Approved Sheet Magnus Dei Lampeport

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  1. Simslp

    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Magnus dei Lampeport
    • Race: Half-Eronidas (Predominant) / Ailor
    • Age: 56
    • Sex: Male
    • Sexuality: Straight
    • Eye: Brown
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    Core Concept
    • Magnus is a devout Unionist, believing in The Everwatcher and The Creeds. However, he especially saw his state as Archblood as a blessing by The Everwatcher through his servant, the Imperial Dragon. He is a Vultragon of the Elin Cult and supports the Minoth Sect
    • Magnus is a mundane warrior with an interest in arcanology and engineering his own weapons, who wishes to uncover corruption and subsequently destroy it.
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    Proficiency Information
    Total Points: 14/14​
    • 5 Strength (4 invested + 1 Special)
      • Unarmed Pack
      • Thin Blades Pack
      • Axe Pack
      • Polearm Leap
    • 5 Constitution (3 invested + 2 Special)
      • Light Shielding Pack
      • Heavy Shielding Pack
      • Physique Pack (Special)
      • Bruteforce Pack
    • 5 Wisdom (4 invested + 1 Special)
      • Automata Pack (Hallowtech)
      • Weapons Pack (Hallowtech)
      • Healing Alchemy
      • Affliction Wisdom Pack (Special)
      • Dimenthist Wisdom Pack
    • 3 Dexterity
      • Pinning Pack
      • Knocking Pack
      • Parkour Pack
    • 0 Magic
    • 0 Charisma
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    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Zoram (Parent)
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    Appearance Information
    • Magnus is mundane.
    • Magnus is a tall (7'0), muscular Half Eronidas man. Inheriting eye-whites, iris color and the pale skin color from his Mother Ailor side while the rest is that of an Eronidas. However, he is known for regulary filing down his tusks. Resulting in tusks the size of teeth, brown hair, pale skin color and brown eyes. His clothing almost always consists of the imperial Rita style combined with two small golden studs on his right earlobe.
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    Life Story
    • Magnus was born to a Half-Eronidas Mother and Slizzar father in Vultaro. Thus being the Aksunna of the generation.
    • He spent his early years training, his father pushing him to pick up a weapon and drumming a sense of duty into him. His Mother would start to teach him Unionism, however even during it his father had still a great influence. Telling him about the Slizzar god and how they are connected to Unionism. Once he was offered the chance to embrace his Slizzar lineage, he decided against it thinking he will be of more service as Half-Eronidas.
    • He continued to live with them until his training was completed after his father. Sending him on a trip through the Archipelago and attending the Lancyon Order, him later embracing the imperial culture during it and meeting his death only to be turned into an Archblood. Once he returned, only his mother remained, mourning for her husbands' death in the Chrysant War.
    • The Chrysant War, his father's teachings and death showed him the existence of a corruption in the Regalian Empire. One that hides behind closed doors and going against the Everwatcher. Something that he swore to find and destroy, which lead him to ultimately travel to Regalia.
    • He returned to a mundane state once the Dragons decided that it is time to free the Archbloods of their duty. Now figuring out if he wishes to pursue his new life as an Archon or perhaps take a whole other route.
     
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    Last edited: May 9, 2022
  2. Acosmism

    Acosmism Sugar Parental Unit Staff Member Lore2

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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    • Thank You! Thank You! x 1
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    If your pre-dominant race is Erondia's, you may want to make them more Erondia's-looking.
    You have 43 points in Combat, and a mix of everything. I'd like you to lower the Combat to 40, and choose either Metallurgy or Engineering, and boot the other. Indulge in some Hobby Points.

    Tag me once done making these changes. Thanks!
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Volaie
    • Changed that only his eye-whites, iris color (which already gets overriden by being an archblood) and skin color are from the Ailor side. However, he still files down his tusks.
    • Removed Metallurgy and replaced it with Arcanology so Honed Skill 1 still activates.
    • Husbandry Art investment remains the same as it gives him a way to travel the archipelago in an efficent manner, both in backstory and future cases.
    • Removed 2 points from Glaive combat and one from Fist and placed them into Engineering for the Mending pack.
      • Resulting in the Combat profs being lowered to 40 and the physical stat to 42
     
  7. Volaie

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    Coolio. Approved!
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Volaie Minor edit. Added attendance in Lancyon Order and a mentioning of having two small golden studs.
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Volaie UPDATE TIME
    • Updated to new prof standard
    • He is mundane again after choosing such when the archbloods were given a choice by the dragons. Might go Archon or something entirely different with him, just don't know yet
    • Added a small bit about choosing his Half-Eronidas lineage as Aksunna bc snake rework
     
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