Rejected Sheet Nathaniel Drayton

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    "How badly do you want your redemption?"
    Basic information
    Full name: Nathaniel Drayton
    Nick: The Reaper
    Age
    : 45
    - Birthday: April 6th - Aries
    Race: Bolven Ailor
    Culture: Regal
    Gender: Male
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Preferred Weapon: Long Daggers.
    Character themes
    :
    Combat Theme - Passive Theme
    Main Theme
    Skill Information:

    Total Points: 50 Core Points

    Core Proficiency's

    Dagger Combat +20 (Core)

    Fist Combat +10 (Core)

    Linguistic Science + 3 (Core)

    Arcanology +9 (Core)
    -Artifact Knowledge
    -Essence Knowledge
    -Arken Knowledge

    Core Points Available: 8
    Remaining Unspent.

    Hobby Proficiency

    Writing Art+10 (Hobby Points)

    Body Shape

    20 + 10 = 30

    20 (Cratos Limit)

    Ripped Body Shape

    Low Body Fat

    Languages

    Common (Taught by Parents and picked up)
    Kathar Altalar (Studied/Exposed to the language every day)

    {INACTIVE} Werebeastism: Raprann


    {ACTIVE} Vampirism: Cratos

    Base Cratos Kit

    Cratos Mutations:

    Tech Vileshot

    Tech Exploitation

    Tech Maintenance

    Tech Venting

    Tech Re-Acquisition


    Abilities:

    (Racial) Body Morph I

    (Racial) Super self I

    (Racial) Super self III



    Visual Information


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    Eye Color: Dark Brown
    Hair Color: Pitch Black
    Skin Color: White
    Height: 6'6
    Clothing Preference: Robe wear and casual darker clothes.

    Personality: The Core List
    Character Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Character Personality: Antagonist
    Character Religion: None







    ~Youth~ 1-8: From the very moment Nathaniel was born, he was considered special by his parents. At first they thought he may have been dead due to the baby not crying or breathing, but after the exposition of oxygen the baby started breathing after he was out of his mother. Shortly after he started having the normal emotions of a baby and his cries were completely normal but he did not cry as much as a normal baby should. His parents went along with it and since they were of the Bolven lineage, they thought it strong that he did not tear much. As Nathaniel grew, he showed natural signs of a warrior. His father took it upon himself to teach Nathaniel at the age of four some basic combat. Nathaniel's interest at the age of four fell in the lines of being a warrior and seeking knowledge. His father did not take it easy on him at the age of four, giving him multiple beatings when he messed up and beatings when Nathaniel got out of line. This showed the way for Nathaniel as he developed a mentality of respect and discipline at a very early age. A year later at the age of five, Nathaniel took a liking to fist combat but also telling his father that he had rather a strong and slim body. Nathaniel trained with his father during the day and studied books gaining knowledge with his mother during the night for the next two years. Now at the age of seven, Nathaniel has built some muscle memory and had his eyes laid on daggers. He asked his father if he could teach him how to wield daggers but his father only knew of fist and sword combat so after speaking to his mother who knew about single and dual wielding dagger combat, she taught him for the next few years.



