───────────•~❉᯽❉~•─────────── "The do one’s Best Haaven | The Blossoming Architect." ╔═════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ ╚═════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝ Basic Information |•°✿ Full Name | Löriellá Háll’ëvëia ⊱ NickNames | Lori, Lottie Age | 205 years old Gender | Agender (Identifies as female) Race | Yanar ⊱ Sub-Race | Yanera-Dul Sexuality | Asexual. ──────────────────────•────────────────────── Skill Information |•°✿ Proficiency Pool: 50 Proficiency Points + 10 Hobby Proficiency Points Core Points +15 Sorcery Skills ( +15 from Proficiency Points ) +5 Stave Combat ( +5 from Proficiency Points ) +3 Ward Knowledge ( +3 from Proficiency Points ) +3 Artifact Knowledge ( +3 from Proficiency Points ) +3 Arken Knowledge ( +3 from Proficiency Points ) Hobby Points +15 Gardening Art ( +10 from Proficiency Points +5 from Racial Boost ) +10 Construction Art ( +10 from Hobby Points ) +5 Pathfinding Art ( +5 from Proficiency Points ) +5 Horticulture Art ( +5 from Proficiency Points ) +1 Cooking Art ( +1 from Proficiency Points ) Physical Stat: Stave + Gardening + Horticulture + Pathfinding = 18 Total Slim Body Shape Low Body Fat Languages Common Plains Altalar Modern Altalar Special Abilities Sorcery Spell Book || Exist Sorcerer || Arcane Mastery I ⊱ [Free from Nen’yalon Nature], Flux Shift VII, Element Control VII, Magic Bolt I, Light Mend III, Home Enchant III. Dul Mallence | The Yanar is capable of targeting an individual and causing growths of flowers and plants on their body to suit that person's interests. For example, this person's favourite colour might appear as roses on the Yanera-Dul’s skin, while if they are into feminine individuals, extra leaves might appear around the waist and chest of the Yanar, giving them a more hour-glass figure than their body actually presents (it does not change their Body Shape, only their silhouette). Additionally, these Yanar always produce an Emote Range wide floral scent that smells different to each person that smells it, always representing their favourite floral or fruity smell. ╔════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ ╚════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝ Visual Information |•°✿ ⊱ Eye Color | Dandelion Yellow ⊱ Hair Color | Primrose Garden Pink ⊱ Hair Style | Long very bushy/fluffy leaves with cyan and lavender petals scattered about. ⊱ Skin Color | Pastel Red ⊱ Clothing | Lightweight dress with blue hues, inspired by Cielothar attire with gold jewellery accessories. ⊱ Height | 5’8” ⊱ Flux Shift VII Form | Spoiler: Lori's Altalar Form ──────────────────────•────────────────────── Option Two: The Core List Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Good - A chaotic good character does what is necessary to bring about change for the better, disdains bureaucratic organizations that get in the way of social improvement, and places a high value on personal freedom, not only for oneself but for others as well. Chaotic good characters usually intend to do the right thing, but their methods are generally disorganized and often out of sync with the rest of society. Choose your Character Personality Type Architect (INTJ) - An architect is a person with Introverted, Intuitive, Thinking, and Judging personality traits. These thoughtful tacticians love perfecting the details of life, applying creativity and rationality to everything they do. Their inner world is often a private, complex one. Choose your Character's Religion 8/10 Faith of Estel ╔════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ ╚════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝ Life Story |•°✿ Childhood - Adolescents. Löriellá Háll’ëvëia was one of the many seedlings born from Azëlloa Háll’ëvëia. The date was the 10th of August, in a small townhouse in Regalia. Azëlloa Háll’ëvëia was a well-known physician and his partner at the time, Niántha, owned a small apothecary in the city. The seedling grew up in the unpredictable and sometimes chaotic Holy City. Löriellá was still quite naive to the world and thus started her adventurous phase. These times would mark her for the rest of her life, she had a blast exploring the city and doing many leisurely activities. She would arrive back home and bug her parents about all her discoveries. The curious little Yanera was intrigued by their history and their stories, she would always ask Azëlloa questions about them. With such curiosity, she was able to learn a little Elven history and some plains elven. As soon she was mature enough Löriellá was able to give a hand with chores around the house. She’d find herself having a dilemma as she found herself wanting to explore the places she had heard of when younger. Able to convince her mother, she’d set sail to Daendroc. Once arrived, Löriellá was set to begin travels back to the family colony in the Daendroc forests. In the colony, she would acquaint herself with distant family members. She’d lend a hand by working there for a couple of years. Soon after, she’d quickly discover the knowledge of sorcery