Approved Sheet Leon Griffin

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  1. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    I'm gonna have to edit Leon because of the half race update
     
  2. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    so sorry i know i update this to much TwT but ya for the half races update
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    Ok so im revamping leon entirely now that im back not a lot is gonna change besides her parentage but ya could you re review it?
     
  5. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    i feel like i wrote it weird TwT
     
  6. festiveCorvid

    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore1

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    Claimed for review
     
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  7. festiveCorvid

    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore1

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    First off, this will need to be changed to 18. Server rules are that all characters must be 18 years old and up.

    You have 1 point left over. Invest it if you'd like or just mark it as extra.

    Please mark these changes in red and tag me when finished.
     
  8. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    Ah shit sorry I forgot to take of the 17 and leave it 18 the charecter is 18 as of last June thanks for pointing that out I’ll fix it in a jiffy
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore1

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    I made a mistake. Return this to a 3 and youll have 50 points, sorry for my poor math skills. Approved.
     
  11. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    A shit I forgot to take out dance TwT so sorry @festiveCorvid could you aprove of this it’s my mistake I apoligize
     
  12. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    I just hope I got the math right I used a calculator
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore1

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    You still have Dance points invested, take those out and you'll be fine.
     
  14. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    Heads up my char might be turned into a crimson witch soon Becuase of in rp reasons
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    and it happned i dont know if i avoided mistakes but i hope i did @festiveCorvid
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore1

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    Reapproved.
     
  17. Alikiforever

    Alikiforever Aliki

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    I keep forgetting to transfer over some information see I do all the editing in the doc and transfer it over but then I forget that I made changes and just...i feel so bad for making so many mistakes so sorry
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    I just put the wrong numbers in for the proficiency I took five sailing art away and distributed it through sword combat, instrument art, and fist combat
     
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    FYI I copy and pasted the doc in so this time there should be no mistakes
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore1

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    @Alikiforever You have 2 points leftover to spend. You may assign them as you please. Approved.
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    @festiveCorvid becuase of ticketed reasons I have to revamp the charecter again (TwT) it took some time but I’ve used my calculator and everything should be fine so I just need a repaproval
     
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    festiveCorvid Product of German Engineering Staff Member Lore1

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    Youve used 60 points here, not fifty. You already have 30 points in regular proficiencies, then 30 in sorcery and engineering. Please fix this.
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    Yes I used 60 50 in regular ten in hobby i thought I did the math right?
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    Alright I’ll do the math again and change it
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    Hey @festiveCorvid so I have an even today at 5 pm that I need to be on time for (It’s the Pet talent show) TwT I don’t wanna hurry you but I’m gonna have to go in approved or not
     
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    Alikiforever Aliki

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    A crap I forgot to change the age to 36 (it's like the smallest detail she still looks young tho so it's not that important) @festiveCorvid
     

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