Newspaper Review -blues Corner-

[Minecraftkittys]

Recently I acquired their newspaper. It was ok but its seems to much fantasy like. Its more of a conspiracy newspaper. He stated that since the Crimson started hunting the undead the might start going after other races. This is absurd. Crimsons might raid faction but the have reasons. From what I can tell tigran, orcs, and many other races are of the light. Now for vespids I can see them hunting them sooner are later. He also talked about the Kings Tavern being violent. There are fights but they are usually handled quickly. I give this paper a 5/10. If you are into conspiracies. I will be hunting more newspapers. If you have a newspaper message me.
(P.S Since I just finished the festival I said I would host this is a new project. I am still building the sandlite route)

 

[bigwiggy]

I cant really comment on this, as I own a seperate branch of BC. But I`ll bring this to Blues attention.

 

[Bsavs]

I await your review of the Viridian Times with bated breath, masterful Minecraftkitty sir.

 

[Mattium_]

A Few tips:
I like the idea of a 'Reviewer' for newspapers. It adds a debt to business Role-play in the game, however now for some criticism.
* You commonly 'spelt things wrong in this review, and placed words where they shouldn't be. You may want to read through your reviews and get someone else to before posting.
* Reviews, and many other types of essays have a format.
Intr0-
Paragraphs-
Conclusion-

This is how I would format it.
Intro - As of recent days, I have come into reading the 'Blues Corner' Newspaper. The author of this, _____, has written in a style that is quiet vague (if this is true), but overall focuses on the larger issues at hand. Although, a common negative remark to his writing style, would be his lack of perspective form the witnesses in the current events he address.

Blues Corner Newspaper addressed the most commonly spoken issue at hand.... The Crimson Inquisition and where they stand, now that they are back!
They quite clearly brought to light the circling rumors spreading by word through Regalia.
Now, we can't honestly say majority of these are wrong, however we find it highly lightly they are completely true.
Some rumors that they brought out include;
* 'The Crimson moving to fight other races'
* etc
* etc.
Where is your proof, your evidence, your resources & your witnesses 'Blues Corner'?!

To conclude this, I believe the format in which they wrote this was all around good. However, the 'BluesCorner' newspaper would need to back up these rumors with evidence.
Thank you.

 

[Iso Pode]

Oh I hope they don't start hunting Vespids....

 

[Wackeo]

Oh I hope they don't start hunting Vespids....

Click to shrink...

The Crimson never will as they have only ever hunted Vampires