Nikolaus Artiemus

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  1. Sarwynn

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    Basic Information:

    • Full Name: Nikolaus Artiemus, he has no nickname as of late.
    • Age: 44.
    • Gender: Male.
    • Race: Ailor.
    • Main Ambition: To share his knowledge with the next generation or be remembered as a great and honorable soldier.
    Skill Information
    • School: Viridian Order, School of Viridian.
    • Level: Expert.
    • Source: Attended the School of Viridian.

    Visual Information:

    • Hair Color: Coal black.
    • Hair Style: Smooth, and a bit shaggy.
    • Skin Color: A light tan.
    • Clothing: Anything that fits and makes him look proper and noble.
    • Height: 6”6’
    • Weight: 250lbs.
    • Body Build: Muscular and athletic.
    • Weapon of Choice: A longsword and/or cutlass.

    Personality and Abilities:


    Personality Traits


    • Proper: Nikolaus in his opinion is very well-behaved and proper. He seems to hold walk with pride and present himself in a certain glory-filled way. Nikolaus, being a militaristic man, also seems to walk with a certain leader sort of way. He walks and acts like he is a great leader of sorts.

    • Arrogant: Nikolaus sometimes believes that he’s better than everyone else. Especially when he’s acting proper. He sometimes will believe that he is better than some commoners just because he is a noble. He may also claim that he is more proper and respectful then them.

    • Easily-Angered: Due to his limited patience, Nikolaus can at times loses his composure and become very verbal and/or loud, showing his anger. This is usually directed more at those he already knows or to a stranger annoying him. Because Nikolaus is often stressed this can lead to him showing his anger more often. Nikolaus tries to stay calm and collected in situations that will make him angry, though this can present a challenge, often leaving him stressed afterwards.

    • Possessive: One thing that Nikolaus absolutely despises is bandits. He feels that they are no more than petty filth trying to steal his ‘hard earned’ things. This is a reason Nikolaus has become more possessive over the years. However he is not just possessive over things, but over his family. He is very possessive of his son Luther, though when trying to find Luther a possible wife, he is more lenient about this personality trait.

    • Daring: Nikolaus has always been the brave and adventurous type. He quite enjoys the thrill of battle and the rush of anxiety and seriousness that he gets as he goes into battle. Ever since Nikolaus was a boy he has loved to climb trees and explore, it makes you think why he didn’t become an explorer. Though Nikolaus still loves his work and loves adventures.

    • Masculine: Definitely leaning towards the manly side of life, Nikolaus is more masculine in the way he does things. Nikolaus is a tall and strong man who enjoys being in the military and drinking ale. He’s basically your stereotypical bruteish man. Though he wouldn’t describe himself as brutish, he still is quite barbaric at times.

    Strengths

    • Bulky: Nikolaus’s body structure is one of an athletic militaristic man. After years of serving in the military and countless hours of training Nikolaus has grown to be very strong. As for being tall he’s always been naturally tall. By the time he was 12 he was already 5’4’’.

    • Does Well Under Pressure: Nikolaus has learned over the years to stay calm under pressure. Even though he is easily-angered when he’s under pressure miraculously he manages to stay calm and collected. This is probably because of his days in the military. Though for some reason even before that he was able to stay calm under pressure.

    • Smart: Even though Nikolaus appears to be a strong and brutish man he does enjoy learning. He feels that everyone should dedicate their lives to improving the next generation. Learning is a way in which you can pass your knowledge on to others. This is why Nikolaus has always been a sort of brainiac.



    Weaknesses

    • His Hearing: After years and years Nikolaus's hearing is starting to go. While in the military there were many loud noises that have started to take a toll on his hearing. Now, he can't really understand things when people whisper them. This often makes him mad, and you really don't want to see him when he is mad.
    • Careless: Nikolaus at times seems to rush into things. He often doesn't stop to think of the consequences of his actions. If he's mad he is especially likely to run blindly into something. This over time has become a weakness that he hasn't been able to get rid of. He just seems to forget things when he's about to rush into something.
    • Independent: Nikolaus is rather independent, however this isn't necessarily a good thing. When it comes to working with others it certainly is difficult for him. He is so used to being independent and being a leader than when someone else ends up being a leader instead of himself he gets quite angry. Though Nikolaus is independent, he still has trouble cooperating with others.

