Character: Thomas "Tommy" Logtead 25 Male Bolven Ailor + Common Dynasty Sihai Straight Iron Longsword (Sweeping Edge?) Inventory: 16 Bread Journal (Book & Quill) Stone Dagger (Heirloom) Iron Hatchet/Axe 16 Gold + 16 Iron Skill Info: Points: 30 5(Sword Combat) 3(Axe Combat) 2(Light Bow Combat) 2(Med Science) 1(Frontline Command) 3(Dexterous Rouge) 3(Stealth Rogue) 3(Burgling Rogue) 4(Strength Training) (+5 Race Boost) 4(Pathfinding Art) Physical Stat: 12+3 (Slightly Above Average) Body Type + Shape: Athletic + Average Body Fat Languages: Common (Native) Special Traits: None :/ Basic Character Info: Black Eyes Dark Brown Hair Comb Over Style Light Tan Black Undershirt, Thin, Light Blue Armor, Black/Grey Boots, Tattered Red Cape w/ White Fluff 6ft 3in Round-ish Head Long Nose Sharp Chin Serious/Bored Expression Long Arms + Legs Thin/Muscular Chest "Lower" Average Fat Little Chest Hair Light Blue Shirt/Armor Long Grey/Black Boots Long Sleeve Black Shirt Blue Shoulder Guard w/ Yellow Strap Tattered Red Cape w/ White Fluff Family Pendant Low Monotone Voice Low, Calm Tone He has three brothers (William, Karl, Nicholas), two parents (Mother: Michelle, Father: Philip), and two grandparents (Lee and Sam) Tommy was born in Essalonia in the state of Harron, he lived in a small castle that his family had owned for centuries. His family was building a little village around the castle so his family had something to rule over. Tommy was exiled from his family's village because he had brought stolen goods to the village, and he got many of his friends killed in a battle to take over a "small" village. Personality: Question List: Expresses Happiness with a smile and looks calmer Responds to Fear with a more Serious face and a louder tone in his voice Responds to Stress by either raging on hostile mobs, or by eating his bread He views Law and Authority with a disgusted view (Exiled from Family's Castle) He doesn't feel any negative things about other races He doesn't believe in religion for himself, but he allows others to let them into their religion(Open to religions) He feels cautious about them because he knows they can be used for good, but they can be also used for evil He feels bad about his family (Except for his brother William) because he got exiled from their castle by them, and his family hated him (except William again) He is most proud of surviving in exile by himself, because his parents told him that he would never survive on his own The thing that motivates Tommy, is his brother, William, and he wants to prove to his family that he can survive on his own His biggest insecurity is about his past, he can't get over getting exiled for stealing goods for his family His biggest fear is losing his brother, because he is the only relative that he cares for Core List: Alignment: Neutral Good (Leaning to Chaotic Neutral) Personality Type: Archetect Religion: None Life Story: How it Started: Age 0-16 Thomas Logstead was born in a small castle in the state of Harron. When he was born, he was treated with lots of care and was somewhat spoiled as a kid. His family, short after getting the village large enough to rule, named the village "Logsmade". During his teenage years, Tommy started to get away with stealing and being stealthy around the village that was growing around his family's castle, because he wanted to be secluded and unnoticeable to the public. When his family granted him permission over a small group of soldiers, he started to train more with them and grew to be a good swordsman with his group of soldiers that he befriended over a few years. His Turning Point: Age 17-23 After a year of working with his group of soldiers, they became the best group of soldiers in the village. Ambitious for war, Tommy decided to go to a far village to raid for goods. When they raided the village, Tommy realized that the village was in alliance with a bigger kingdom and regretted going to the village because he and his soldiers got ambushed seconds after their attack. In his desperate attempt at escaping alive, he got most of his group killed, and fatally injured one of his closest friends in the group. When they made it back to their village with very little loot, he had told his parents about the incident and told them that the group of soldiers were mostly killed, and only left three standing alive. Unpleased, his father Philip decided to exile him from the village entirely because he got their best soldiers killed and recklessly raided a village without knowing if the village was in alliance with a small kingdom. Enraged, Tommy had left his belongings in the village and left his brother William without letting him know. His Current Life: Age 23-25 After leaving his family, he decided to build a small house with a log wall and called his "exile home" Logsteadshire. After a few weeks, he soon realized that he had left his brothers without telling them, and brought his family to a vulnerable state, due to their best soldiers getting killed due to his actions. He sent a letter to his brothers, but only got a letter back from William. William said that his family no longer cared about him, and that they would cut all contact from him in every way possible. Will also said that his family was always talking about Tommy, saying that he would have died on the first week or that he should've been killed instead of exiled. Angered at his family once again, Tommy decided that he would live long enough for his family to nearly forget about him, only to return to the village to show them that he was stronger than they though he was. After two years, he decided to return to Logsmade in a few weeks, to surprise his brother William for his upcoming birthday.
Hello! Here is my review: Your inventory is not reflective of your Minecraft inventory, game mechanics do not translate into roleplay. I would ask that you format the application more in line with the template, as it is now it is difficult to read. I'm afraid that this would not be allowed as this character is not a member of the nobility and we do not allow for excess levels of background importance in character apps. You need to have 5 points invested into a category in order to get the racial bonus. Due to the character being half sihai they get access to 2 race boosts, one from each parent, but no abilities. Please indicate where each of the points are coming from as well. And you did not use your hobby or talent points, both of which you have 10 of. With all this said I will be rejecting the application for the time being. However, I will comment that if this character is for a faction based roleplay, you do not need to submit a character application for one.