    ~Teenage life~8-19: Nathaniel had grown to be a skillful warrior and one who has much knowledge. He took on the skill of utilizing daggers from his mother and fist combat from his father. Nathaniel's interest in knowledge began to increase as he's read books every night since the age of four where his mother supported his interests. A few years later, Nathaniel decides to leave home and with the trust of his combat abilities and knowledge, his parents allow him to. Now at the age of 14 Nathaniel enters a library filled with numerous books where he found his happy place, but also his first weakness. Nathaniel wore a brown robe to the library that covered his body well but was easy to move in. There at the library, there were a few other bolvens who thought Nathaniel was weird as not only did he wear a robe but was clearly happy at the sight of books. Nathaniel had not yet fought against others who were around his age as he got used to fighting his mother and father. These teenagers decided to approach Nathaniel and have some "fun" in there own way. One boy slams his hand into one of Nathaniel's books causing it to fall down and looks at Nathaniel with a smirk as he is surrounded by two other boys. Mocking and teasing Nathaniel, they thought Nathan was rather weird as he did not express any stress, frustration or anger towards them, just a neutral look almost looking down on them. This angers the boys and one of them throws a right fist towards Nathaniel's face in which he proceeds to parry it to his right and knock the boy off-balanced in which he follows to choking the boy in his right arm. "Apologize and I won't end his life" Nathaniel says before his father enters the library as he was following him to see what he has been doing. His father yells at him and Nathaniel lets go of the boy where his father apologizes to the boys and forces Nathaniel to do the same. They both exit the library but the three boys were furious and told their fathers about it who happen to be mercenaries. Nathaniel leaves once more and promises to his mother and father he will not fight no matter what happens, but the boys and their mercenary fathers find their way to Nathaniel's home where his father and mother end up fighting it out. His father and mother end up beating the mercenaries but are both stabbed in their backs by two of the boys who yell out "Where is your son!". Both parents say nothing to them as the mercenaries finish the job by cutting both their heads off and leaving a note to Nathaniel, "Meet us at the abandoned building a block from your home if you wish to die". Nathaniel arrives home after spending a considerable amount of time at the library to find his parents have been slaughtered. Tears fall from the boys eyes and anger does emerge but he knows doing nothing will help them rest and knows he will have to go against their promises. Nathaniel grabs multiple items, bags, daggers, kitchen knives, ropes, and a boar trap, then heads off to their location. Nathaniel stalks the mercenary fathers and boys. Six were present, three fathers and three sons all laughed as they continued insulting Nathaniel's parents. Nathan who hears their insults remains calm and decides to set his trap up outside of the abandoned building, keeping both the noise and setup down. He took the knowledge he got from many books on trapping large creatures and would set these up for the mercenaries. Now after having many knives set up and daggers set up with rope along with a boar trap, he positions himself at the door and knocks on it shouting "I'm here!". One of the mercenaries yells out, "Stay right there or you will die as your parents did!" before opening up the door and having a rope snap right into the mans face from the outside, two knives flying right into the mans neck. The man would fall down holding his neck as he'd gasp for air but as Nathaniel's eyes looked down on the fallen man watching as his life was being drained, the second mercenary and the son of the first charge out for the door. Nathaniel turns around and walks three steps before kicking a flat rock off of a rope causing three knives to fly right into the second mercenaries head, and as the boy walked right into an open boar trap, it would tighten on the boys left leg, raising him into the air upside-down, where he would watch what had happen. Both the mercenaries who had knives in them had now passed. The third Mercenary jumped out of an open window where he stepped right into a dagger that had been placed firmly between two rocks where his foot was impaled. Nathaniel took a small dagger from his waist and threw it towards the mans throat where he looked up from his wound to meet a knife right in his throat. His son stood there behind watching as their fathers died. The two boys watch their steps as they make their way outside to see Nathaniel looking down on them. Furious the boys were but not as furious as Nathaniel had been to lose the ones he loved. Nathaniel dressed in his robes would unsheathe two long daggers that belonged to his mother and held them palm facing out towards the boys where each held a single handed longsword. The boy in the boar trap had no weapon and could stay struggling in the air. The two boys charged at Nathaniel in which Nathaniel countered by avoiding their wild slashes and sending a swift slash at their sword holding hands followed by a hilt smash to the side of each boys jaw. Both boys dropped there weapons and as Nathaniel faced the boy in the boar trap, sending each long dagger through the hearts of the boys behind him without watching them. He'd swiftly take the daggers out as the boys fell to the ground where he eyed the last boy in the trap. "Please, I'm sorry! Please let me live" Nathaniel looked at the boy with a blank face before responding, "Did you spare my parents?" The boy cried as Nathaniel sheathed his two long daggers, and lifted his robe out to expose many kitchen knives inside of it where he had taken them out and thrown them one by one at the boy. The boy struggled as he cried in pain to the blades being sent into his body, his leg, his arms, his stomach, grazing his face, and more all over it. The boy looked at Nathaniel with a last tear in his eyes and blood falling from his mouth where Nathaniel smirked in a somewhat scary face, throwing the last knife into the boys forehead where he had walked away from the abandoned house, knowing it was not going to be checked for a while. Nathaniel had acquired much knowledge and was calm about everything that had occurred. He knew what to do exactly and burnt down his home so that others will not suspect who had lived there. Nathaniel then made his way on a trail in search of new knowledge, closing his eyes and smirking once more. "That went exactly as the book predicted. I have much work to complete." walking off into the distance.


