━━━━━━━━┛ ✪ ┗━━━━━━━━ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄〖 IS SHE WITH YOU? 〗 BASIC INFORMATION. ✪ BIRTH NAME | Lucinna’la Valrioc Mydaarin Bel-Saal Alloren-FaialChosen Name | Lucinna’la Mydaarin✪ RACE | Fin’ullen ✪ AGE | FiftyAppears to be | Late-twenties✪ GENDER | Non-binary ✪ SEXUALITY | Pansexual ✪ EYE COLOR | A mutated bioluminescent blue. CORE CONCEPT. ✪ RELIGION | Lucinna’la could be considered a-religious. They disregard the Faith of Estel, but is a devout worshiper and acknowledger of Morrlond and his oceanic-deities. Despite their commitment, they rarely speak about their religious views and prefers to quietly practice. ✪ CORE CONCEPT | A free-spirited and brash Captain who is good at what they do and wants to let everyone know it. They like to be in the middle of action - and attention, actively seeking out combative challenges while simultaneously living in the moment. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━✶━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ PROFICIENCY ALLOCATION. ✪ CORE ATTRIBUTES. 5 STRENGTH. Polearm Pack Unarmed Pack Blades Pack Thin Blades Pack Short Blade Pack 2 CONSTITUTION. Light Shielding Bruteforce Pack 2 WISDOM. Hôterie Wisdom Pack Lunässul Wisdom Pack 0 DEXTERITY. 0 MAGIC. 5 CHARISMA. State Admiral Pack West Linguist Pack LANGUAGES.Common Altalar West Linguist Pack | Charisma ABILITY INFORMATION. ✪ FIN’ULLEN ABILITIES & SPECIALS.Knockdown Immune Empowerment Weapon Summon Ageless Arcane Mastery Elder Voice Waterborne Waterbender Call of the Deep ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ VISUAL INFORMATION. ✪ MUTATIONS | Their eyes have been mutated to be bioluminescent in appearance through the use of Call of the Deep. ✪ APPEARANCE | Lucinna’la is a broad shouldered, acrobatically built Fin’ullen standing at an average height of 5’10. Their hair is colored a warm blonde and asymmetrically cut short, styled into braids or buns with silver hair-pieces and a singular Anteloc by their left ear. They dress as an admiral would in form-fitted militaristic fashion, accessorizing with sashes displaying their status and various jewelry. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━✶━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ LIFE STORY. Lucinna’la was born to a set of Fin’ullen parents in the large coastal state of Talant Ilha Faial. They had a standard childhood for a Fin’ullen, being told tales of sea-battles and their strong captains which led to high martial expectations. It was not long before she was enrolled into a training regiment. Her adolescence was spent being molded into the strict naval lifestyle. The following years were full of studies and instruction, varying between learning how to use weaponry and command. Once reaching Adulthood, she was no longer trapped by her parents' demands. Using the knowledge she had learned at the regiment, Lucinna’la set off on a rebellious streak. With a ship and crew, she sailed from the Allorn Empire through Daen, notably settling in Ithanias’ La Portée du Paradis for nearly a decade after an admiration developed for the culture. She expanded her prowess by learning acrobatics and even made a name for herself in a small circle of performers. Another crew located in the ports struck up hostility, leading Lucinna’la to move her remaining men to the Regalian coast where the crew remained short-lived. During their years in the City, they have abandoned the ways of their reckless past and instead have turned their focus back to the aspiration of their youth. 〖 I’M ALL FIRED UP 〗
Alrighty, let's get right to the review! You have used 75 points and not seventy. Please remove 5 points from your points. Please fix your physical stat as well once you figure out your points above. Once you make these changes in green, please tag me! @falcvns
Heya, here to do a review again! You have 68 points used so you still have +2 to add. it'd be 32 not 47 with your combat points. Please double check this. Make edits in purple and then tag me! @falcvns
It'd be 55.5 since you added an extra three points somewhere I believe you got it confused with theatre arts which should only be 1 point in.
@Nesstro character is now an archblood, so those changes have been made under race/skill information/visual information/and the back story!
@Nesstro added mutations under visual info along with lengthening the life story, also requesting a thread cleanup of the responses 2019 and back if you're able too
@Nesstro hi ness! i updated lucys app after a bit. i aged her down to 50 & rewrote a majority of her life story
