Hey Regalians,
Random here, Just wanted to share you all a trailer that I made for the community. Hope you all enjoy.
Random here, Just wanted to share you all a trailer that I made for the community. Hope you all enjoy.
Massivecraft Trailer
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BenRekt
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The footage is good but all the wording you used, especially in beginning, was really awkwardly written.
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I'm kinda guessing english isn't his first language
Aespair
Am I the only one here?
Ninja124r
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Needs a more fancy font other than that its cool =) gj
Well I mean like I only made this video only under 5-6 hours. Awkward you say? Sounds like I need to step up my ball game! Lets make another Trailer
Gotcha! Needs some improvement.
I'll make sure to tone it down xD
English is my first language but I speak English over English. See what I mean? Some-what-ish... xD
BenRekt
Chopper Gunner
Well I mean like I only made this video only under 5-6 hours. Awkward you say? Sounds like I need to step up my ball game! Lets make another Trailer
Just a tip, stop using all the question marks and don't ask questions. It just looks strange, especially when you aren't showing footage of what the text is talking about. If you can, just do jump cuts between cinematic with what you're trying to show.
If you want to show quests, jump to a slide with 'Quests' written on it and then swap with a cinematic flying through and showing off some NPCs or some players fighting mobs during a quest. If you want to show factions, once again, slide with the word 'factions' and swap to cinematic shots of PvP or impressive faction bases. Stop asking so many questions to the viewer and just show them what you want them to see. You need to catch people's attentions right away and you won't accomplish that with generic questions on the screen like 'wut is ur destiny??!?! xd'.
BenRekt
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Well I mean like I only made this video only under 5-6 hours. Awkward you say? Sounds like I need to step up my ball game! Lets make another Trailer
Also those cinematics were super cool, especially if this was made in under 6 hours
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CainsTedTalk
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Along with your wording, I would try to get more clips that's show off a population. They'res only two in there that features more than just yourself which makes Massive look like a ghost town.
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I also had to turn my volume down.
Proudbucket
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Kudos to you. It was a great job.
Have you considered joining the PR staff? they could help you with the wording and could promote the video.
All in all I think it is amazing work.
Have you considered joining the PR staff? they could help you with the wording and could promote the video.
All in all I think it is amazing work.
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