Rejected Sheet Myriil Faren "the Wandering Wyvern"

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    Myriil Faren

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    • Basic Information
      • Full Name: Myriil Faren
      • Age: 18
        • Visual Age: 18
      • Gender: Male
      • Race: Songaskian
        • Affliction: None
      • Preferred Weapon:
        • Unarmed / Magic
      • Sexuality:
        • Demisexual
      • Relationship Status
        • Sorry boys (and girls), he's taken.
      • Eye Color: Fiery Amber
    • Core Concept
      • Myriil has no current religion. It's not that he doesn't believe in Gods, but he doesn't follow them, taking a more scientific and logical view on life. However, he believes Voidal entities to be the most powerful.
      • Myriil is a runaway child who learned the harsh truth about life, and it shaped who he became. He is now a practiced sorcerer who is slowly becoming corrupted by his own Voidal magics.
    • Proficiency Information
      • Total Points: 50 Core , 10 Hobby
        10 Unarmed (10 Prof)
        20 Caster Ranged (20 Prof)
        5 Husbandry (5 Hobby)
        5 Circus Art (5 Hobby)
        2 Dancing Art (2 Prof)
      • 18 Void Sorcery (18 Prof)

        Physical stat: 12.5
    • Languages
      • Common
        • Free Language

        • Learned in life
      • Free parent Language
        • Sofaal

        • Learned from parents
    • Ability Information
      • Racial Abilities
        • Elder Form 1

        • Elder Form 2

        • Elder Form 3

        • Super Self 7

        • Element Brand 3

        • Home Enchant 2

        • Magic Sight 2
      • Sorcery
        • Astral Being 2 - Sun glyph to be able to speak another individual from great distances.

        • Wall Climb 3 - Magically grows shadowy draconic 'wings' as to boost up a vertical wall.

        • True Path 1 - Forms into a line of harmless magical fire that can get through most mundane barriers.

        • Element Control 6 - Crispy clothes.

        • Arcane Mastery 1 - Aesthetically do magical things.

        • Super Self 2 - Legs become a magical 'fire' to disallow rooting or trapping.
      • Roguery
        • Recently removed. He stopped being a thief, it was scared out of him his first trip to Greygate.
      • Caster Ranged Combat
        • Spell Shot - Fireball-like projectile
        • Beam Focus - Channeled beam that disallows a person's approach
        • Magic Nova - Burst effect that knocks people and most projectiles back
        • No Passage - Magic bubble shield / doorway
          • Magical Conduit - A translucent stone that looks to have a magical fire inside of it, seemingly connected to his main gauntlet. The magical fire doesn't flame when not near the gauntlet, appearing to look like a normal stone. A small stone is inside the gauntlet that has the same effect. The gauntlet can be used as a weapon when not holding the stone/channeling sorcery.
        • Super Overload - Overloads Conduit and smashes it into target within 3 blocks of him. Breaks conduit but also shatters target's weapon.
    • Visual Information
      • Eye Color:
        • Fiery Amber
      • Skin Tone:
        • Dark
      • Hair Color:
        • White with orange highlights
      • Hair Style:
        • Short, slightly curly
      • Facial Hair Style:
        • None yet
      • Clothing:
        • Mostly robe-like gear or very light armor of some form, like leather or a single shoulder plate, normally gold or dull colors.
      • Height:
        • 6’6
      • Muscularity:
        • Seems moderately built with muscle but low body fat.
      • Voice Claim:
    • Progression Information
      • Sorcerer Level 2
      • Warrior Level 1
    • Relationships
    • TBA

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    • Life Story
      • Age 0-15
        • Myriil grew up amongst his family on the open sea, he was raised by his two loving sailor mothers, Juka and Ami Faren. He was always interested in caring for the animals on the ship, as they were a cargo ship for various domestic animals, wanting to learn more and more about how to care and take care of them, he was always very close with creatures of all types, as are most Songaskians. He grew up believing solely in the Sun that watched over him and his family. As Myriil got older, he also got more skeptical. He started believing less in praising the Sun, and picked up a more scientific view on life. However, he was still highly interested in animals and specifically dogs and domesticated Cobravv. He was allowed to care for one, whom he named 'Nightwatch'.

