Leufred

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    LEUFRED
    "Always a commander, sometimes a man."


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    [01] SUMMARY

    • Full Name: Leufred Clotaire Bancroft.
    • Age: 28.
    • Gender: Male.
    • Race: Ailor.
      • Ithanian/Leutz-Vixe.
      • Archblood.
      • Woaden Lineage.
    • Preferred Weapon: Spears.
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    [02] SKILLSET

    • Proficiencies: 50 points + 10 Hobby Points.
      • Core Proficiencies.
        • +15 Spear Combat Proficiency. | +20 Proficiency.
        • +15 Bola Proficiency. | +15 points.
        • +9 Arcanology | +9 Proficiency.
          • Essence Knowledge.
          • Ward Knowledge.
          • Artifact Knowledge.
      • Hobby Proficiencies.
        • +11 Baking Art. | +10 Hobby Points, 1 point.
        • +10 Husbandry Art. | +10 points.
          • Familiar spot vacant.
          • Cheval du Ciel, named Alain.
    • Body Shape:
      • 14 Spear + 20 Shield = 34 body stat, capped at 30.
      • Muscular body build.
      • Low body fat.
    • Languages:
      • Common (10/10) Learned.
      • Leutz-Vixe (10/10) Native.
      • d'Ithanie (8/10) Learned, heavy accent.
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    [03] IDENTIFICATION

    • Eye Color: Glowing violet.
      • Formerly a glowing green.
      • Originally brown.
    • Hair Color: Blonde.
    • Hair Style: Slicked backward and clean.
    • Skin Color: Fair.
    • Clothing: Varying.
    • Height: 6 feet.
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    [04] PERSONA

    • Choose your Character Alignment
      • Lawful Evil.
        • Leufred was very much a good man, though years of state servitude, self-sacrifice and physical mutilation has left him more isolationist and self-serving, with the extent of his charitable goodness primarily extending to the Leutz and Archblood communities. He still firmly believes what he is doing is righteous, yet the road to the greater good is paved with lesser evils.
    • Choose your Character Personality Type
      • The Commander.
        • A leader knows every asset he is given, and utilizes them with ruthless efficiency. To understand soldiers and poise them correctly, to convince others of their cause and utilize every benefit one might have. Leufred believes himself righteous enough to make sacrifices in place of others, intellectual enough to guide them and respectful enough to understand them.
    • Choose your Character's Religion
      • Unionism. (5/10)
        • Leufred's devotion to the Spirit has waned since his initial removal from the Villiers Order, slowly returning since.
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    [05] PAST LIFE



    The swamp-hamlet of Triege was an ultimately forgettable place. It had rickety shacks, a fittingly floundering fish trade, and a population barely clinging to life against frequent aberrant incursions and even more dangerous Darkwald responses. Perhaps the only noticeable building within this hamlet was the Priory of Triege; governed by one Reverend Merovich. It is within this priory the few orphans of Triege, no more than twelve total, sat.

    Leufred, a boy without a surname, resides within this priory. His best friend is a quiet, often brooding boy named Alcuin. He and his friend find enjoyment through adventure, sparring, and listening in on Merovich’s many tall tales. They try to study, and while Alcuin takes to bookishness easily, Leufred continues to shirk his lessons to prance about the hamlet.

    This peace never lasts. An aged Lancyon comes to Triege on a mission involving Vampires. Leufred is faced with a decision: to waste away in the town of Triege, or to risk everything and join with this Lancyon, Reginald Sessler. He chooses the latter. Over the next few years, the orphans would leave the hamlet, and Triege would waste away into financial decay long before Leufred ever returns.

    His few months with Reginald define him heavily, yet end on an undoubtedly sour note. Reginald leaves come the end of the year, and never returns. His last words are delivered to Leufred through a military emissary, detailing that Leufred should never serve the Synod, ‘lest he desires the same fate as Reginald Sessler. His desire for more usurps his better judgement, and he moves to Basta within the same week.

    In the Villiers Monastery, Leufred excels. Socially, he remains somewhat outcast; by merit of his mentor having died not too long before his arrival and his often awkward behavior. His skill, however, is masterful. He finds a few friends during this time, usually in the form of Lancyons and people he meets during his part time. These are all relationships he would come to regret, short of one; a curate-in-training, Nora Mornala.

    During a scuffle with a Curate, he borders just barely on expulsion from the order. Both to escape the heat, and find a better purpose, Leufred travels to Regalia. It was a good point to arrive, as the skies streaked with crimson fire upon the arrival of Rikkira. Leufred would never graduate. Less than a year after his arrival, he is stabbed to death by a roaming pack of Avanthar after the Synod offensive.



