Needs Help/Review My first character

[frostking700]

Character Information
Full Name: Eglath
Heritage / Culture: dark elf unkown heritage
Age: (Minimum 17) 17
Gender / Pronouns: male he/him
Religion: none yet
Occult: none yet
Character Occupation: freelance mage
Appearance Information
Eye Color: white
Skin Color: white
Hair: long black
Height:1.5m
Body Type: unhealthily skinny
Additional Features: eyes turn black when using mana
Skill Information
Hobbies and Talents: alchemy and herbal medicine talents for magic and cleric
Mechanics: higher sensitivity to magic since he is blind and senses things with magic

Languages: sign elvish and common
Backstory/Plot hooks
dark elf boy found in a dungeon of a dark mage doesn't remember anything other than his name has no common sense only understands magic

Combat Proficiencies and Abilities
Attack Stat: Magic
Defense Stat: Magic
[14/14 points spent]
Proficiency Points:
Strength: 0
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Constitution: 0
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Intelligence: 0
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Wisdom: 0
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Dexterity: 0
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Faith: 0
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Magic: 14
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Charisma: 0
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