Rejected Sheet Lyall Howlester

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    Basic Information -
    • Full Name: Lyall Lorna Howlester.

    • Age: Twenty-five.

    • Gender: Female.

    • Race: Gallovian Ailor.

    • Sexuality: |Unknown|

    • Preferred Weapon: Poleaxe, or any pole-arm realistically.
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    Skill Information -

    - Total Points: 50 Core Points + 10 Hobby Points: 3 unspent

    +10 Glaive Combat (+10 Core),
    +10 Perception Training (+10 Core),

    +5 Swords Combat (+5 Core),
    +5 Strength Training(+5 Core),
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    +3 Roguery - Guard Forgery Pack (+3 Core),
    +3 Roguery - Rogue Gift 5 (+3 Core),
    +3 Roguery - Wall Climb 3 (+3 Core),
    +3 Engineering Pack Seven: Hooking (+3 Core).
    +3 Flux Shift VI - Exist Sorcery (+3 Core),

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    +5 Vocal Art (+5 Hobby),
    +10 Theatre Points (+5 hobby - +5 Racial Trait.)
    +5 Pottery Art (+5 Core),


    Body Shape: 10 + 5 + 5 + 5 + 1.5 = 26.5.
    • Body-shape: Ripped.

    • Body Fat Types: Average Body Fat.
    • Physical Stat: 26.5.
    - Languages:
    • Common.
    • Dressolini.
    • Ithanian.
    Ailor Racial Traits:

    Ailor Familiar - Miniature Sheep.

    Dark Empathy.

    Seizing Destiny - Flux Shift V.

    People Of Many Tongues - Ithanian.


    Exist Sorcery Grimoire:

    - Flux Shift VI.

    Basic Information (Expansion):
    • Describe your character’s position in Regalia. Why are they there? How long have they been there? What is their occupation and living situation?

    • Describe your character’s upbringing. Where were they born, to whom? How many siblings do they have? What about their extended family/noble family?

    • Describe any secondary ambitions your character may have. Short term ambitions, or ambitions that may not be related to your character’s main goal in life.
    Core Concept -

    - Lyall throughout the past Sanguine crisis has become more invested in her belief of unionism and the many Gods surrounding them. You could say she is quite devout, her wish to learn more about God-Empress Alia specifically being in her interest.

    - Lyall is an Gallovian Ailor focused on mostly physical attributes such as her pole-arm combat and her devout want to follow Unionism, and further the 'great-way'. Despite this she is quite a lively character, enthused with the world around her and her growing curiosity.

    - Visual Information:
    • Eye Color: Dark-steel blue.

    • Hair Color: Dark Mocha Brown.

    • Hair Style: Curled up into a bun, or simply down.

    • Skin Color: Ivory white.

    • Clothing: Imperial but practical.

    • Height: 5’8.

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    Visual Information (Expansion):
    • Lyall carries similar features to that of her siblings, though it varies a little. She carries brown freckles across her facial features, more so over the bridge of her nose. Her hair carries a mocha brown hue, settling into a bob of sorts when let down. Attitude and expression wise she usually takes up a more positive and peppy expression, one of enthusiasm and excitement.

    • Like most of the Howlesters, she is just as pale. Despite the speckling of freckles every now and then. Though she stands at an usual five-foot eight, which she prides herself over more than anything. Due to her training over-seas, she had gained an athletic body-shape. Having practised and meandered about unusual locations, having a more muscular frame became much usual in times of need.

    • Practical is a fashion style Lyall tries to abide by, but with more imperial features. Whilst having a more so liking to pants, she tends to wear skirts with gathered pants underneath them. She isn't the best at fashion, and therefore takes to her sister for advice on matters of imperial court fashion. Usually she will wear simple golden earrings, alongside golden trimming of her outfits. But will at most times try to slip a belt amongst everything, for ease.

    • Lyall isn't one for hiding her voice, and usually will come with puns and expressive tones that link to her usual mood. From saying 'oo--oo' in excitement for a topic, or snorting at comment. Her laughs usually come with snorts, which she can't seem to figure out how to stop. Otherwise she holds a curiosity to her tone, and a willingness to joke and converse.
    Personality and Abilities (Required with Choice):

