Approved Sheet Llaevar Dranaa

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  1. Kadoren

    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    Character Information
    • Full Name: Sihn-Llaevar Dranna

    • Nickname/Nicknames: Llae, Llaevvryn, Jayden

    • Race: Sihndar

    • Age: 84

    • Sex/Gender: Male He/Him

    • Sexuality: Pansexual

    • Affliction Info: Non Applicable

    Core Concept
    • Character Concept
    • Llaevar is a Sihndar warrior who combats demonic threats.
    • Religion
    • Llaevar is agnostic and recognizes the fact there are many gods but does not apply himself to any religion.
    Proficiency Information
    • Strength: 7
    • Unarmed Pack

    • Blades Pack

    • Large Blades Pack

    • Short Blade Pack

    • Axe Pack

    • Blunt Pack

    • Flexible Weapon Pack
    • Constitution: 4

    • Light Shielding Pack

    • Heavy Shielding Pack

    • Multi Shielding Pack

    • Bruteforce Pack
    • Wisdom: 0
    • Non Applicable
    • Dexterity: 3
    • Parkour Pack

    • Stealth Skill Pack

    • Trailing Pack
    • Magic: 0
    • Enchant Magic Pack (Menxer Proving)
    • Charisma: 0
    • Non Applicable
    Ability Information
    • Racial Abilities:
    • Weapon Summon

    • Shield Summon

    • Home Advantage

    • Ageless

    • See no Evil

    • Hear no Evil

    • Feel no Evil

    • Elder Voice

    • Menxer Proving

    • Soul Bargained
    • Affliction Abilities:
    • Non Applicable
    Languages
    • Common (Free)

    • Placeholder (Parental)

    • Placeholder (Linguistics)

    Appearance Information
    • General Appearance
    • Llaevar is a 6’5 (196 cm) nelfin with purple skin, blue eyes and raven black hair. He has a muscular body type with Fin’ullen like ears.

    • Mutations & Extra Features

    • Llaevar has one biotic right hand and a biotic left arm that starts above his elbow. As well as luminescent light blue tattoos on his right shoulder/chest area.
    • Alternate Forms
    • Non Applicable
    Life Story
    • Childhood
    • Llaevar was born into the Xaster Lirranna and had a good childhood, being taught of the dangers of the continent very young.
    • Adolescence
    • One he was of age to be able to properly train, he went through the rough experiences that many children of the Lirrana Xaster did in terms of rough training.
    • Early Adulthood
    • When he was old enough to be considered an adult, he was finally brought out to fight the nearby Drovv Spiders. His sister took him and originally thought that it would be a group of smaller spiders, though it turned out they were larger than expected. His sister sacrificed herself so that Llaevar could live. Knowing his lack of experience would kill him the same.
    • Adulthood

    • Once he got over his sister's death, he was properly able to be experienced in fighting spiders and the other monsters of Drowda.
    • Advanced Years
    • One he got older he heard of the clickers invading Regalia. Setting on a boat and thinking he could get to the city in time.
    • Arrival In Regalia
    • Once Llaevar arrived, he was too late. The crisis was already over and Regalia prevailed. Llaevar would stay though, realizing that Regalia is a hotspot for demonic activity, staying to try and help combat it.
     
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    #1 Kadoren, Jul 16, 2020
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  2. Kadoren

    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    @Yurs Ready for the Re-review.
     
  3. Kadoren

    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    @Yurs I am shelving Llae for quite awhile and I would appreciate it if you could clear the logs and reject my app.
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl

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    Aye aye captain. Please tag me if you'd like to unshelf the boy in the future!
     
  5. Kadoren

    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    @Yurs *Here comes the boy*
     
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    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Snagging for review.
     
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    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    This looks fine. I'm a little apprehensive about the number of combat points, but it's nonetheless approved.
     
  8. Kadoren

    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    @Scribbe Took out shield combat since it hasn't deemed usefull at all in rp. It doesn't really change if I take it off aside from ranged because thats the only reason I got it. I'll put it back if not allowed to remove it.
     
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    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    This looks fine, remains approved.
     
  10. Kadoren

    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    @Scribbe I know I recently made a change but I wanted to change Llaevvryn's sword combat to 20 since he doesnt use any other weapons or combat besides swords. If needed for balance reasons I will take 2 off unarmed.
     
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    Scribbe Scribma Male Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Looks fine.
     
  12. Caelamus

    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Staff Member Lore1

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    Approved.
     
  13. Kadoren

    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    @Caelamus Changed some points around, needs a re-review.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Staff Member Lore1

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    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    @Caelamus Revamp to the sheet with the update
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Staff Member Lore1

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    Approved.
     
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    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    Kadoren I do the gamer things Supremium

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    Made a decent bit of changes
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Staff Member Lore1

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    Approved.
     

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