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    Basic Information
    • Full name: Nevarr Nauravat Traeiirn Mor-Ornn Raz-Kelinnaar (Nevarr Traeiirn)
    • Race: Kathar (Cult of Shadows)
    • Age: 46
    • Sex: Female
    • Eye Color: Blue
    Core Concept
    • Nevarr is a devout Void Worshipper. Having witnessed a manifestation of the Thousand Eye God, she believes she has been burdened with a pact to be upheld, resulting in a terrified and reverential worship. To her, Void Worship is the ultimate expression of egoism.
    • Nevarr was a religious acolyte who fled the Dread Empire after an act of cowardice and is desperate to earn her way back and restore her name. To this end she has trained herself in espionage, the occult, and has formed what she sees as a pact with the Dark Ancient of blood and secrets.
    Proficiency Information
    Strength: 0

    Constitution: 0


    Wisdom: 3
    • Dimenthist Wisdom Pack
    • Deeplore Wisdom Pack
    • Soulrend Wisdom Pack
    Dexterity: 6
    • Reaction Pack
    • Venom Pack
    • Outlaw Pack
    • Disguise Skill Pack
    • Parkour Pack
    • Hook Shot
    • Balance Pack [Via Vampirism]
    Magic: 1
    • Enchanting
    • Betrayer Pack [Via Vampirism]
    • Meddler Pack [Via Vampirism]
    • Recovery Pack [Via Vampirism]
    Charisma: 4
    • State Saboteur Pack
    • West Linguist Pack
    • Spirit Enfeeblement Pack
    • Spirit Anchor Pack
    • Spirit Hexlord Pack [Via Kathar]

    Ability Information
    Kathar Racials: (3 Abilities, 17 specials)
    Blooded Vampire: (0 Abilities, 16 specials)
    Ritualism - Void Worship: (4 Specials)
    Spell Point Buy Specials: (3 Specials)
    • Dueling Brand
    • Scan Sight
    • Memory Break
    Curses Specials: (9 Specials) [Via Vampirism]
    • Accursed Senses
    • Accursed Heartbeat
    • Arcane Wardrobe
    • Chain Break
    • Accursed Fall
    • Cursewalking
    • Possession
    • Curse Smithing
    • Accursed Locale
    Languages
    • Common - 10/10 (Free)
    • Katharic - 10/10 (Parent)
    • Altalar - 10/10
    • Saan - 9/10
    • Suvial - 7/10
    • Ithanian - 6/10
    • Allorn - 5/10
    • Sinnayed - 4/10
    • Ibeth - 1/10
    • Sulvaley - 1/10
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    Appearance Information
    • Nevarr possesses both [Void Scale] in the form of uneven dark purple cracked scales on her shoulders and forearms, as well as two stubby blackened horns from [Void Horns].
    • Nevarr prefers to appear as a Cult of Pride member. Nevarr’s deathly white hair is pulled into twin braids to frame her pale-skinned angular features. Lithe and slender her 6’0” frame is built for agility and endurance more than physical strength.
    • Nevarr's alternate form, from both vampirism and Soulrend, is inspired by Inthalis. It takes the appearance of a rather monstrous form of a humanoid shape with pinkish skin. Above the lower face the head splits into a mass of tendrils housing many eyes. She also possesses the Inthalis’s Reprise version of herself as a Teledden. And finally the Dreamform of a bookish Teledden named Vencyne Tyrnea.
    Life Story
    • Nevarr was adopted from a Future House by Sylmaer and Lyiie'leina, who had returned to the Dread Empire after having a Silven child named Leoronn. This gave Lyiie'leina a position of religious privilege within their community. While her childhood was quite a happy one, there was a noticeable sense of disappointment hanging over her, due to her mundanity when compared with her older sibling.
    • Nevarr often felt overshowed by her older sibling, compounded by Sylmaer instilling the virtue of ambition into the family. Nevaria was quite the tumultuous child, trying to prove herself her other siblings equal. Sylmaer in turn taught her the beginnings of his more roguish skills before she was sent to the Paarthalaar Prefect Seminary.
    • Nevarr was 26 and well into finishing her studies at the Seminary when she made the acquaintance of another quarrelsome Kathar. After a strong verbal disagreement, she was challenged to a duel. However, she denied the challenge. Suddenly she found herself pinned as a coward and every opponent her family had come down upon her.
    • Unsafe to return home, she was effectively banished from the Empire. She fled until a time she could prove herself no longer a coward. She recalled a place her parents mentioned. An undercity, where they had both found their honor. A place where the dregs from above mix with the terrors from below. Regalia.
    • Arriving within Regalia Nevarr worked hard to carve out a life for herself. Plying her trade as an information broker, spymaster and intelligencer, when the chance to contact her deity arose, she took it without expecting much. As her deity actually responded, this led her to believe she had formed some kind of pact with Inthalis. a pact that must be upheld.
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    Update!
    I've made a bunch of much needed updates to this app due to the Alchemy update, changelog is below:
    • Changed alchemy proficiency from 8 to 10 (8 is no longer a meaningful proficiency and 5 is too low for this character)
    • Updated age from 29 to 31 to accommodate above change
    • Included 5 proficiency in Dancing Arts as hobby points
    • Updated body stat calculation to new formula
    • Reduced body shape in conjunction with new formula
    Updates have been marked in this sort of pinkish fuchsia colour
     
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    Hello! I will be picking up this app to fill in. Expect a response soon! Also, if your reviewer is no longer staff please set the tag to needs reviewer! @ElderShrub
     
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    @Caelamus Updated for the Kathar and Ritualism rewrite!