    Relationships:


    • Luther Artiemus: Nikolaus’s son, a young man who Nikolaus tries to shape into a proper and honorable soldier, @Zombiel3ait

    • Theodore Artiemus: Nikolaus’s dear nephew who even though being older than and in his opinion more mature respects Theodore for his admirable actions to help the family, @Zombiel3ait

    • Hugo Artiemus: Nikolaus’s older brother, whom he doesn’t really rely on or concern himself with.

    • Alaric Artiemus: Oldest Brother, to whom Nikolaus admired for his extensive military service and running of the family, deceased.

    • Lukan Artiemus: Father to Nikolaus, deceased.

    • Marthas Artiemus: Mother to Nikolaus, deceased.

    • Kathe Forst: Nikolaus’s ex-wife, alive.

    • Heidi Vladinov: A girl whom Nikolaus met chatting with his son, could she be his possible daughter in law? @Charlizard96

    Life Story:


    In the year 269 A.C. a baby boy named Nikolaus was born to Marthas and Luken Artiemus. As a child Nikolaus was an adventurous boy, climbing trees and playing with wooden swords. By the time he was four he grew an interest in Regalia’s military, “I want to join the Regalia military when I’m all grown up!” But until he was ‘all grown up’ Nikolaus needed something that would keep him busy. This is when he grew addicted to learning. Nikolaus was fascinated by learning at such a young age that by the time he was ten he barely even went outside.


    When Nikolaus turned twelve he finally grew interested in Regala’s military again. He still was a total knowledge-freak however he would still find time to sword fight with his wooden swords. On Nikolaus’s fifteenth birthday his father gave him a steel longsword for him to train with. He was overjoyed with the gift, training with the sword whenever he could. As the years went by he kept training with the longsword until one day he was finally old enough to join the military.


    Now forty-three years old, Nikolaus has a reputation in the military, gaining the respect of many of his peers. He also had a son along the way, however his wife and he divorced. Now he tries to mold Luther into a proper and honorable man like he believes he can be. Nikolaus frowns and smiles upon the past, however he believes that what happened, happened, and there is no re-doing the past.
     
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  2. OpenTheDamnDoor

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    Peer Review!
    I'm quite new to giving people reviews so bare with me.
    The only issues I personally see with this review is
    • I see that you have four weaknesses, the staff does like when your weaknesses and strengths are balanced and will probably ask you to add a strength!
    • What culture of Ailor is he? (Ex. Daendroque, Northerne)
    • Other than that, this is a pretty nice and creative character sheet! Good luck!
     
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  3. Zombiel3ait

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    I'd do well to mention that he is an Alt-Regalian Ailor, not just an Ailor :3
     
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  5. Walrusaur_

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    I'll be reviewing this sheet.
    1. Remove and replace Claustrophobia, Possessive, and Stressed Out.
    2. Tall and Strong sounds like two strengths, change name to be more generally representative such as "Bulky"
    Make those changes in BLUE then tag me when you are done.
     
  6. Sarwynn

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    Sorry for the inactivity lately! I'll be back into the swing of things probably on Monday or later today!
     
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    Alright, thank you for letting me know.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    Thanks!
     
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    Henck Your Friendly Neighbourhood Blacksmith

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    Don't know if you still play this character, but if you wish to be added to the relevant Skype chats and forum lists, feel free to contact me at 'doctor.pannenkoek' over Skype.
     
  12. Zombiel3ait

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    @Chaenath_ With age ups, Nikolaus would at least be 42-45 as Luther, his son, is now 25.
     
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