Rejected Sheet Molly

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  1. Caelamus

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    @Caelamus Update:
    • Molly is now infected with Uthurenn werebeastism, giving her four abilites and the rest that are included with it.
    • Removed Your Will is Mine From Sorcery, though all of her sorcery is now rendered useless with her werebeastism.
    • Blades has been bumped up to 15, athletic training bumped down to 7.
     
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    @Caelamus Another Update: Molly has been de-aged to 36 instead of 74. Her proficienies, sorcery, and life story have all been changed, and an IC section has been added to life story as well.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    There are inconsistencies here.
     
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    @Caelamus Sorry, it was because of the 5 age boost they get, I also forgot Altalar gained an extra 10 points.
     
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    Approved
     
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    @Caelamus Werebeastism is no longer active and sorcery is now active again.
     
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    @Caelamus sorry to tag again so soon but with the altalar update, i've changed her over to a full fin'ullen. I also added the new abilities that come with it in the proficiency section
     
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    @Caelamus Proficiency and sorcery has been updated
     
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    @Caelamus Shelving this character for a bit, can you reject this app?
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Rejected as requested.
     
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    @Caelamus Taking this character out of retirement. She is now reinfected with werebeastism and her sorcery is now inactive.
     
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    Approved.
     
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    @Caelamus Werebeastism is no longer active and I removed sorcery and changed fists from 7 to 10
     
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    @Caelamus With the update to Sihndar, I've decided to convert her entire backstory into her being an Altalar from birth. Only major changes were made to her life story and languages.
     
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    To be honest, as the reviewer I feel like that was a good and more fitting change to the character. Molly makes more sense as a Fin'ullen. Approved.
     
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    @Caelamus Small change. Added voluism to point buy and changed her height
     
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    stop talking to me :/
     
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    @Caelamus She is now infected with the von Kerle bloodline. that's all
     
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    Remains approved.
     
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    @Caelamus This character has died. asking that you reject the app
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Rejected.
     
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