    Changelog:
    • As part of the Kathar update, included Scion of Secrets under special traits, expanded visual information and personality.
    • Included Mageblooded under special traits, selected three Sorcery Spells of the Chaos school. Incorporated into background
    • Switched preferred weapon from Kathar Daggers to Boar Spear as this makes more sense for her background, and is made possible by not needing to constantly carry it due to the ritualism update. Adjusted proficiency points to match.
    • Incorporated theatre arts as remaining 5 hobby proficiency points and justified in background
    • Updated body stat to include dancing arts as apparently I forgot to do this in the last update
    All changes have been marked in this sort of pinkish fuchsia colour.
     
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    @Caelamus In the words of the great Nicolas Cage "Well, the fact is ... I turned into a vampire. It's a long story."

    No changelog, since I just updated the Skill Information section. Auld Catharsis made it a bit messy so please let me know if it's difficult to understand and I'll try reworking it. I also decided to remove the 2 points in stealth and place them instead into void worship to represent character growth. This is the only non-vampire related change.

    All changes have been marked in this sort of pinkish fuchsia colour.
     
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    @Caelamus
    This character has been around for about nine months now. While playing a young elf is fun, I feel it's time for an age-up to reflect character growth and better fill her niche. As well as a general update to keep this app current.

    Changelog:
    • Changed age from 31 to 43
    • Added 10 Perception Training to better suit her spymaster niche
    • Added 2 proficiency points to Theater Arts
    • Moved 1 hobby point from Dancing Arts to Theater Arts
    • Updated Physical Stat for Theater Arts points change
    • Updated Special Traits to new Kathar terminology
    • Set all Vampirism changes to light grey [Light grey]
    • Replaced first question in personality section to better match the way the character developed from original intention
    • Further added small updates to personality section due to character growth
    • Added section to end of life story about arrival and activities in Regalia - Will be added to in further updates as character develops
    • EDIT: Forgot to update the total Proficiency Points counter. Done that now.
    All changes have been marked in this sort of pinkish fuchsia colour.
     
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    @Caelamus
    Update on the update! Please read this and the last post. Seems it was a good time to update the app, as the new Dorkarth just dropped. While this character's Vampirism isn't active at the moment, to keep this compliant I've updated the vampiric Special Traits.

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    You forgot to include vampire form paragraph, this is mandatory. Make it apparent.
     
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    Honestly I entirely forgot to do a Vampiric Form. Took a little while to come up with something suitably creative for it. Hopefully I haven't pushed that creative freedom too far. The form has been added in a spoiler to the Special Traits section.
     
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    There is no escaping the updates. You can not hide and you can not outrun them. They come for us all.

    Changelog:
    • Entirely redid Proficiency section. With removal of athletics and no suitable replacement decided to lean harder into spymaster niche
    • Recalculated body shape
    • Added Ritualism under Special Traits
    • Updated Mageblood under Special Traits
    • Reworded skills paragraph under Backstory. No substantial change, just removed justification for athletics proficiency
    All changes have been marked in this sort of pinkish fuchsia colour.
     
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    @Caelamus
    Should probably tag you, even if not strictly necessary. Also to get the app off of page 9.
     
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    @Caelamus

    Took a while but finally updated the app to the new Kathar update. Along with smaller changes. See below.

    Changelog:
    • Switched subrace to half Saivalthar half Zolathar to keep with niche.
    • Aged up slightly for those final 2 proficiency points and reshuffled proficiency points
    • Added Modern Altalar language as part of above
    • Changed appearance to match new subrace
    • Several small redactions due to minor lore changes.
     
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    Big update! Nevaria has gone through some neat character development and acquired Faith Manifest abilities. There's been some skill reshuffling as well due to the loss of Ritualism, adjusting to a new niche, and a change in preferred combat style. Finally, I updated the aesthetics a bit to reflect this new niche for Nevaria. Changelog below

    • Added Faith Manifest. Removed old Ritualism
    • Updated aesthetics
    • Changed preferred weapon to atlatl/blowgun. Spear became impractical, wanted to try something cool & unique
    • Point changes:
      • Removed 9 points from Ritualism
      • Removed 2 points from Stealth Rogue
      • Changed Spear Combat to Light Ranged Combat (No point change)
      • Added 10 points to Alchemy Science
      • Added 1 point to Dagger Combat
    • Adjusted Physical Stat to new points
    • Updated name field, since she's planning to quietly marry next week. Will likely use both depending on circumstance
    • Removed Vamparism: It's been inactive for months and I have no plans to return to it
    • Updated Religion section under Personality and Abilities to include IC developments
    • Updated Fear section under Personality and Abilities due to Faith Manifest and IC developments
    • Added to last paragraph of life story to be more relevant to current arc and include Faith Manifest acquisition.
     
