Preserved Sheet Nindrol Xyrnorin

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Basic Information
  • Name: Nindrol Xyrnorin
  • Age: 22
  • Gender: Male
  • Race: Drowdar
  • Main Ambition: To return to his homeland or to feel like he belongs in Regalia.
  • Special Permission: None
  • Languages:
Common - Understands most vocabulary and has a reading level of that of a 6th grader
Drow Elven - Understands basic vocabulary with no reading ability
Visual Information
  • Eye Color: Grey
  • Hair Color: Pure White
  • Hair Style: Short and badly cut
  • Skin Color: A dark purple
  • Height: 6 feet, 1 inch
  • Weight: 180 pounds
  • Body Build: Toned
  • Weapon of Choice: Daggers or other short range weapons
  • Nindrol has inherited a strong jawline from his father and has high cheekbones. He has piercing grey eyes that give him an intense stare a nose that is more pointed than others. His short white hair is messy and cut horribly from where he has to do it himself with whatever he can find. When relaxed, his expression still has the same intensity as if he was trying to find an animal to hunt. When he is in a joyous mood, his eyes will lose some of their intensity but still have a focused look. He has a small scar on his forehead that is hidden by his short bangs that can be partially seen. The scar is a simple line that is easy to look over.
  • Nindrol has a good height of 6 foot and 1 inch. He is often described as sinewy, with his toned but thin body. He is usually in an upright position so he does not slouch, seeing slouching as a sign of weakness and content. His body, generally his back, is covered in scars from where he has been whipped many times over the years. He also has a small tattoo on his right arm near his shoulder of a snake wrapped around a dagger pointed down.
  • Nindrol usually wears whatever clothes are available to him. Usually he wears a worn out tunic that is dirty. He is very gracious when given clothes but he will not ask for them. He has no accessories, due to the fact that he cannot purchase them.
  • His voice is fairly deep, much like that of an average 30 year old man, he talks at an accelerated pace and his words are spoken harshly but flowing.

Personality and Abilities

As perceived by others, he is very quiet and keeps to himself. He will not speak unless spoken to, and only with his master's permission. He is respectful to everyone, knowing that if he doesn't, it could hurt him. If he is not in a potentially threatening place, he will openly seem depressed unless he is around children. He finds children amusing after seeing their innocence and hates seeing anything that could take that happy bliss away. When around his masters or anyone he does not trust, he will have a blank and indifferent expression.
Internally to self, he is very depressed. With all the years of slavery he was forced to endure, he has been broken. He does whatever his masters tell him to without question, still with the fear of being beaten. However, he still dreams of returning to his homeland after hearing about it from previous owners and the few books he has managed to get his hands on.
Toward friends and family, Nindrol is very kind and respectful to his friends, considering he doesn't have many of them. However, if one was to betray him in any way, he would resent them until they found a way to make it up to him. He will tolerate most of his friend's annoyances and just let it slide. Of course, he trusts those who do befriend him, but he will still be cautious around them, so he doesn't get caught off guard.
Regarding morality, he thinks himself neutral and that everything should be balanced. He strongly believes that if you do wrong, the universe will make you pay for your actions and vise versa. Regarding corruption, he will look down upon those who are corrupt. He sees them as scum who need to pay, but by someone else's hand. He doesn't think much of the law because of corruption, he believes that the law is all corrupt and needs to be redone.

Talents
  • Average Cooking - Due to being in servitude all his life, he has been forced to learn new things to please his masters. This obviously includes cooking. He knows his way around the kitchen and can cook basic recipes and a little more advanced with a cook-book. He won't be making a living as a cook but he could make a filling meal.
Weakness
  • Loss of Smell - For years, he has had no sense of smell. This has been a factor that has been hard for him to cope with, due to the fact that he used to use smell for most of his daily life. He lost his smell when he was in the ownership of a barkeep who caught him sneaking food. As punishment, he poured drops of boiling water into his nose, this scarred the tissue inside and left him without smell.

A'ria Filin @minecraftmisse - A lampar that often follows him around and makes his life hard when he tries not to get noticed.

Life Story
  • From Birth to 9 - From the day he was born, he has been a slave. His parents were sailing to Regalia to make a new life and his mother gave birth on the ship. However, as they were sailing, the ship's crew committed a mutiny. With the captain overthrown, the new leaders of the ship had no need of him or his family. So, they began executing his family, starting with his mother. When he was about to be executed, one of the crew members decided to have him spared so he could work as a slave. From then on, he was a slave to them. He was raised to do their bidding and to follow all orders or be beaten. He learned basic Drow Elven on the ship from listening to them and from receiving orders. About a week after he turned 9, the crew sold him to a family in Ithania.
  • From 9 to 11 - Nindrol was now in the ownership of a barkeep in Ithania. The man who owned him was old and saw no need to feed Nindrol the diet he needed to do the work that was required of him. This left him with no choice but to sneak as much food as he could and eat then scraps from those that had left the bar. Many times, he was caught sneaking food and he was harshly punished by his owner. Luckly for Nindrol, the old barkeep was only alive for a few more years. When the barkeep died, he left Nindrol in the possession of his only family in town, so in his will, he had Nindrol transported to his new owners.
  • 11 to 22 - Now that he was in the possession of an Alior family, he began to work for them. He did as he was told and never asked questions. While he was in the possession of these people, they were more relaxed than the crew that had him for the start of his life. They taught him how to read and speak Common, mainly so that he could read the cook books and read their daughter to sleep (while under guard). He was still beaten for mistakes but no as harshly and he had grown used to it. When he was 21 he was sold once again. However, the captain of the ship felt pity for him and destroyed documents of Nindrol being property. He said he was going to act as though he escaped. He was given some clothes, though still torn, and a place on the ship. After a year the captain told him he could leave if he wanted and Nindrol got off at Regalia. He began looking for work as a servant with it being the only thing he knew. He was then offered a job as a servant for House Ravenstead by Percival Leufroy Casimir Ravenstad.
 
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Peer Review!
  • I feel like you can add a couple more sentences to both your talents and your paragraphs on your Personality and Abilities section.
  • No one just simply has enhanced hearing, like a deaf person doesn't just automatically has better smelling sense then a the person with average hearing. Though, if you really want to keep it at enhanced hearing, you should state that this is a genetic/family trait.
  • You should also add another paragraph to your life story as it seems to be quite short.
That's my small peer review! I may drop down another if I feel like it.
 
I feel like you can add a couple more sentences to both your talents and your paragraphs on your Personality and Abilities section.
Sorry, I forget people can't read my mind. Thanks for pointing that out.
You should also add another paragraph to your life story as it seems to be quite short.
I know it was short, I just didn't really see how I could fit another paragraph in there when I first made this (probably because I was running off of 2 hours of sleep that night) but it's all expanded now.
 
Review
  • Change the hearing talent, you can say he is a good listener and can possibly pick up on certain social queues, but enhanced hearing as a talent is abuseable and as such cannot be permitted.
Complete the above and tag my once completed @Ludicro
 
@Wumpatron I just went ahead and removed it because I couldn't think of anything to replace it with that fit his character.
 
@Wumpatron I realize this is gonna take some changing but I am planning to make him a servant for hire instead. A bit more user friendly, though he will still have a slave past.
 
Rewrite and edit where you want to make changes, make them in a different color, then tag me once you are ready for the review. @Ludicro