████████████████████████████████████████████████████ ╭━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━╮ ╰━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━╯ ████████████████████████████████████████████████████ The brightest lights cast the darkest shadows Theme | Art ﴾ Basic Information ﴿ » Full Name | Merelleia Laan Ilaerena bel-Alaya » Age | Two-hundred. » Gender | Female. » Race | Lanlath, Star of Detachment. » Eye Color | Silver with blue limbus. » Occult | Compassion Silven, Exist Mageborn, Fifth tier mage. You haven’t the faintest idea who you serve.﴾ Core Concept ﴿ » Purpose | Merelleia is a mage-scholar and devoted to the pursuit of knowledge, particularly that involving magic. She hopes to use her alignment as a way to help others, and to serve as a guide for the peoples of Aloria that magic can be a boon, not necessarily a curse or detrimental. » Religion | Merelleia is an Estelley worshipper, favoring Leyon and Aseia. She will sometimes pose as a Unionist, having much experience in times where other religions were not tolerated and knows enough to be a passable - average faith individual. █████████████████████████████████████████████████████ ╭━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━╮ ╰━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━╯ █████████████████████████████████████████████████████ ﴾ Proficiencies ﴿ » Strength | 0 » Constitution | 0 » Wisdom | 0 » Intelligence | 2 › Mimicry Pack › Safeguard Pack» Dexterity | 0 » Magic | 12 › Magic Bolts | Free, Lanlath › Magic Revenge › Magic Trip › Magic Shove | Free, Lanlath › Magic Smog › Magic Curse › Magic Resist › Magic Cleanse › Magic Bolster › Magic Barrier › Magic Warp › Magic Isolate › Magic Counter › Magic Feather» Faith | 0 Restore things as they are meant to be.﴾ Ability Information ﴿ » Lanlath Racials | 2 Packs » Compassion Silven | 1 Specials﴾ Languages ﴿ » Altalar | Native, Lanlath Dialect » Agasi | Learned » Nātl | Learned » Katharic | Learned » Sulvaley | Learned » Sinnayed | Learned » Common | Learned ███████████████████████████████████████████████████ ╭━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━╮ ╰━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━╯ ███████████████████████████████████████████████████ ﴾ Appearance Information ﴿ » Mutations | Merelleia is free from any mutations, save for the mark of her Exist Arkenborn eyes. » First Glance | Merelleia is an Altalar of average height, standing around 6' with a slender build, lacking much muscle given her abilities. She has pale-rosy touched skin and sports long blonde lock often kept braided in one way or another. Two long slender ears jut out from the sides of her head, often adorned with Jewelry. ﴾ Life Story ﴿ » Birth | Merelleia is born in 111 A.C to the then incarnation of the Compassion Arken and her father, Gael’thir bel-Alaya. Her birth is celebrated especially when she is found to have the tell-tale eyes of an Arkenborn. She resides within the capital city district of Lathan, separated from the world. » Childhood | Much of her early life was dedicated to intellectual studies and history, learning the ways of the Lanlath people. » Youth Adulthood | Merelleia undergoes her Starbirth as her rite of passage as a Lanlath. Her star-sign is revealed to be that of the Star of Detachment, and her alignment becomes Exist. » Mid Adulthood | After spending some time honing her magic, she begins traveling the world around the age of 100. Her time is spent mostly with the Elven peoples of Aloria, seeking understanding and their knowledge. She becomes a self-fulfilling prophecy as Star of Detachment; She leaves her home in search of knowledge. In Regalia, she finds that and more. She wiggles her way into the Azure Order, intending on trying to change the order from within and absorbing their knowledge and records to add to her own. She works for a noble family for a time, the house du Pont before their ultimate withdrawal from the city. She was known to be very close to Albus du Pont, then leader of the Crimson Inquisition. » Current | She eventually returns to her homeland for a reprieve, but not long before she is drawn back again once more to the call of knowledge and experience, and the world's ever shifting landscape of conflict, hoping to do better than her passive ancestors.
﴾ Inventory ﴿ » Seya | Merelleia's grimoire, which translates to 'tome' in Altalar, a name she gave it when she was but a young mage. It is enchanted by both Living Grimoire and other means. In her hands, the pages are ever shifting, appearing to change to whatever she wills it or is casting. Pictures will manifest and move, words shift and change. In the hands of another, it becomes inert, and reverts to plain, cyphered text, a quirk stemming from her status as a Lessara. Seya is Merelleia's primary casting focus. While not entirely needed, she takes comfort in it. » An unnamed silver elven staff, which she uses sometimes instead or in tandem with Seya. This is typically used when she wants to show off. » A small pouch containing about 150 regals, some quills and ink.
Hello. Here's my review: Basic Information -Please add an eye color to Merthyl's basic information. Core Concept -Please specify which religion that Merethyl follows, or if she's agnostic if none. Proficiencies -This a suggestion, but I would suggest looking into Amonataar, Mana's Wisewell, or the Birobalda Mage archive for your pack. The latter two focus on exist and magic usage while amontaar is leaning more towards the allorn. Outside of that, everything looks good and checks out. Please make the above changes, and tag me when your done or if you have any questions.
@Staff Roleplay May the extra posts be cleared with just my reserved comment remaining above the current review? Thank yooou
@RaggedyGrace Updated as per several recent updates. Swapped out two magic specials because one became free and the other redundant (Mending + body cleanse) for Self control and radiant guise. Teledden free packs added accordingly, added in Mirror Incantation to keep the 4 in Wisdom. She is still a Purity Arkenborn of a previous iteration, approved in a ticket. No huge changes.
Changelog 12/30/23: Heehoo she's Lanlath and Star of Detachment. Backstory modified, some details pending ticket things. Also @Staff Roleplay Please clear the thread up until my inventory post : ) ily
