━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ⭑*•̩̩͙⊱••••✩••••̩̩͙⊰•*⭑ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ （♔）Character Information ────── ⊰ ✤ Full Name・Naravokh (redacted) bel-Evalond. ✤ Race・Divine Cult Kathar ✤ Age・23 ✤ Gender・Male ✤ Eye Color・Golden （♔）Core Concept ────── ✤ Naravan was an already powerful Allorn mage who, motivated to be the most powerful, fell to the lure of Onu in order to learn what the academies of his homeland would never teach. ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ⭑*•⊱••••✩•••⊰••*⭑ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ⭑*•̩̩͙⊱••••✩••••̩̩͙⊰•*⭑ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ （♔）Proficiencies ────── ⊰ ✤ Strength・0 - ✤ Constitution・7 - Counterplay Pack, Ironheart Pack, Bonfire Pack, Turtle Up Pack, Block Pack, Heavyweight Pack, Frontline. ✤ Wisdom・0 - ✤ Dexterity・0 - ✤ Magic・7 (Void) - Materialism (Greater), Illusionism (Greater), Thanhicism (Greater), Disruption, Cleansing, Blessings, Casting, Displacing. ✤ Charisma・0 ✤ Commutable・4 - Parasite Pack, Predator Pack, Power Struggle, Dirty Fighter. （♔）Abilities ────── ⊰ ✤ Roseblessed (Godborn) ✤ Kathar Specials. 3 Abilities. ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ⭑*•⊱••••✩•••⊰••*⭑ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ⭑*•̩̩͙⊱••••✩••••̩̩͙⊰•*⭑ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ （♔）Languages ────── ⊰ ✤ Altalar ✤ Common （♔）Appearance Information ────── ⊰ ✤ Naravan's most notable physical traits are those inherited from his mother: the serpents that slither through his golden hair, and the petals that seem to always follow wherever he goes. Besides that, the Roseborn has dark and scarred skin, while standing at 7 with a bulky build. ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ⭑*•⊱••••✩•••⊰••*⭑ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ ⭑*•̩̩͙⊱••••✩••••̩̩͙⊰•*⭑ ┈┈┈┈┈┈ （♔）Life Story ────── ⊰ ✤ Naravan was born to the Goddess Sapphora and the Felaadar Countess in the Temple of Tentalizing Regret. ✤ Seen as a divine weapon of the gods by his people, Naravan was groomed since a young age to the belief that he would be their most powerful mage, due to his raw godly power. ✤ The Roseborn’s everyday would be spent with the most strict of routines and trainings, pressed to learn everything that the Allorn knew of the magical, to then apply in the battlefield. Essentially, this living weapon had no childhood. ✤ Once maturing, Naravan would be paraded around as a symbol of Allorn perfection and military power, used by his people as a poster-child, rather than the battlefield. ✤ Eager to finally do what he was built for, Naravan ventured to Regalia in his first mission- a rather tame learning opportunity, before anything like being thrown at the Dread frontlines. ✤ Once in Regalia, though, the Godborn made it not so tame. Eager to fulfill his role and bring glory to the Allorn, he would become a menace in the city’s society, bringing trouble to the government and undercity alike with his magical powers. ✤ Eventually, the city would change Naravan. Experiences too multiple to cite here shifted him from the ideal Allorn, to a man with many doubts, and an unquenchable thirst for greater magical power. ✤ This would culminate in the Godborn’s Dread Rebirth, in which he would become one of the Kathar he once hunted, lured by the promise that Onu would enhance his magical knowledge further than the academies ever could. Now he continues in his ambition, severely less constricted. （♔）Plot Hooks ────── ⊰ ✤
He was taught how to better defend himself. For now only shield block, but ill just add all that I wanted to con to not keep having to tag you. @ChapterDeath
Completely forgot to add the spell point buy specials, and the Teledden free spell pack. Fixed. @ChapterDeath
Heya. Sorry for yet another ping, but after CRPing with Naarfi for a bit, I found that I dont really enjoy fighting with magic or from range that much. Switched his profs entirely to be a swordsman, along some QoL changes here and there. @ChapterDeath
Aaa, I am sorry for yet another update, but his backstory and personality were pretty bland and lacking in detail in this app. I decided to re-do those sections, while also fully committing to the duelist spread in proficiency, and shuffling a spell point buy that just wasn’t working for me. Also aged him up a single year to reflect character growth. @ChapterDeath
@ChapterDeath Changed the character’s name. Changed some proficiencies to reflect some system changes. Changed the personality section to reflect in-game character growth and development. Slightly tweaked his backstory to remove the inclusion of Reliquary Knights to avoid confusion.
@PaladinoGui Given that the custom kit written and perm that you have is as an Exist Mage, I find suddenly going from 7 Magic Investment to no Magic investment to be a bit too much. Revert to the prior Magic investment.
Clean up the Magic section a bit more me and you'll be set. You do not need to list your Custom Kit there alongside the other point buy. Mark which one of the spells is also from the Teledden racial. If you want to discuss moving to a Strength Build open a ticket with the ticket bot and we can work from there. @PaladinoGui
Made the changes (except for the Teledden one, since that one is State Saboteur under Charisma). As for the question of a strength build, there is no need, I will stay this way. You made a fine point about it being too jarring of a change, for now.
@ChapterDeath Updated to reflect char development, Cahalism becoming inactive, Teledden update, and a few prof swaps.
