I'm going to simply leave them in for now because I'm planning on filling them in very soon. I don't think they're really looked at as part of the review so I should be fine, though I'd tag you anyway.
- Though this is just a suggestion on my part, I highly recommend removing all expanded and optional information that is currently found in spoilers, if you, in fact, do not have the sections filled out.
Must have missed that, apologies, but looks good!@JennaLikesCoffee
I'll be removing the Atraves proficiency. Due to a misunderstanding of the proficiency page, it is not a passive boost.
fuck not if i RETCON it
I do not see you on the Special Permission Registry, did you apply at all to have the permissions for Silven and Mage on one character? If no, then please remove any and all mention of these aspects from the Character Application before tagging me. If you did and were approved, please inform the Spreadsheet head so that they can correct/change your username information.@Staff Roleplay
Howdy ho can I have this moved back into review, and the previous responses cleared?
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Side note. This character had magic at one point, and kinda contributed to her development. I intentionally left the mentions of magic vague to just healing (because that's what she did) and made it so that she cannot cast at all. If anyone has any temporary alternative ideas (I plan on applying in the future), lay them on me please.
I'll make sure to have that cleared up (I should have Silven), but for magic I simply put it that she lost casting and left it vague because I don't really know how to replace that. I heard that exorcism can result in a loss of magic? I'm not too sure on that (so I left it to sickness). While I'd rather not void things, I can and definitely will until I can apply for it proper. I was just going off the old trustee system where I saw someone losing their permission would state that the character could no longer cast, but Magic's really different now, huh?I do not see you on the Special Permission Registry, did you apply at all to have the permissions for Silven and Mage on one character? If no, then please remove any and all mention of these aspects from the Character Application before tagging me. If you did and were approved, please inform the Spreadsheet head so that they can correct/change your username information.
At the current moment, there is no way to sever someone's connection to Magic once they have one. Magic is very different now, yes, and it is unfortunate that it is the case, but it is. You'll have to adjust certain aspects of her life and all that to make it work.I'll make sure to have that cleared up (I should have Silven), but for magic I simply put it that she lost casting and left it vague because I don't really know how to replace that. I heard that exorcism can result in a loss of magic? I'm not too sure on that (so I left it to sickness). While I'd rather not void things, I can and definitely will until I can apply for it proper. I was just going off the old trustee system where I saw someone losing their permission would state that the character could no longer cast, but Magic's really different now, huh?
Ah, woe is I. I'll make the edits and tag you when completed + registry is updated. Thanks for being patient though, things are a little headscratching since I've last been.At the current moment, there is no way to sever someone's connection to Magic once they have one. Magic is very different now, yes, and it is unfortunate that it is the case, but it is. You'll have to adjust certain aspects of her life and all that to make it work.
Removed mentions of magic. - @Percuriam can confirm I have the permission.At the current moment, there is no way to sever someone's connection to Magic once they have one. Magic is very different now, yes, and it is unfortunate that it is the case, but it is. You'll have to adjust certain aspects of her life and all that to make it work.
My sole point of review is that her Life Story goes almost 100 words over the 900-word limit, please make the appropriate edits to condense this section of the application.Removed mentions of magic. - @Percuriam can confirm I have the permission.
No. Knowing how to write good poetry or sing will not add points to her physical build as sitting at a desk/standing still and singing learning such a skill does not grant someone exercise or hard, physical work. In addition, all factors that affect someone's Body Build Calculation can be read here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Body_Shape_.26_Body_Fat@HydraLana Done.
I removed a paragraph and replaced it with mentions of her muters emerging, but it should be 834 words now.
Also does the +10 from the crystal muter for literary arts count into the body build factor? I know racial bonuses don't, but I just wanted to make sure.
Under the link you provided it says that Literary arts does contribute, but I was wondering if it counted towards the build despite being from the Silven boost, because the Altalar boost does not contribute.No. Knowing how to write good poetry or sing will not add points to her physical build as sitting at a desk/standing still and singing learning such a skill does not grant someone exercise or hard, physical work. In addition, all factors that affect someone's Body Build Calculation can be read here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Body_Shape_.26_Body_Fat
Regardless, Approved.
Sorry, let me rephrase the question then: Is your character engaged in dancing and said aspects of the general category of Literary Arts that would allow her physical exercise?Under the link you provided it says that Literary arts does contribute, but I was wondering if it counted towards the build despite being from the Silven boost, because the Altalar boost does not contribute.
Sorry for the confusion.
Yes to the dancing. I put it vaguely in that bullet because I'm sort of teetering on going into overdetail with the life story.Sorry, let me rephrase the question then: Is your character engaged in dancing and said aspects of the general category of Literary Arts that would allow her physical exercise?
Then feel free to make the appropriate calculations to everything to include it. No need to tag me, the change will be very minimal.Yes to the dancing. I put it vaguely in that bullet because I'm sort of teetering on going into overdetail with the life story.