Basic Information (Required) Full Name: Mikkel Bjornsen Age: 28 Gender: Male Race: Dwarf:Aldor Sexuality: - Preferred Weapon: Warhammer Skill Information (Required) Total Points: 33. 10 Blunt combat skills 5 Shielding combat skill 10 Metallurgy Science 5 Finecraft Science 3 Labour training 10 Threads arts (+10 from Hobby Points and +0 from Proficiency Point) Body Shape 23 physical stat Ripped Built Languages Dwarven(As a Dwarf) Common(As an Aldor) Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Soul of Halsörn (Health) as his soul Visual Information (Required) Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Reddish brown Hair Style: Mohawk Viking braid with a braided and beaded beard Skin Color: Pale Clothing: Simple black leather garment with a single pauldron Height: 4'10 Personality and Abilities (Required with Choice) Option Two: The Core List Lawful Neutral Logician Unionism(3)/Duindin(7) Life Story (Required) Mikkel’s life thus far is simple with few peculiarities. His family lived amongst Ailorian farmers, his father, Bjorn apprenticed him young, classically training him as a smith with a particularly keen interest in watches, meanwhile, his mother taught him leatherworking and tanning. Being poor but honest folk, life was all work with no adventure, thus Mikkel took up arms with the local militia in the hopes of receiving some military training, although fighting in some minor skirmishes with brigands and bandits as a shield bearer alongside farmhands and daytalers never really stuck with Mikkel. A logical dwarf is a good dwarf therefore religion was but a footnote for Mikkel, with his parents having split religious beliefs only further complicating the matter. He’s been deemed emotionless and calm in battle by his comrades but understanding and kind when one has fallen. Another couple of years and he would have been up for corporal but he always ached for something more. Reaching his late twenties, he left his old life behind heading for the major cities, he’s determined to make a name for himself although he has sold most of his worldly possessions to get to Regalia, he will work and fight, to death or to glory, the Aldorian way. Perhaps a mercenary band needs fodder for the shield wall or an aging smith requires a new pair of hands and eyes. Who knows what the world has in store for Mikkel, but the only way is up for a dwarf such as himself.
Hi! Here is my review. Everything looks fine, however there is one more major issue that I need you to change for me. Your physical stat should be 20, but yours is currently 36.5. I'd direct you to our proficiency page for the information regarding this. When you bump your physical stat down, please bump your body shape down accordingly. Additionally- this is just a side-note, but as the inventory information is an optional tab, it isn't actually required for you to have it filled out on your app, if you wanted to just leave it out entirely, that's completely fine. Please make these edits, and tag me when you're done.
@Lumiess Thank you for the review! I've updated the points (I misunderstood the point system) and fixed some minor errors (Can't be much of a shield-bearer with no shielding combat skill). As for the inventory tab, I didn't wanna come in with any real items but I am happy to be stolen from, always love a good bit of thief roleplay.
@Lumiess Hi, just modified some of the stats on the account I misunderstood something from the wiki in terms of extra heavy combat, i.e the use of a one handed warhammer rather than like a GOT warhammer, so I've changed it to blunt combat skills and rounded out some of stats nicely. Cheers in advance.