    ~Adult life~19-45: Nathaniel had indeed acquired much information and practiced his skills constantly along with reading and visiting multiple libraries. Nathaniel had met many people listening to there stories in areas ranging from bars, libraries and cafes. Nathaniel even met a knight and questioned him what would happen if he came upon a house and multiple people were murdered. The knight shocked by his response told him they would go through the lengths of finding out who did it, asking those who were near if they knew of the situation and would go through the lengths of finding the exact prints of their boots and sizes of their weapons as well as many other clues. Nathaniel nodded to him as the knight only eyed Nathan but did not question it. Nathaniel took his knowledge into account and became smarter about how he would handle that past situation again with his parents murderers. Ten years pass and Nathaniel is now twenty nine years old. The man enters a bar dressed in a dark robe with green linings on it. He brings only some attention to himself but simply ignores what he could as he would settle down, placing a medium sized pouch of books onto a nearby table, sitting down and deciding to read for his time. One man approaches Nathan and decides to mess with him. "You becoming a priest or something bud? This ain't the library" The man laughs as does his buddies in the corner. The man reaches for one of Nathans books before Nathaniel quickly unsheathes one of his long daggers, sliding the edge of it at the mans chin, cutting part of his beard and twirling the blade down in front of the mans hand as his posture was now forward. "You touch these books, and you'll lose more than just hair on your face" The men in the back are in shock and the man who had reached for his books snakingly stepped back and made his way to his buddies where he'd sheathe his long dagger and placed it back onto his waist, covering it with his robe. A man in a dark hood nearby decides to get up and speak as he stopped at Nathans table "You have some skill with those blades I see. What's your name?" Nathaniel lowers his book to eye the man up and down before looking down on him as well and ignoring his request. "Oh? You won't tell? Well I guess this will make you tell then" Nathaniel remains calm sighing as he was confident in his abilities before the man quickly snatches his books and the book he was holding running out of the bar. Shocked by this Nathaniel runs off after the man, catching part of him running in between the side of the bar. Following the hooded man, he'd watch as the hooded one would jump strangely over objects, barrels, crates, against the wall, lifting himself up swiftly above Nathaniel and falling without a scratch. Nathaniel knew the man was skilled but still ended up being shocked as he'd take another turn, stepping on a nearby crate and jumping over to reach and pull himself onto a roof. Nathaniel would get up and run as he'd jump onto another roof and would climb himself down. He'd see an open alley way and would run straight to it where the hooded man would be standing there facing him. Nathan made it to the alley as it was placed in a sort of round way almost like a building arena. The hooded man held his books in his right hand, placing it into the medium sized pouch and keeping that in his right hand. Nathaniel charged at the hooded man where the hooded one would successfully dodge each time Nathan reached out to grab the pouch. The hooded one was impressed by Nathans movements and speed but saw through all of it. He continued to dodge and parry Nathans grabs with swift and smooth movements. Nathaniel got frustrated but still remained a bit calm where he'd unsheathe both daggers and decided to cut the hooded one up. Nathan darted forward with both daggers and the hooded one continued to dodge him and parrying. *Swipe* *Slash* *Lunge* *Thrust* *Dart* *Cut* *Stab* *Slash* *Slash* *Slash* *Downward Slash* *Forward Thrust* Upper Slash* Forward Lunge* The hooded man dodged all of Nathans attacks and with only his left hand, would hit the wrists of Nathaniel causing him to drop the blades, and sending a kick right into Nathaniel's gut. Nathan backed off and took a knee as he had not taken a strike like that since he was little training with his father. Nathan coughed out for a moment and stood back up where he stepped his left foot forward, pivoting his right leg back, holding his left arm out and his right arm into his chest. He'd take a fighting pose and the hooded man dropped the bag of his books, lunging forward to Nathan.
    Surprised at his speed, Nathan sent a swift jab to the hooded mans face as the hooded man parried with both arms away from him however bending Nathans arm in the direction away, kicking his left leg behind Nathans left and sweeping Nathan down to the ground. Nathan was in shock as he knew the technique but never seen it done so smoothly and fast in combat. He'd attempt to get up but would notice his vision was rather blurry along with his arms and legs shaking as his vision continued to blurrify and shake. Nathan had not realized it but as he went to get up, the hooded man sent a strike to the back of his neck where his nerves were distorted. Nathan struggled as he stood up, the hooded man praising him for surviving that. He'd notice through the blurr the man was coming and decided to send a right cross for the man. The hooded man caught his fist letting it fly back with his left shoulder, lunging his right shoulder forward and sending a powerful upper cut to Nathans jaw, redirecting his own attack and falling to the ground where he watched as the hooded man walked off with his books. A few hours later, Nathaniel woke up to see his books and the hooded man were gone and decided to run out of the alley to look for him. Frustrated in not getting any information on him, he'd scream out loud. Nathan searched for the man for a very long time after that, furious at how easily he was beaten in combat and furious as the books he was hoping to read. He went to many libraries and found those books no more, they were no where to be found and were of mythical creatures known as the Vampire and spells they possessed, ancient and forbidden ones(Old Lore). Many years pass, Nathaniel now at the age of fourty five continues to constantly search for that hooded man and the books he had lost, coming to a failure each way. He continues his training in combat and his search for knowledge so he may never be humiliated like he was many years ago against that hooded man. He had forgotten about his smart skills in hunting large creatures, growing frustrated in how he could have trapped the man but looks back into many things he could have found after reading those ancient books of vampires. Nathaniel now making his way to the inside city of Regalia hopes to find those books and the hooded man to someday pay him revenge for what he did, and seek the knowledge he lost.