    Option One: The Question List:
    • How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness?
      • Lyall is quite the positive person, from stressful situations to every-day life. She tends to have a bounce to her step, and isn’t too far off showing happiness with eager jokes or quips of interest.
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Fear?
      • If anything she would become more defensive in nature, if a bit rash and irritated. There’s a flight or fight within the mix of her reaction, depending on the situation. Yet she tries to turn the tide on fearful events in order to make them less scary.
    • How would your character respond to experiencing Stress?
      • With irritation for the most part, but she isn’t fond of openly declaring she’s stressed. It’s something she bottles of most likely.
    • How does your character view Law and Authorities?
      • She respects their ability and position, however she doesn’t always think they’re right in her own able opinion. She’ll follow the rules as she grew up with respect for her father, but sometimes she thinks they can be a little too eased or far too serious.
    • How does your character feel about Races other than their own?
      • She would rather spend her time with Ailor, yet the outer world of races and creatures leaves her with curiosity. From her travels she has seen difference in people, and it leaves her with too much confidence in wanting to find out more.
    • How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths?
      • Being brought up with the religion of unionism puts her in a position of it being a faith she follows, but within it some ideals aren’t always agreed upon yet she just leaves it.
    • How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world?
      • Curiosity for the most part, but there is a lingering fear for the unknown. So many disasters have occurred due to it, so many that she wishes to be level-headed with the world around her. Therefore curiosity is the path she takes, to find out more.
    • How does your character feel towards their family?
      • She enjoys the presence of her family, and wants to develop better relationships with them. With her absence for such a long time though that wasn’t possible, but now she wishes for that chance.
    • What is your character the most proud of about themselves?
      • Their achievements in growth of learning more about Aloria throughout her travels, and her progress in learning to fight. She is proud of her adventures and the time she had spent doing so.
    • What motivates your character to move forward and better their life?
      • Knowledge and excitement, quite literally. She wants to learn more about the world, whilst having fun doing it.
    • What is your character's biggest insecurity?
      • The time she has spent away from most of her family, makes her think it would be extremely hard to get back into a daily life within the capital. That she would be unwanted.
    • What is your character's biggest fear?
      • Pregnancy, as not many survive it. Just the factor of it doesn’t seem ideal to her, despite it being possibly necessary in the future. Along with full fledged commitment of being held down by something so serious.
      • Sanguinism, the curse is terrifying to her. Not when it's involving those she has no knowledge of, but when it comes to her family being infected. Even herself becoming inflicted, makes her fear the damage that it can really do. She saw that for herself.
    • Character's Religion - Unionism 8/10.
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    Life Story (Required)
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    - Lyall was born to William and Jehenna Howlester, on 282 AC, 6th of August in Kinwrey, Gallovia. She would grow up within Stirling Castle along side her siblings.

    - In her adolescence focus was mostly on her schooling at the Ordner School of command, and the Regalian Military Academy. Though she took time to travel and to landmarks around Aloria, which coupled in with her love for archaeology.

    - After finishing archaeology school and spending a few years sailing the seas, word was sent to her to return to Regalia around the Clicker Crisis in order to aid as best as she could. Since then she has focused on field-commanding, residing by her house.

    - Lyall participated during the Clicker Crisis and Sanguine Crisis, persisting through each fight with what faith she has. Yet she is still young, and ambitions are no end to her.

    - After years of education and constant travelling, with the flood of the crisis and the want to see her family dearly. She set sail back to Regalia, with hopes of making a way for herself by within court.

    Childhood -
    • Lyall was born to William and Jehenna Howlester, on 282 AC, 6th of August.
    • As per usual she grew up within the nursery, alongside the rest of her siblings. Being taught the traditional lessons within education, such as language, writing and the essentials. Despite it being normal to take up sewing and and skills that present a good home as she aged, she wasn’t all too interested and took a liking to different aspects such as sports.
    • Being one of the youngest, she found ways to entertain herself throughout adventures and exploration of the estate. With a hyperactive attitude she would hardly sit still, and always wanted to be active. Her fondness for stories in which people travelled grew, and her aspiration was set in her youth to visit these places.
    • At the age of fourteen following after the routes of past siblings, her choice in school ended up being Calemberg Ordner School. That was the first edge of education she garnered when it came to professional schools, before returning home.
    Adolescence -

    • Having a mindset for what she wanted, her spare time developed a love for geography and learning about other cultures presented around Aloria. She had a keen mind to write a list of where she wanted to go, as soon as she was old enough.
    • During this time she had the want to learn how to fight properly, despite others being against it. She more specifically chose that of a polearm, being tutored within the family home instead of an academy for the time being.
    • After fully demonstrating her ability and passion when it came to learning a weapon, she was allowed to attend the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy as a second choice of school. Under her father's organisation and instruction, she eagerly attended her second academy.
    Adulthood -

    • After graduating not long after, Lyall now had time to take up the list she once made as a young girl. After convincing her father and siblings she would be safe with her worldly plans, she got right to it.
    • Whilst travelling by ship mostly, she travelled to locations such as Farah’deen, Ithania and even Daendroc. For at least three years from the age eighteen she focused on travelling to her heart's desire.
    • At the age of twenty-one she decided to enrol herself into Imperial Regalian Archology Academy, to add to her studies before she would arrive back to the capital. At the age of twenty-four she heard of the crisis specifically in Regalia and was called back to the city immediately after graduation to reunite with her family. With her arrival she not only wishes to help aid her siblings but explore the difference and change of Regalia, paving a way for more exciting adventures and experiences.

    Progression Information

    Progression Talents -
    Warrior 2 (forced), General 1.
     
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    @Arhbi epic app update for prof done!
     
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    @Arhbi Hello! Updated character points + lifestory!
     
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    @Staff Roleplay Hello! I've editted her app up for the progression talent change, and moved points about due to it. I think I also need a new reviewer.
     
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    On the whole, please re-adjust this Character Application to fit the new Character Application format that was recently announced, found here. Once you've done that, tag me, and I will take a look at the rest of the application.
     
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    You've left out a few parts of the recently updated Character Application Template, such as the Core Concept and Visual Information sections. Please take a look at the template, which I linked above, and adjust this app accordingly. If you need help with this, please ask in this thread or in a Ticket.

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    You only get Common and cultural language for free. One or the other must be bought with linguistics.

    These should go under spoilers.

    Upon further review, you should update to the new format/template. Excess information can be put under spoilers or on a google doc. You shouldn't have some mesh of old and new templates still existing on the application as it makes discerning relevant information a little difficult. Tag me whenever you are done!
     
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    @Caelamus I editted her points up, and added a magic spell included! Due to the path-finding change, I also moved my points about for a body stat change.
     
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