Approved Sheet Minji Liu’xian

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  1. Annie_Short

    Annie_Short that short girl Premium

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    ◇ Name: Minji Yijun Liu’xian
    ◇ Nicknames: Mimi or Jun
    ◇ Age: 20
    ◇ Gender: Female
    ◇ Race: Half Sihai
    ◇ Sexuality: Heterosexual

    Inventory Information
    ◆ A roll of Kumpur to wrap her hands and wrists while fighting.
    ◆ A small tin of colorful pins if she needs to pull back her hair.
    ◆ A pair of gloves made of thin leather, the fingers would be snipped off.

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    Skill Information
    50 Age Points + 10 Hobby Points= 60

    16 Fist Combat | 16 Age
    7 Warlash Combat | 7 Age
    10 Strength Training | 10 Age
    8 Body Art | 8 Age
    10 Circus Art | 10 Hobby
    9 Sorcery | 9 Age
    Elemental Brand 3
    Darkness 2
    Spirit Familiar 1

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    Body Shape
    Capped at 25 (41 in total) |
    16 Fist + 10 Warlash + 10 Strength Training + (10/.5) 5 Circus Art = 41

    Languages
    ◆ Asha Language
    | Father’s Tounge
    ◆ Sihai Language | Mother’s Tongue
    ◆ Common | Learned in Regalia

    Special Traits/ Spells/ Mutations
    Elemental Brand 3
    Darkness 2
    Light Mend 3
    Flux Shift 5
    Honed Skill 1
    Weapon Song 1
    Inth Gift 3
    Spirit Familiar 1
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    Visual Information
    ◇ Eye Color
    : Amber
    ◇ Hair Color: Dark brown
    ◇ Hair Style: Short wavy bob that was cut very crudely
    ◇ Skin Color: Tanned since coming to Regalia
    ◇ Clothing: Harem pants with a cropped tunic and a multitude of fabric hanging off of her.
    ◇ Height: 5’3

    Personality
    ◇ Character Alignment
    : Chaotic Neutral
    ◇ Personality Type: Commander (ENTJ-T)
    ◇ Religion: Dragon Worship 4/10
    Minji does not have a very religious side but did follow her mother’s religion and attempted to make a connection to no avail, hopefully being in Regalia will help strengthen her bond.​

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    Life Story
    Birth to Age 10

    Minji was born on August 14th in 289 during a journey home to Dexai.
    In her younger years, Minji was rather independent and took to keeping care of siblings while their parents were away at work.
    Minji’s younger sister was an important person in her life and she usually brought her on errands around their town whenever she needed to go out.
    By age seven, she already took care of most household needs such as cleaning, cooking, and tending to her siblings almost full time since her parents grew more negligent.
    On her tenth birthday, she was gifted a punching bag by her father and though many would be insulted by the gesture, Minji grew an interest in martial arts and began to practice day and night whenever she was able.

    Age 10 to 15

    For the next few years, Minji continually took charge of the household and used her free time to train and even took up attending fighting matches and watch the fighters to better her own technique or learn new ones.
    Once she was old enough, she began to join fights to try and earn coin on the side for her family. Though she was terribly trained, she did have a natural talent for the art and every loss was a lesson for her to use at a later date.
    At the age of fifteen, Minji has given her all into martial arts and had even made a name for herself among her town and a few of the neighboring villages. Though young, her strength and attitude to do better is what many remember.
    However, her home situation did not better and Minji decided to use the bit of coin she had to take her siblings and herself away to Regalia after hearing rumors of glory and riches obtained by those within the ring.
    It took months to get there due to the fact the money only last a short amount of the trip. In turn, many stops were made to either gain coin to get another ship ride, or sneak on and become stowaways.

    Age 15 to Present

    Finally, the group arrived in Regalia as Minji was in her later year of fifteen. Minji spent little time before trying to find a job anywhere she could and soon enough she found an arena where she could continue her passion.
    Still a rookie for Regalian standards, she was not gaining many coins but enough to feed her siblings and herself. They spent nights under bridges or in the slums of Crookback for any shelter or warmth in the colder months.
    Regardless, with time, Minji continued to practice and bettered enough to climb the ranks and her name became known among smaller groups in the city for her progression over the time of fighting.
    At one point, Minji grew curious about sorcery and found it to be beneficial when she witnessed a duel between mages and the power they possessed. She found her way into learning only a small amount of sorcery but enough to assure herself that she was becoming a powerful force within the ring.
    During this time Minji was also able to create a spirit familiar that resembles her father, a young spry rabbit now follows her everywhere. Her father was also a harsh influence and made her feel out of place for not carrying more of his looks and so she now adopts the rabbit ears from her familiar to better blend with her family.
    Minji began to use more weapons as she progressed though she found her skills with a whip. She went so far as to carry it on her at all times to showcase she carried a weapon since thieves and crooks have run rampant in the city in recent years.
    Now, Minji wonders the city and takes up any battle for coin or entertainment. She also grew to love the art of tattooing and offers her services in any areas that may be interested to gain some extra coin on the side.
     
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    #1 Annie_Short, Sep 7, 2021
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  2. Caelamus

    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Hello! I'll be claiming this for review.
     
  3. Caelamus

    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Review time.

    Clarify which half race, are they Half Sihai or Feka for racial sake? The actual mix can be clarified in backstory, it's just flavor. This should be reserved for what racials and appearance are inherited.

    I'm going to assume that since this character has more cat-girl aesthetics that they're going more Feka leaning, which have Asha racial abilities. Feka are unable to learn sorcery.

    The rest of the application is fine, the only issue is matter of what race this character actually is. Half Sihai do not inherit Feka aesthetics and Feka do not inherit Half Sihai abilities. Choose between one or the other. If you want to play an Asian catgirl you'll need to choose Feka and probably should because it fits more in line with what the character is.
     
  4. Annie_Short

    Annie_Short that short girl Premium

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    She is mainly Sihai and I have been told different things from you and another staff now. When I asked the bot what characteristics she would take I was told if she was half Sihai she still takes the traits of the Feka parent. I can send you the ticket in DMS if needed.

    However, I did a few changes so the ears and aesthetic can remain (I added Spirit Familiar and dropped points in Warlash)
     
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  5. YunYun

    YunYun cat girls nya nya nya

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    CAT GIRL
     
  6. Caelamus

    Caelamus Sir Honeybear Staff Member Lore1

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    Reviewer would take precedence. Approved.
     

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