magic. There she learned from a couple of other yanars familiar with Nature spells, where they would teach her a couple of spells. Packing her bags and saying one last goodbye to the colony, she would continue on with her long expedition. She would mainly visit the Tanaar regions of Altalar cities, one of which was Tanaar Llarana. She’d meet the local farmers of Cielothars and learn even more about horticulture. At this time she would study more and more the architecture of each place she visits. Once done she would visit the two neighbouring regions of Ol Lavei Fyror and Ol Lavei Aechir as she heard it would be great sights to see and study their architecture. Many years after, Löriellá would’ve settled back into Regalia with her family and start work at the family business that was better known as the Alchimia Order. There she would put into work at the counter selling alchemical products and medicine. After some time back in regalia and a couple of troubling events, the Haaven’s dabbled into more political affairs. She’d imperialized her name to Loriette Haaven along with the rest of the family as they embarked on a new quest. Adulthood - Present. Lori was growing accustomed to the lavish life of nobility. She grew fond of the brilliance of the estate they lived in and the many other perks it came with it. Despite being a time she would most cherish for the grandiose life, it was heavily contrasted by the series of crises that had happened in the city. After just getting a taste, the family would find themselves out of the nobility lifestyle and back to its original roots of living with nature. She would take advantage of this more relaxed time to start self-discovering herself and what kind of things she liked. She’d start designing and creating works of buildings and many other small projects. Discovering different facets she would’ve never had tried before. After the news of Azëlloa’s passing had reached her she felt lost. Not thinking twice she left off to Daendroc and wander its vast forests as she did many years before. She was lost, confused, and searching for meaning. She’d eventually stumble upon some Cielothar settlements, taking refuge and taking part in their very familiar lifestyle she had back home. As she embraced this living she would have found a little Cielothar companion named Aeda'lyn Kee'lyth. She had expressed her intentions and Lori had guided her to join her to return back to Regalia. In Regalia, Löriellá would settle back in as the new matriarch of the Háll’ëvëia family. This prompted her to expand further her passion, and reconnect with her kin that she ever so slightly abandoned in a time of healing…
-~-Changes Logs-~- Updated the titles in the life story section to fit better with the fact that Yanar mature more rapidly than an average ailor.
I want you to expand on all of your personality paragraphs by a minimum of a sentence, they're all a little too short for my liking and I think you could elaborate better given more writing. Mark your edits in red and tag me when you've made the appropriate changes. @EdnaMode_
Need a Re-Review! Changed around the proficiency points. (Added School of Medicine and a slight edit in cultural points.) Updated life story to fit in the new school. All changes are made in Red! @Bagley_
Need a Re-Review! Did a full rewrite on Loriette! Bumped her age to 30 years. Had to shuffle some proficiency since she aged up. Complete re-done on her personality. Complete re-done on her life story. All changes are made in Red! @Bagley_
Needs Reviewer! My previous reviewer is no longer Staff. I re-wrote about the whole thing so I suppose the whole app should be looked at! :)
Needs Re-Review! Updated points to add new sorcery spells. :) Not sure who is my reviewer is so I tag both of you... @Arendan @Katiesc
Hi there, due to a small backlog in character applications, and an obvious want to play your new magical spells, I'll be quickly re-reviewing this application! Approved! However, given you've put so many points into her sorcery I wholly recommend inserting a section into her life story about where she learned it. @EdnaMode_
Needs Re-Review! Updated proficiency points & her life story a bit to fit a new niche. :) @Lord_Immortal
Needs a Re-Review! - Not sure if I needed to but better safe than sorry! - Updated her info to fit the new Yanar re-write. - Aged her up to 205 (she old now) - Fixed some points (mostly added stave combat) - Edited her physical appearance description to fit with the Yanera-Dul sub-race. - She a Syllbess now hehe. @Katiesc
Needs a Reviewer! - Did a bunch of little tweaks all over.. May need a gloss over just to double-check everything is good! - Also need a new reviewer since Katie is no longer staff... ;-;
After reviewing your application, everything seems to be in order. Approved. If you require further edits in the future, tag me and mark said changes in a different color. Thank you. @EdnaMode_
Needs a Re-Review! Updated Sorcery! Was able to fit in what I wanted without changing much. All changes are made in Pink! @Follower
