Played Character Laerilas Valloaan

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    BASIC INFORMATION
    Full Name: Laerilas Maslodeen Valloaan Bel-Sol Solleria-Tal Morrlondasseiavasso
    Race: Fin'ullen Altalar
    Age: 156 y/o
    Gender: Male
    Affliction: Corruption Arkenborn
    Sexuality: Bisexual
    Preferred Weapon: Trident or great axe.
    Eye Color: One dark metal eye and another with a gold pupil and red limbus.

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    CORE CONCEPT
    Laerilas is a Silven fighting against and with the gnawing urge to prove his successes and skills to any and all, whether they wish to listen or not. Morality, honor, and outward respect are concepts Laerilas doesn't care much for should they impede his desire to not only prove he is the best, but to actually be the best. Laerilas's faith is placed within the Estellion God Morrlond.
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    SKILL INFORMATION
    • Strength: 6
      • Bruiser:
        • Bruiser Slam, Bruiser Tackle, Bruiser Feint, Bruiser Flurry, Leaping Charge, Leader's Rally
    • Constitution: 3
      • Defensive:
        • Debuff Endurance, Rage Counter, Heavyweight
    • Wisdom: 0
    • Dexterity: 0
    • Magic: 5
      • Void Dimension
        • Displacing, Casting, Breaking, Illusionism, Thancism
    • Charisma: 0
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    Abilities
    • Arkenborn: Corruption
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    VISUAL INFORMATION
    Laerilas's left eye is a daunting gold surrounded by a red limbus while the other is made of dark metal. He is also missing his right ear, which he dutifully hides with a silver cap.

    Laerilas currently appears with shoulder-blade length black hair which he combs back into a sea pearl clip to show two thin side shaves on either side of his head. He dons half-robes that drape cleanly over traditional Fin'ullen tunics (black skin-tight cotton) and similarly fit trousers. His overall body stands at 6'5" with a muscular shape.

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    LIFE STORY

    Birth:
    Laerilas was born on the evening of July 23rd, 154 A.C as the first of five children to his Fin'ullen parents, Lilitha and the Arken of Pride as a born-mage.

    Childhood:
    Laerilas's childhood was a relative happy one within the bustling Valloaan house where he was hailed higher than his siblings, often getting into quarrels with his siblings in attempts to show off.
    Lilitha raised the children to work in the family's completely, totally legal smuggling business that also including general piracy against opposing states.

    Adulthood:
    Through the years of his adulthood, Laerilas primarily focused upon sorcery and general combat, whereas his knowledge flowed into different languages such as Ithanian, Allorn, and Sollerian politics. Everything he learned, he'd consider a tool.
    In the midst of Lilitha's leadership, the Valloaan family and tide was elevated to Regalian Aristocracy.
    Laerilas later began to conflict with his own mother, Lilitha, as his Pride grew ever greater. Their relationship became strained, though Laerilas would later still inherit the family's leadership.
    Laerilas married and had a very short, passionate relationship that produced three children by the names of Elafyr, Astarion, and Delimira. A decade after their births, he and his wife divorced under the agreement that the mother would still be able to have the opportunity to parent the children. In this time, Laerilas produced two bastards, only one of which known: Lhoris. He also adopted quite a few stray souls as his own children, brothers, sisters, and cousins as a means of growing the family name, fortune, and success.

    Present Time:
    Laerilas now resides in the capital of Regalia where he's dipped his toes in capital politics, hoping to pave the way for his realm and take up the tasks that those before him have left unfinished.

     
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    RESERVED

    Aesthetics coming soon, as well as optional spoilers and extended backstory.
     
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    @Caelamus Updated this char sheet as there was a change in culture/who he is in relation to the main line of the du Saulleve's for RP convenience. This allowed an expansion of magic and ideals. dank u

    edit: so sorry for such a soon overhaul LMAO
     
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    @Caelamus

    I removed Sanguiphobia as it was more of a hinderance than anything, also updated proficiency points and backstory given elevation to nobility. Expect aesthetics to be added at some point and an extended backstory to make up for the generic bullet points. thank u
     
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    @Caelamus The medical proficiency update freed up 10 points and in the process, I made his spread more cohesive with his now updated backstory, also to fit with the newly released Minarith lore.
     