    [06] REBIRTH

    Yet, he survives.
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    When he awakens, he strangles a good friend. The guilt of such incites him to enroll in the Enforcer Programme, shedding his human name to be referred to as a number. His name is returned to him upon the death of the Hightowers, and he joins with the Inquisition. He lives through three Inquisitions; a record for most. During his second tenure, he is given a gift: an odd, oily substance which suppresses his affliction. This becomes no different than a collar upon a slave, for if he ever disobeys, he risks losing it and returning to the unstable form he knew prior.

    Leufred reverts back to a Witchblood during his third tenure, after a direct refusal to do the unthinkable. By this point, he’s already fallen to a scheming sort. His natural defense to being betrayed was to begin planning, and fighting, and planning again. Upon teaching a newly formed Witchblood the ropes, he begins to realize the complete lack of control over the population. And so, he tries to lead.

    The next adventures are something ultimately hard to remember. He reunites with his birth family through the intervention of his older half-sister. He finds his old friend, Alcuin, who has turned to the same affliction as him. And he finds a wife, and settles with a son, using both as a reason to close a dark chapter of his life as Champion Maraulf of the Thorn Company. For a time, he is happy.

    As expected, it doesn’t last.

    He runs afoul of the Darkwald Order upon taking a seat in Tirgunn, and while on a routine trip through Maraisburke he is imprisoned by a rogue cell. He wastes away in the cave they trapped him in, until new powers grace him with the ability to escape. He takes a new name, a new face, and hides himself away in the sewers of Regalia. Through the intervention of old friends, and the death of a trusted advisor, he returns to his civilian identity and, eventually, returns to his seat as a part of the nobility.

    The peerage welcomes him back. His wife welcomes him back. He begins to return to a semblance of normalcy. Yet as time carries on, he is forced to confront the fact that the most consistent factor in his violent life has been himself, something which draws him further inward to spend more time with his young son, Florentin.
     
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    [07] VISUAL PROFILE.
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    [08] TITLEAGE, FAKE NAMES.
    • Current Titles:
      • Commander du Triege.
      • Occult Commissioner.
      • Duke of Ivenna.
    • Fake Names:
      • Alcide Veith.
      • Laurent.
      • Champion Maraulf.
    [10] MISCELLANEOUS.
    • Leufred has served under multiple Guard Charters and House Guards, such as the Inquisition, Hightower, Helerians, the Norwood House Guard, Salamandra and Crows. He only ever commanded after starting the Greywitch Guard.
    • Leufred's birthday is 24th April.
    • Leufred's 'birthday' that he used during his childhood was "early in October". Usually picked out at a time that wouldn't inconvenience anyone.
    • Leufred strongly dislikes the color green, but misses green eyes.
    • Leufred has received the Sacraments of Birth, Entry and Harmony.
    [11] QUOTATION: RELATIONS.


    PRESUMPTION: Positive.

    • Alcuin. | "My right hand. I could not ask for a better ally."
    • Eleonora. | "And my left. Many times we have split apart, yet every time you return.”
    • Vivana. | "No matter how many gods you slay, I will always be happy to have you over for tea."
    • Valerie. | "I have long since forgiven you. I often wonder if you've really forgiven me."
    • Florentin. | "My dearest apologies for not bringing you into the world at a better time."
    • Milena. | "I wish she'd allow herself to live happily. Not with wealth, but with contentment."
    • Constanze. | "Hate the sin, love the sinner."
    • Wilfre. | "I pray you come back. If only you can see the world I changed in your place.”
    • Faust. | "Some people are happier without a purpose. I hope you find that happiness again."
    • Nora. | "I am not the coward you remember. Nor am I the monster you want me to be."
    • Breothric. | "You are the future, boy. Do not be like me. Be better and nothing less."
    • Kavia. | "I wish you could be honest with us. With yourself, even."
    • Imara. | "Intellect is a curse. You are very blessed."
    • Wesley. | "May your ambition never eclipse your morals.”
    • Jocelyn. | "You are absolutely correct. Perhaps too correct, for someone who wants to keep his neck."
    PRESUMPTION: Risky.

    • Gwenyth. | "I do not understand you. But pretending I do has gotten me far enough."
    • Jared. | "I am thankful for what you have given me. And I intend to uphold the legacy well."
    • Rowena. | "You'd have been better off with Constanze."
    • Wilvamair. | "Will my form resemble you, o' angel? Or will it only waste further away?"
    • Anathema. | "Were it not cliché, I’d note our similarities. Yet I owe you enough to ignore what you are.”
    • Edmond. | "I find myself remembering you in the most surprising of circumstance, and following your example in all of them."
    • Valarosta. | "Maybe we don't need to be enemies. Not anymore."
    • Francis. | "You are my father. Not my friend."
    • Aesling. | “A hundred apologies may never be enough.”
    • Mae. | "You know, past all of that showboating and flaming wrath, I see some kind of loneliness."
    PRESUMPTION: Negative.

