Discussion in 'Character Applications' started by Alikiforever, Mar 26, 2021.
I'm gonna have to edit Leon because of the half race update
so sorry i know i update this to much TwT but ya for the half races update
@Alikiforever All good. Reapproved.
Ok so im revamping leon entirely now that im back not a lot is gonna change besides her parentage but ya could you re review it?
i feel like i wrote it weird TwT
Claimed for review
First off, this will need to be changed to 18. Server rules are that all characters must be 18 years old and up.
You have 1 point left over. Invest it if you'd like or just mark it as extra.
Please mark these changes in red and tag me when finished.
Ah shit sorry I forgot to take of the 17 and leave it 18 the charecter is 18 as of last June thanks for pointing that out I’ll fix it in a jiffy
I made a mistake. Return this to a 3 and youll have 50 points, sorry for my poor math skills. Approved.
A shit I forgot to take out dance TwT so sorry @festiveCorvid could you aprove of this it’s my mistake I apoligize
I just hope I got the math right I used a calculator
You still have Dance points invested, take those out and you'll be fine.
Heads up my char might be turned into a crimson witch soon Becuase of in rp reasons
and it happned i dont know if i avoided mistakes but i hope i did @festiveCorvid
I keep forgetting to transfer over some information see I do all the editing in the doc and transfer it over but then I forget that I made changes and just...i feel so bad for making so many mistakes so sorry
I just put the wrong numbers in for the proficiency I took five sailing art away and distributed it through sword combat, instrument art, and fist combat
The numbers should be fixed now sorry again @festiveCorvid
FYI I copy and pasted the doc in so this time there should be no mistakes
@Alikiforever You have 2 points leftover to spend. You may assign them as you please. Approved.
@festiveCorvid becuase of ticketed reasons I have to revamp the charecter again (TwT) it took some time but I’ve used my calculator and everything should be fine so I just need a repaproval
Youve used 60 points here, not fifty. You already have 30 points in regular proficiencies, then 30 in sorcery and engineering. Please fix this.
Yes I used 60 50 in regular ten in hobby i thought I did the math right?
Alright I’ll do the math again and change it
@festiveCorvid ok i fixed it thanks for pointing that out
Hey @festiveCorvid so I have an even today at 5 pm that I need to be on time for (It’s the Pet talent show) TwT I don’t wanna hurry you but I’m gonna have to go in approved or not
A crap I forgot to change the age to 36 (it's like the smallest detail she still looks young tho so it's not that important) @festiveCorvid