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    @Caelamus Last major change for a hot minute.

    I yeeted alchemy upon realizing it was due for an update (and the 20 points weren't useful/fun for me), and also figured it was impeding on the scholarly/sorcery niche I had goin'. In its place, I've added more schools and updated the life-story accordingly to make it a) less of a mess, b) cohesive.

    Edit: I ALSO decided to add more of a 'yuck, illness' factor since religious
     
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    @Caelamus Lost my approved tag, but I turboed finance school, put Laeroth as Lawful Evil for a corruption arc, and similarly changed his personality type to debater as it only made sense. oh, and cute art.
     
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    @Caelamus
    Backstory will be updated accordingly when the schooling stuff is updated, but I added the core concept section, deleted personality, updated my 18 free points (!), and got rid of mundane combat to pounce on that sick new caster combat.
     
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    ok. Approved.
     
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    @Caelamus With the recent House Minarith changes, aka now House Väll'Olloa (:D), Laeroth has received an update of his own to be more in tune with Fin'ullen culture. He's more of a combatant, still with those touches of sorcery, and has received a name change to Laeril. Thank you!
     
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    Ok approved.
     
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    @Caelamus Warrior go brr. Support sorcery and random hobby points totally removed and replaced to fit the single niche of battle mage rather than support battle mage with weird hobby points. thank u
     
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    Just clarifying that I've seen this but I'm gonna leave it up for a little bit incase you want to make any additional changes from the Fin'ullen update. Just ping me on this thread or rate this message when you're absolutely ready for review.
     
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    Thaaank you! Update finished, only thing that really changed was the name and I made his eyes blue because blue
     
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    @Caelamus Ju...stiiiii...ce.... Siiiilveeeeeen.... TIME. (And maybe later vengeance!) Also, I added flux shift 6 again bc I missed fancy shmancy appearance changes
     
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    UPDATED THE PROFS!
     
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    Claimed for review! App looks fine, but please god change the names from 'Pack 1' to what they're titled on the proficiency page. It's super time consuming to check as is.

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    SORRY, followed the app example a little too hard. Will change! thanku
     
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    @Yurs Previous point spread wasn't doing it for me. Updated! Also, expect a ping at some point within the next week or two weeks with a backstory change :>
     
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    @Yurs I slap a change on the table. Retconned to Vengeance as it suits the character much, much better
     
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    @Yurs HELLO THERE. Point spread and backstory updated due to the glamor/vandalism/soulrend/aristocracy update + I'm playing the character again :}
     
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    @Yurs Points updated with the cool new changes :}
     
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    @Yurs Points updated AGAIN, as well as Laerilas being shifted over to a Pride Silven due to Vengeance being changed to Fury. Magic is more prevalent with Pride being a mage & he's now no longer a rogue as I used very little or just straight up nothing with the points I had prior. Thank u!
     
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    @lorestaffywaffy require a teensy rereview and reviewer. I scrubbed charisma (because it's laerilas & want to hire people ic) and dexterity, and switched out a few points for the cool new constitution things. And he's a vampire......
     
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    I CANNOT believe you would use THAT tag. Anyways, quick review.
    I’d recommend making at least a single word mention of what, if any, religion or faith Laerilas follows (or pretends to, given Vampirism).
    Given he’s a Vampire now, he has a Vampiric Form. TELL ME about the Laerilas MONSTER.

    Aside from that, all good. Mark changes in blue and @Tag me!
     
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    OHEMGEE I cannot believe I forgor the vampiric form. Changes made! @ezalB
     
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    oh my goodness gracious approved
     
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    @ezalB mistger ezalB, the points have finally been updated & I forgot last time to mention in his backstory that he's a born mage! as a side note, I'm not sure if commutable vampire points that go into spell point buy grant specials or just the abilities so lmk;lmlmlmk
     

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