    • Merith. | "I will never forget you. Your ideals live on in nightmares."
    • Razeri. | “I gave you what I could. Now it is time to take.”
    • Cal. | “A mistake to be wiped away. Such is the expectation of monsters. Use the skills I gave you well, while you still can."
    • Susan. | "The power to change the world sits above her heart. Shame she hasn’t the brain to use it.”
    • T'lin. | "You have slain. I have avenged."
    • Florence. | "My sincerest apologies for the pain I have brought upon your family.”
    • Azelloa. | "Alcide died with you. May neither come back."
     
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    • Basic Information:
      • Please remove main ambition.

    Make this small edit and tag me once done!
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    Edit is done.
     
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    So many vows... they make you swear and swear. Defend the king. Obey the king. Keep his secrets. Do his bidding. Your life for his. But obey your father. Love your sister. Protect the innocent. Defend the weak. Respect the gods. Obey the laws. It’s too much. No matter what you do, you’re forsaking one vow or the other.
     
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    leufred can now ride horses
     
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    @Vegemiite
    In need of Re-Review! Leufred has been lifted to Hallowblood. Overall changes are:
    • Eye color (Duh).
    • Second paragraph.
    • Addition to his Life Story.
    • Adding the Cloth Blessing to the newfangled "Hallowblood Abilities" section of his skill info.
    • And added d'Ithanie like I intended to after the Villiers-Eclaire thing but forgot.
     
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    @Vegemiite
    Sorry to tag so early after, but, Leufred has killed Yvonne du Rosier, accessing the Magna Blessing after slaying a Varghul.
    Don't know if this requires a re-review, but put it under one anyway after trying (and failing a few times) to get fontmeme to work. Oops.
     
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    @Vegemiite Need a re-review w/ the Prof update m'dude.
     
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    Common now costs ten points. As such, you are five years off having three languages. Please remove one. Tag me once done!
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    @Vegemiite
    • New art!
    • Changed first and third paragraphs.
     
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    Some minor updates!
    • Personality section edited.
    • First paragraph expanded on. Also fixed some confusing sentences.
    • Second and fourth paragraphs entirely reworked.
    • Third paragraph given an expansion on family
    Set to "Needs Reviewer" because I don't really have one rn!
     
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    Here's my review:

    Life Story

    • Include one experience that you could elaborate on, something that would have an impact on him or a lasting effect. Perhaps he experienced something that brought more light to his eyes, or realization, while he was sent away, as an example.
    Make your edits in a legible blue then tag me when you've completed them. @Anakyrivo
     
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    @MantaRey
    Expanded on:
    • Leufred's relationship with Reginald.
    • His time as a Helerian, and how radically new environments enlightened him/inspired nationalism.
    • How his time with the Witchblood curse made him more sympathetic to aberrations.
    Also:
    • Revised and reworded some of the life story to remove some unnecessary wording/add some details.
     
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    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    @MantaRey hate to tag for such a small reason but i added
    and the image at the top which ended up removing the "approved application" tag
     
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    @MantaRey guess who's back, back again
    • hallowblood was removed. witchblood time
    • personality and lifestory changed accordingly
     
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    Here is my review:

    Personality and Abilities

    • Give one to two more sentences in your first paragraph elaborating on his careful thinking over speech and his behaviors. Consider explaining how he might shift his demeanor when around rude or aggressive aberrations/prey.
    Make these edits in a legible red and tag me when you've completed them. @Fergoff
     
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    First paragraph expanded on in edgy red, thank you for the review!
     
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    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    Updated for the Phantasma update. Leufred is now muter'd up, at the cost of his Sanguinology since it really wasn't as useful as I expected.
     
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    Reapproved.
     
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    Changed mutations as per the Witchblood rework, which is great by the way
     
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    Sorry about the wait there. All looks good. Reapproved. @Fergoff
     
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    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    @MantaRey hello again, i rewrote leufred's backstory and updated his personality to fit the current template. i dont think this needs much since it's basically the same stuff just written Better
     
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    @MantaRey Set to needs reviewer as per the Proficiency Update.

    • Updated for proficiencies.
    • Changed blades to pole combat.
    • Updated life story to reflect a Lancyon schooling instead of a Villiers-Eclaire one.
    • Changed Phantasma abilities (Removed the ones I hardly used/didn't feel comfortable using and replaced them with more fitting ones)
    • F for guard boost.
     
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    @MantaRey Updated for the Phantasma changes oh boy oh golly oh gosh
    • Translocation, Silence and Combustion all removed. Translocation was removed from lore, Combustion (now Entrapment) was hardly ever used, and Silence just felt like a free win most of the time.
    • Replaced with Scalehide, Tongues and Hunting. I like dragons. I like dragons a bunch.
     

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