        • At 15, Myriil decided he wanted to explore the world, outside of the open sea, as his parents never let him off the ship in fear of him getting lost or kidnapped. But the child had a different idea, upon arriving at Regalia, he slipped off the ship to explore, bringing his 2 foot long Cobravv along with on his shoulders. His family did not know his plans, and they didn’t know where he went. They searched for him for days, but then they had to get back to work, so they decided to come back. Now, in a new area, on a new adventure, the boy decided to explore the city on his own accord.
      • Age 15-18
        • As he explored the city of Regalia, Myriil met a bunch of different types of people. Some good, some bad. He formed a bond with his best friend, Raymond Render, exploring and learning new things with the Feka Asha. He made friends with a guard, a few commoners, and even some Sanguine over time. He was jumped by Sanguine a couple different times, getting away barely, and found himself clinging onto the one person he seemed to gain more and more love for. Myriil started slowly but progressively getting a crush on Raymond. Myriil really liked swimming, as it was comfortable for him since he was a child. He loved water and the ocean, as he found it vast and exciting. He also showed Raymond that each creature is living and deserves extra care, from worms to people.

        • As the Apocalypse fell upon them, Myriil was living in fear and was even tempted to jump onto the next cargo ship and flee… however he felt like he had an obligation now, he had to keep Raymond safe. He learned magic in the shadows, in his lonesome, and picked up a few things to keep himself and Raymond safe. Some escaping-type abilities with sorcery, some thievery and sleight of hand, and even took up lessons to be able to fight with his fists more effectively just in case it came down to it. Soon enough, Myriil started picking up his racial abilities, learning to use his tail more effectively to hold a cup of water, or close a door behind him, shifting his hair and head to his desired form, and forming scales upon his body… among other things. Ironically to the situation at hand, he pulled his sorcery from Voidal energy, seeing as it was incredibly powerful.

        • During the Voidal Apocalypse, Myriil was majorly corrupted by his own Voidal magic he set out to master. He became attached and almost becoming more uncaring towards his peers. Myriil found himself upon a gauntlet with the magical stone, in which he channeled his magic into as to balance out his new mood changes, however... it only made him become obsessed with the source of his magic, refusing to be parted from it. Eventually, the young Songaskian found himself tapping into the power of Voidal energy, in pursuit of hopes of power and riches to make his lover, Raymond, happy... however, it seemed to have the opposite effect.
     
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    @DogVibes Hello, I've claimed this app for review and will get back to you within 48 hours.
     
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    @DogVibes After reviewing your application, a few things need correction:
    • Please mark down whether your character has Exist or Void Sorcery next to either the abilities, or proficiencies, not just in your backstory.
    Once you have done this, tag me once more and I will review it again.
     
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    Donezo! Put it in Proficiencies.
     
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    @DogVibes Everything seems to be in order, Approved.
     
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    @Follower Hello again! I updated Myriil to the new system and updated his lifestory because I'm giving him a bit more development of getting corrupted by his own magic.
     
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    @DogVibes As it currently stands, only a few things require correction:
    • Your progression Talents are partially off, Caster Combat is considered for the Warrior Talent, not the sorcery. As such, due to Caster and Unarmed totaling higher than sorcery, you would have 2 Warrior Talents forced, and you would be allowed to select your third talent freely.
    • Progression Points is not a proficiency. You may allocate those three points elsewhere.
    Once you have made the appropriate changes, tag me once more.
     
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    Fixed! @Follower Put the remaining 3 into unarmed to balance out the 7 to 10, fixed phys stat, and forced 2 into warrior and 1 into rogue! Thank you.
     
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    @Follower Bumpity bump! Sorry for the ping, I just haven't heard from you in a few days and I was making sure I didn't get lost in the sea of apps.
     
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    @DogVibes Sorry! It must have slipped.by me, Approved!
     
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