put faith into the Xenophane after being told about it by one of her trusted friends
    • After an unfortunate accident involving clockwork Niriana had lost her left hand, the Altalar soon after getting a metal replacement, it didn’t function nor did it look pretty though it was better than having a stump.
    • Niriana once again found herself with a lack of income, pay from the Wraith wasn’t enough to keep herself up financially so she joined the Solatium, one of Regalia’s charters.
    • During a lone patrol though Old Town Niriana was ambushed by a Cratos sanguine, shot multiple times by soul shots and fed off of, and then had an arrow shot through her chest, the Altalar woke back up later on in the Old Town Clinic and informed that she was now an Archblood from her near death experience.
    • Niriana, now without a family due to disowning herself from the Aldaos, was adopted into the di Caitagna family by one of her work colleagues, Camilla.
    • Gold Earring
    • Clockwork Gauntlet (Yellow and Yellow Cores)
    • Clockwork Gauntlet (Yellow and Red Cores)
    • Clockwork Gauntlet (Yellow and Red Cores)
    • Clockwork Visor (Green and Green Cores)
    • Clockwork Belt (Red and Blue Cores)
    • Steel Bastardsword
    • Silver Dagger
    • Basic Fishing Rod
    • Cut Gems (Blue, Green, and Red)
    • Shard of a Maraya Crystal
    • Large Chunk of Quartz Crystal
     
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    Profs changed to fit new update uwu
     
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    @Caelamus Entire character rework! Needs Re-Review ^^
     
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    @Caelamus Changed her Religion to The Scarlet Scourge instead of The Prideful Scorn, (Not an IC change I just thought The Scarlet Scourge would be more fitting)
     
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    @Caelamus Made an edit to profs! Removed the 10 burgle and moved the points into her other profs!
     
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    The burgling must be maintained as it is currently part of ongoing roleplay.
     
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    Alright I reverted the changes for the time being then
     
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    @Caelamus Changed mutations due to vamp update might give her sorcerer spells when I'm not half asleep
     
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    @Caelamus Re-did profs and lifestory a bit to reflect the changes!
     
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    Hello! I've reworked Niriana a tad @Caelamus
    • Completely Reworked her prof points
    • Adjusted Body Shape and Physical Stat
    Edits all done in red!
     
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    @Caelamus Hi hi! Big change! all edits done in blue
    • Race changed to "Fin'ullen Altalar' through a Ritual with Oso's character
    • Changed most of her prof points
    • Adjusted body stat and body build to fit new profs
    • Changed her appearance details.
    • Religion changed from 'None' to 'Faith of Estel'
    Sorry for an update right after the last one, this will be the last time I update in quite some time!
     
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    @Caelamus Hi hi, Niri was nabbed and got infected with Uthurenn Soul-line, I clarified which parts of her profs & spells are active and inactive due to this change, no prof changes other than splitting Heavy Bow into Shielding which is under the limit for non re-review I think

    I spoke to Oso beforehand aswell and Bel doesn't mind Werebeasts so this currently doesn't mess with anything shes going through so all is good IC

    If this is reaching any sort-of edit cap for this month then do tell and i'll halt all changes except for her being infected & whenever she is cured

    Soul-line & mutations in cyan
     
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    @Caelamus Hewwo good afternoon small update I replaced her 5 heavy bow with 5 linguistic knowledge to give her Modern Altalar, it was hard to do Altalar RP when everyone speaks a language your character doesn't understand, and I never ended up using any heavy bows in RP so it was just wasted points.
     
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    @Caelamus Hello hello Niriana was cured from being a Werebeast, I also removed one of her spells due to her losing her left hand and the spell that I removed required both so oop
     
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    @Caelamus Hewwo I updated Niriana's sheet a bit here are a list of the edits.
    • Dumped Sorcery spells out the door because I haven't used either of them in forever and its wasted points..
    • Lowered Musical Arts to 5 so they are now under Hobby Points along with Theatre Arts.
    • Added 'Racialism' to her Magical Knowledge as recently shes been learning alot about different races IC and thought it might be fitting to add.
    • Leftover points just shuffled around into other profs, I didn't want to add anything new to avoid minimaxing.
    • Infected and turned into a Mivver Vampire
    All edits done in blue!
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main

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    Approved but this will be the last time I will be permitting you to change points for an extended period of time. Try to find satisfaction in what you have. @Spookmas
     
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    @Caelamus Update! Need Re-Review
    • Niriana 'died' and became an Archblood, mutations added
    • I reshuffled her points around a bit, replaced shielding with pole and throwing
    • Physical stat now 24
    All edits done in purple
     
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    Approved, however following the final note above this is the last permitted change to points.
     
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    Yeah no problem! I didn't change around what the proficencies actually were anyways i'm enjoying the ones she currently has but I didn't enjoy shield combat anymore.
     
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    @Caelamus Hi uh, I don't know if this needs a re-review tag, but with the recent update I decided to change the subrace Niriana was converted into Teledden due to Fin'ullen no longer fitting the character at all with the update..
     
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    Ok. Remains approved.
     
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    @Caelamus Bump need re-review due to prof update, its mostly the same as it was before and there shouldn't be any other changes from me after this
     
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    @Caelamus Hello small update
    • Redid Niriana's life story due to the old one being a huge mess, poorly written, multiple mentions of old profs etc
    • Removed her medical sciences and her curing arcanology pack due to both being a bit hard to justify having with her new backstory, plus I don't really enjoy medic rp and I don't want to have to put 13 points into something just to be able to cure werebeasts and vampires, spread the points across her other profs and gave her a little bit of dext
    • Learned Dressalo from Camilla
    And a side note I know I shouldn't be changing profs often, I am actually enjoying the current build she has at the moment and I don't plan on changing it soon, I only changed the 13 points because I felt it was a huge waste of points
     
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    @Caelamus Heya, Niriana got Dread Rebirthed back into a Shenath Kathar with the most recent Archblood update, not a lot has changed I just added her racials, her points remain the exact same just moved some points a little, and added 6+ points from the Mageblood refund

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    From the wiki, I'm not sure if that means you can go over the 50 point cap there is and if you can't I'll correct it and remove the points
     
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    @Caelamus setting to re-review, reverted subtype back to Shenathar, didn't think Saivale fit her all too much

    Also removed ritualism because you know
     

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