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    @Caelamus
    More work to your pile! Sorry! Changelog for the proficiency update is below. Specifically take note of the Cleric School, this might need to be changed.

    • Reduced Alchemy Science to 15 (10+5 racial boost).
    • Removed Dancing Arts (4) & Mixology Arts (2)
    • Took the Hobby points from above and moved them into Theatre Arts. No overall point change
    • Added Espionage School
    • Added Cleric School. However, while Nevaria attended this school she failed to graduate for backstory reasons. Thus while she has the skills she is not an ordained priestess at present. This felt important enough to note on the proficiency list. If you want this school removed or presented in some other way please let me know.
    • Added Espionage School (This one was graduated)
    • Added Roguery points and abilities
    • Changed Linguistic Science to Linguistics (Altalar Language)
    • Recalculated body stat
    • Updated life story to include schooling without messing with major events
    • Found a few typos after saving the edit so I fixed these. If you're seeing multiple edits logged, that's why.
     
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    @Caelamus
    Yet another update dawns. This time the new abilities update as part of the half-races changes. While I was hesitant with the idea before I've turned Nevaria into a full-blooded Saivalathar rather than a Half Model to keep her within the same niche. More information in the changelog below and marked in this sort of purplish red colour.

    Changelog:
    • Changed from Half Model (Saivalathar/Zolathar) to just Saivalathar
    • Changed racial bonus from Alchemy to Theater Arts
    • Put released points from Theater Arts into Dagger Combat
    • Recalculated Body Stat
    • Added changed Kathar abilities under Special Traits
    • Edited life story to remove any reference to being Half Model
     
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    Finally updated Nevaria to the new format. I also took the time to make a few adjustments to her proficiency points. Sadly alchemy no longer includes the niche for this character. Instead she's learnt from the Ssalerzyra (Burch) household both engineering and the Zorraana language. I also changed her combat from dagger to rapier because it makes more sense now that she's a full Saivalthar.

    No formatting changes have been highlighted but all proficiency changes have been highlighted in this sort of pinkish fuchsia colour.
     
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    None of us can stop these updates. Here is the changelog for the new Kathar update! All changes marked in fuschia-pink.
    • Changed name to fit new naming convention
    • Changed sub-race to Cult of Shadows
    • Added 4 Light Ranged Combat due to Magic Dagger ability
    • Updated physical stat due to new max
    • Changed Kathar Racials to 6 default abilities
    • Added some more context in appearance paragraph and changed her mimic/guise to be compliant with new Shadow Cult abilities
    • She is now adopted as per new lore, changed life story
    • Also edited life story to remove all gender-specific familial terms
     
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    Cael is still staff but the app is over 1 month old so this is just a bump rather than flooding poor Cael with pings.

    No changelog for the proficiency update. Did my best to translate her over, however the big change is Djjwa had friendship ended with clockwork, now blood is their aesthetic. So no more engineering, Nev uses blood magic now.
     
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    @sonofthestars Heya Starson! While I've tried to avoid going vampire in the past to avoid ability stacking, at the moment it seems that is where Nevarr will do her best work as an evil minion. Blood for the blood god and all that. As such, it is vampire time again.

    Changelog:
    Added the extra 4 vampiric points.
    Added Blooded Vampire to ability information
    Described both form from Glamour Magic and Vampire Form under Appearance Information
     
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    To whomever is kind enough to pick this up, here comes an update! While some changes represent progression over time more are just due to new abilities being available or others being changed/removed. All changes have been marked in this colour again.

    • Added Deeplore and Soulrend wisdom packs
    • Added Knocking Pack from Ranged
    • Removed outdated Forgery and Stealth packs
    • Removed glamour magic and replaced vampiric/Soulrend form with the monstrous form from that, I had too many alternate forms and they needed to be consolidated.
    • Replaced vampiric Time Magic with Evasion Pack, didn't exist when I last updated the app and makes more sense.
    • Put the two unspent charisma points into Warlock and Hexlord Demonology packs.
     
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    Hi Jade! Finally got around to updating this app to all the various proficiency updates. No changes to backstory or anything else. As such there's no changelog for this one but changes are marked in this color and what has been swapped out is below.

    Removed:
    Thin Blades Pack
    Knocking Pack
    Trailing Pack
    Blood Magic Pack
    Sensor Magic Pack

    Replaced With:

    Coward Pack
    Evasion Pack
    Scoundrel Pack
    Scaling Pack
    Enchanting

    Vampire commutable Point-Buy changed from:
    Cursemaster Pack
    Evasion Pack
    Metal Magic Pack
    Sand Magic Pack
    To:
    Predator Pack
    Betrayer Pack
    Meddler Pack
    Recovery Pack

    Plus added all the chosen specials for both magic and curses pack.
     
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    Heya Jade! Another update just to keep up with the many proficiency updates and other changes since the last one. While all changes are marked in this colour there is no changelog for this one as I am being lazy.

    Oh also, added in the new Dreamform into appearance information and entirely forgot to color it, my apologies!
     

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