    Recent Life:
    Nathaniel has had quite the struggle in Regalia. Being faced with the sanguine is a mistake he'd live to forget. After walking into the sewers, a wrong direction from his intent, he were attacked and kidnapped, shortly brought to a layer underneath the sewers. From there he were tortured against his will until he accepted becoming infected with the sanguine. Time went on after the new dorkarth was made. Plenty of crimes have been committed while being afflicted with the sanguine. More time passes on in the span of a month where Nathaniel found himself a little group that was known for causing trouble and went by "The Cluster". Having being named the "Reaper" and carrying out crimes, his mental state drove itself into a higher madness, finding himself tortured again to once serve the sanguine only controlled and not one made for the chaos and destructive nature the sanguine possess alone. After having many battles, getting injured many times and finding himself at a corner to a werebeast, he had his face smashed in to the point where his literal cheek were torn from his face. After being taken away by the werebeast and cured of his vampirism, he stays at their estate, scarred mentally and physically by the past and crimes he went through as a sanguine. Anger, Rage, Sadness all linger within him as he is stuck with a brutal wound and memories that would haunt him for just about his entire life, but also at the fact he could do nothing more but co-exist and live.


    Nathaniel after causing much trouble to the life of Regalians and the life of the Sanguine, causing many injures and death, found himself at the Collective base, where he were slaughtered.

     

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    Changed talent points(Had too much)
     
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    Changed talent points and hobby points to suit the 20 point requirements between both.
     
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    @Mollymock Spent the rest of my core points. Added Ritualism. Added Linguistic Science. App is up for Re-Review now.
     
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    This is no longer a proficiency. Please change this.
     
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    @Mollymock Due to the announcement, removed all ritualist points and abilities. Removed Throwing Combat. Kept Linguistic Science and added 10 points to Theatre Arts.
     
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    @Mollymock Spent rest of the Core points. Stave Combat +4.
     
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    Changed fonts and colors on some text and fixed a sentence in back story.
     
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    @Mollymock Vampirism was cured. Character no longer has daggers nor anyway to use them. Took away some points but kept some as for the training he's had written in the back story. Removed theatre art(Didn't really understand this irply). Removed stave combat.
     
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    Updated Backstory
     
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    @Mollymock Updated old Bolven Ailor abilities to the new kit/rework. Nathaniel has been infected and now has the werebeastism curse of Raprann. Nathaniel has learned (Past two weeks irl) sorcery recently, and the abilities are updated and are in accordance to the Raprann curse, ex: No offensive spells. Fixed formatting on Core Section, Backstory Section, Visual Information Section. Waiting for re-approval.
     
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    Changed points for Fist combat and Sorcery. Added Element Control II and now have max sorcery abilities. @Mollymock
     
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    @Mollymock Werebeastism was cured and points have been re-spent on sorcery abilities.
     
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    @Mollymock Couple of changes. First Prof rework. Second Cratos Update, Nathaniel has been fully infected now so updated the abilities. Third put abilities as spoiler. Put Life story as spoiler due to the huge amount of it. Kept Recent Life.
     
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    Added in some photos/spoilers of Nathan.
     
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    Removed spoiler and picture. Fixed the formatting as well.
     
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    Added a main theme for Nathan.
     
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    @Mollymock App is up for Re-Review. Removed puretek combat. Added points to dagger combat and Arcanology. Added a photo for reaper in visual information.
     
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    Rejected as per player request.
     

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