Character Information Full Name: Nuno Zhmura Seianra Tseng Costa “Southern Ghost” Race: Sihai Age: 24 Gender: Male Eye Color: Dark brown Core Concept Normally a quiet and reserved man Nuno has been transformed by his time in Regalia into an outgoing and resourceful Captain, aided in such by his status as a long time Cahal. A man of many faces he can be hard to place as each name he takes is a different persona, a trait he uses to his advantage to mingle in many circles. He has recently become dedicated to a long term project of his, it becoming his main focus Proficiencies Points: 0 (bonus 4 points from Cahalism) Strength: 2 Unarmed Blades Constitution: 1 Bruteforce pack Wisdom: 1 Mineral wisdom pack Dexterity: 4 Disguise pack Burglary pack Embargo pack Cortes fame pack Magic: 6 (Exist) Water magic Wind magic Arcane magic Healing magic Afflicted Predator Afflicted Heartbeat Charisma: 4 Empire Language Pack State Saboteur Pack Mount husbandry (Wyvern Pet husbandry Abilities Cahal Languages Common (Free) Bragacao (Native) Ancient language pack (Linguistics) Appearance Information. A light skinned thin looking man with medium length hair, normally in casual sailor garbs though will wear his captain uniform to meetings and formal events. Can commonly be found in a uniform of the Crookback pack from old crookback when acting as the Southern Ghost, or in his shift when acting as the Serpent Lord In his Cahal form Nuno turns into a sapphire blue serpent with sparkling scales, it’s face a strange mix of human and beast with a crown of coral, Below the waist the serpent body continues into a snake like end instead of legs. A large rainbow set of wings made of various small crystals appears on his back while assorted barnacles and various small coral grow across them and small sealife scurries about their body. Life Story Zhmura was born in a small coastal village in Alveriade to a Sihai merchant couple who left the Zhong Kingdoms to find new opportunities in trade. His mother began to grow weak while he was a child so his father set off to provide while he and his mother stayed behind. Zhmura grew to love his hometown, going as far as to take the Bragacao name Nuno Costa and speak in the local tongue instead of Wa’an. It was here he also grew to love music in all its form, going to the inns to the docks and between to hear all sorts of music and to practice copying it by ear. He also found a strong love for reading all sorts of stories of elves further west and their long history with Ailor. Nuno’s mother began to fall even more ill, becoming bedridden Nuno sent word to his father who returned hastily. After hiring private caregivers Nuno and his father left to train him in the ways of merchant sailing in order to one day earn him his own ship so that they could double their income to provide for his mother. It was during these years his father was taken by a dangerous storm leaving Nuno to take charge of his fathers vessel. Nuno decided in order to make the kind of money he needed he had to go to Regalia in order to find better opportunities in the Empire's capital. Much of his crew was loyal to him due to respect of his father so it didn’t take long before he found contracts with shipping companies and started to pick up private work in crookback, where he found himself infected with Cahalism, a secret that he held tightly using his gifts to grow his income and finding new family among his Cahal kin.
Here's my review! @Rose You have allotted too many proficiency points. You have assigned 33 points, yet only have 28 possible. You have assigned too high of a bodystat. Athletics training and Dance Arts only give half point-investements. So, for example, 10 dance arts would equal a boost of five in bodystat, because 10/2=5. Make these changes in RED and tag me afterwards.
@Optimalfriskies Changes made ^-^ sorry about that I was editing the doc at like 4 am and forgot to fix some stuff haha
Oops, that was my mistake, forgot to edit the prof's properly. I'm also adding a year to Shi's age to make it 29 total points
@Caelamus Hey, made some prof edits/additions (some roguery, and a language plus reducing my singing art a bit) and added a new section to his bio to keep updated in Green
