Character Information Full Name: Mazielani Saar’onhk Surettiirn Dar-Seld Raz-Parthanaar Nicknames: Mazie, Lani Race: Kathar | Cult of Excess Age: 63 Birthday: February 12th Sex: Female Pronouns: She/They Sexuality: Pansexual Eye Color: Golden Core Concept Mazielani's religion lies mostly within worshipping Abbagellon, The Weeping Beast. Albeit rather passively. She's a strong contender for violence, though prefers to sit back and watch - only occasionally giving offerings. At her core, Mazielani is a retired politician and trickster - still finding much fun in spinning logistical circles around people, and participating in the politics of local Kaahls. Proficiency Information 15 Fist Combat 5 Dagger Combat 3 Linguistics 10 Perception Training 2 Body Art 10 Theatre Art | Hobby 15 Sorcery Physical Stat : 25 Ability Information Kathar Racials (14 Abilities) Sorcery | Void Sorcerer Magic Sight 3 Element Control 4 Darkness 3 Flux Shift 6 Flux Shift 7 Languages Pannarokh/Katharic (Parental) Common (Free) Altalar (Linguistics) Appearance Information Mazielani adorns two mutations presently. The first being horns - a white pair of them curled back over her head. The second being eyes - coloring them golden. Mazielani is about 6'8" with an athletic build. Her hair is swept up and styled in a ponytail - dyed purple on the end. Furthermore, she has a purple heart tattoo on her cheek. Life Story ❥ Maze was born in Parthanaar - quickly handed off to one of the many orphanages where she was given basic education. ❥ She was quite the little warrior from even a young age - fighting off any would-be adopters, and escaping from whatever home sought to confine her. She mostly went through the streets on her own. ❥ Upon reaching adulthood, however, she met somebody that she still holds dear. Who brought her in and taught her the ropes of trickery, deception, and politics. Driving her away from a likely early grave. ❥ Her reasoning for going to Regalia was quite simple. Somebody that she taught and knew resided there, and she wanted a break from Katharic and Altalar lands. Progression Information Warrior Level 2 (Forced) Diplomat Level 1
Here's my review: Please change this. I'm a bit confused about this part. Did she try to immerse herself with Altalar? Did she become one? Mark written edits in red then tag me when you're done. @AWildResi
@MantaRey Swapped out the arcane spell that I already forgot the name of for healing grace! Edits made in blue to be more visible.
@MantaRey Updated in line with the Zikiel bloodline update - Also bumped down her body build, and relocated proficiency points that I forgot to when the knowledge update was released. All edits are made in blue! (Also removed the inventory section since it was too hard to properly upkeep on the app.)
@MantaRey Zikiel combat proficiencies now placed at 5 with the addition to the bloodline - Messed with Physical Stat to have the proper calculation for it (though with the same conclusion of 5 physical stat of course) and left a nullified non-zikiel one there for if she gets cured. All changes made in blue as usual!
@MantaRey Cured of Vampirism icly and app edited accordingly! All edits marked in blue. Little note this time however: I couldn't get an exact color for what's on the skin so I went with what I recalled it being before. Also I tried to add a sort of "her thoughts after being cured" but it hasn't been properly rp'd out yet so I did what I could!
@MantaRey Hi! Finally got around to editing her app with the Kathar change and the lack of throwing combat. To summarize all the changes: Katharic Subrace clarified. Weapon changed from a majority throwing to a majority fist and a minority dagger (for emergency purposes) Points overall shifted a bit, physical stat changed to fit. Ritualism yoinked in favor of sorcery. Mutations and racial abilities clarified. Height bumped down a bit due to subrace change. Void Worship bumped down a bit as an ooc change since I felt it made more sense Life story rewritten to remove all mention of sires, and overall look a bit better and make more sense.
@MantaRey Overhauled the app again! All changes made in color. Made her a full Saivalthar with a Shenathar parent, switched around some profs, added in a spell or two and racials.
@MantaRey Updated with both the Katharic and Character Application template! Updates, as per usual, are highlighted in color.