Mazielani Surettiirn

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Mazielani Saar’onhk Surettiirn Dar-Seld Raz-Parthanaar
      • Nicknames: Mazie, Lani
    • Race: Kathar | Cult of Excess
    • Age: 63
      • Birthday: February 12th
    • Sex: Female
    • Pronouns: She/They
    • Sexuality: Pansexual
    • Eye Color: Golden
    Core Concept
    • Mazielani's religion lies mostly within worshipping Abbagellon, The Weeping Beast. Albeit rather passively. She's a strong contender for violence, though prefers to sit back and watch - only occasionally giving offerings.
    • At her core, Mazielani is a retired politician and trickster - still finding much fun in spinning logistical circles around people, and participating in the politics of local Kaahls.

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    Proficiency Information
    • 15 Fist Combat
    • 5 Dagger Combat
    • 3 Linguistics
    • 10 Perception Training
    • 2 Body Art
    • 10 Theatre Art | Hobby
    • 15 Sorcery
    • Physical Stat : 25
    Ability Information
    • Kathar Racials (14 Abilities)
    • Sorcery | Void Sorcerer
      • Magic Sight 3
      • Element Control 4
      • Darkness 3
      • Flux Shift 6
      • Flux Shift 7
    Languages
    • Pannarokh/Katharic (Parental)
    • Common (Free)
    • Altalar (Linguistics)
    Appearance Information
    • Mazielani adorns two mutations presently. The first being horns - a white pair of them curled back over her head. The second being eyes - coloring them golden.
    • Mazielani is about 6'8" with an athletic build. Her hair is swept up and styled in a ponytail - dyed purple on the end. Furthermore, she has a purple heart tattoo on her cheek.
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    Life Story
    ❥ Maze was born in Parthanaar - quickly handed off to one of the many orphanages where she was given basic education.
    ❥ She was quite the little warrior from even a young age - fighting off any would-be adopters, and escaping from whatever home sought to confine her. She mostly went through the streets on her own.
    ❥ Upon reaching adulthood, however, she met somebody that she still holds dear. Who brought her in and taught her the ropes of trickery, deception, and politics. Driving her away from a likely early grave.
    ❥ Her reasoning for going to Regalia was quite simple. Somebody that she taught and knew resided there, and she wanted a break from Katharic and Altalar lands.


    Progression Information
    • Warrior Level 2 (Forced)
    • Diplomat Level 1
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    Oops! Found an error when I read over it. Marked it in blue in case you had already read it. Sorry!
     
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    Here's my review:
    • Please change this.
    • I'm a bit confused about this part. Did she try to immerse herself with Altalar? Did she become one?
    Mark written edits in red then tag me when you're done. @AWildResi
     
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    @MantaRey Swapped out the arcane spell that I already forgot the name of for healing grace! Edits made in blue to be more visible.
     
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    @MantaRey Vampirism added! All edits made in blue.
     
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    @MantaRey Updated in line with the Zikiel bloodline update - Also bumped down her body build, and relocated proficiency points that I forgot to when the knowledge update was released.
    All edits are made in blue!
    (Also removed the inventory section since it was too hard to properly upkeep on the app.)
     
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    @MantaRey Zikiel combat proficiencies now placed at 5 with the addition to the bloodline - Messed with Physical Stat to have the proper calculation for it (though with the same conclusion of 5 physical stat of course) and left a nullified non-zikiel one there for if she gets cured. All changes made in blue as usual!
     
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    Well, well, well. Look who came crawling back.

    Verdict: Approved. For now.. @AWildRhia
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    @MantaRey Cured of Vampirism icly and app edited accordingly! All edits marked in blue.

    Little note this time however: I couldn't get an exact color for what's on the skin so I went with what I recalled it being before. Also I tried to add a sort of "her thoughts after being cured" but it hasn't been properly rp'd out yet so I did what I could!
     
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    @MantaRey Hi! Finally got around to editing her app with the Kathar change and the lack of throwing combat.
    To summarize all the changes:
    Katharic Subrace clarified.
    Weapon changed from a majority throwing to a majority fist and a minority dagger (for emergency purposes)
    Points overall shifted a bit, physical stat changed to fit.
    Ritualism yoinked in favor of sorcery.
    Mutations and racial abilities clarified.
    Height bumped down a bit due to subrace change.
    Void Worship bumped down a bit as an ooc change since I felt it made more sense
    Life story rewritten to remove all mention of sires, and overall look a bit better and make more sense.
     
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    @MantaRey I completely forgot that racial boosts were a thing. Went ahead and added one!
     
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    @MantaRey Overhauled the app again! All changes made in color. Made her a full Saivalthar with a Shenathar parent, switched around some profs, added in a spell or two and racials.
     
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    @MantaRey Added in some last-minute changes to the life story.
     
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    Reapproved.
     
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    @MantaRey Updated with both the Katharic and Character Application template! Updates, as per usual, are highlighted in color.
     
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