Basic Information Name: Kieran Bjorn Bjarki - Called 'Key' by one person, doesn't really mind the nickname though. Age: 55 Years Old ; Born May 17th, 253 AC Gender: Male Race: Ailor ; Bolven Lineage ; Velheimer Culture Sexuality: Heterosexual - Is married and considered a widower, unknown status of spouse ; presumable dead (or is she?), same with his two daughters. Preferred Weapon: Unarmed and Warhammer - Nothing says CHAD more than a heavy fist and a two-handed hammer is there? Race Boost: Two-Handed Blunt Combat Inventory Information Spoiler: Find out In Kieran's Room Carving Knife: A knife handed down from his father from his father, treated as a heirloom by Kieran and plans to hand it to his son one day. Necklace of various topazes ; an heirloom passed down his wife's family from generations A claw of a Northern Black Bear ; gained from hunting a Northern Black Bear and became a trophy of his kill Items on hand A pair of Blacksteel gauntlets for fighting ; bought from Enki Lok-Ningishzida A pair of Blacksteel elbow pads for fighting ; bought from above character A pair of Blacksteel knee pads for fighting ; bought from above character A bag of fifty regals ; three tenpiece, four fivepieces Skill Information Total 50 Age Points + 10 Talent Points + 10 Hobby Points Allocation Core Group Fist Combat: +20 Age Points - Decades of close combat with his fists, armed with actual gauntlets turn him into a beast of a combatant that will grapple your enemy and incapacitate them! Two-Handed Blunt Combat: +10 (5 Age Points and 5 Racial Boost) - Recently picked up as a means of.. self defense.. he crashes through and runs through any and all, to a certain extent. Javelin Combat: +10 Age Points - Got to have some means to kill some mages or archers can't ya? Metallurgy Science: +2 Age Points - Got to at least be able to repair your tools when you were a farmer for 10 years.Talent Group Strength Training: +10 Talent Points - Never stop the grind, lifting and having some strength is necessary for a farmer, mostly because he's a CHAD.Hobby Group Wooden Art: +15 (5 Age Points and 10 Hobby Points) - A hobby he never stopped using through his entire life from childhood, his adventures to Daen, his fatherhood, and his journey to Regalia. Needlework Art: +2 Age Points - He's not a fancy person, he doesn't enjoy nor chase luxury. He's fine with old clothes as long as it fits and keeps him warm. Cooking Art: +3 Age Points - Having children and being unable to cook, ha! At least making treats and simple food is doable for this guy. Horticulture Art: +3 Age Points - A decade of caring for vegetables and crops doesn't disappear, though it might be unused, skills are hard to forget especially with memories tied to it.Body Shape Body Stat: 35 if Cured ; 20 if Infected - (20 Fist Combat + 10 Two-Handed Blunt Combat + 10 Javelin Combat + 1 Metallurgy Science + 10 Strength Training) Body Shape: Strongman Body Shape (Changeable) Body Fat: Extreme Low Body Fat Languages Skodje (Parents) Plains Elven (Tutored) Common Special Traits / Mutations Vampirism (Active) Standard Abilities: Spoiler: Find out - Blood Collaring - Immortal Aging - Tech Lasting - Tech Halting - Tech Feeding - Tech Body - Tech Power - Tech Form Form Mutations: Spoiler: Find out - Tech Vileshot - Tech Venting - Tech Maintenance - Tech Exploitation - Tech Re-Acquisition Visual Information Eye Color: Emerald Green Hair Color: Kobicha Brown Hair Style: Wild (Bedhair or something) Skin Color: Pale White Clothing: Brown Fur Boots, Black Leggings, Black Long Sleeve Shirt, Brown Belt, and a Black and Green 'Bandana' tied on the right arm Height: 7 Foot (Changeable) Visual Information (Ext.) Spoiler: Find out Facial Expression: Stoic but if greeted by someone, will smile and talk normally Voice: Deep voice but is monotone most of the time. If greeted by someone his voice will have normal emotions rather than monotone Tech Form: All his limbs look like human limbs but his left arm, left leg, and right hand are made of metal, his left hand can be taken off or flipped open to reveal a grappling hook [Tech Re-Acquisition] hiding inside. His left arm is also made of scrap metal or regular metal to use [Tech Vileshot] but his left leg is usually left alone unless he's been chased for over 24 hours to which he will using vileshot once more, disabling his mobility. There are four small holes on his left leg, two holes that point towards the left and two holes that point towards the right, while his left arm has three on the forearm that point outwards, and his right palm has one hole for [Tech Venting]. He would also be wearing a normal metal mask but his eyes will be visible, he is also wearing a hood over his head. His entire body would be covered by a cloak unless taken off. Personality Character Alignment: Lawful Evil Character Personality: Defender Character's Religion: None Weaknesses Spoiler: Find out He's a bit slower than you'd expect people to be. Likes Spoiler: Find out Roasted Reindeer Venison with a Juniper and Lanarra's Hand sauce, with a sour bread made from Fletcher's Wheat and the juices of Dragonet Apples. Baked Northern Brown Bear covered with an Anglian Wheat dough (like a Beef Wellington), further enhanced with a vinaigrette made from Lanarra's Hand Juice, Dragonet Apple Juice, and Lemon Juice. Steamed Kalmian Spineback with lemon juice, black pepper, and salt. Sometimes partnered with Fletcher's Wheat bread or Anglian Wheat bread. Dislikes Spoiler: Find out Does not like people who waste food. Does not like weak people; doesn't hate them but does not like them either. Relationships Spoiler: Find out Has no current relationships with anyone. Life Story May 17th, 253 AC - July 25th, 269 AC Born on the 17th of May was a babe that grew under the care of his father, the Rakhr. His mother was a shieldmaiden, member of one of the strongest and toughest warriors known to Velheimers and Aloria. Being the child of such warriors meant that he himself would also be held to high standards, higher than expected from Velheimer Warriors. After he turned six was he able to hold his own and began a strict and hard training regime that propelled him to achieving great strength and skill at the age of sixteen. August 2nd, 269 AC - June 14th, 277 AC The next eight years amounted to one thing, raiding, Kieran learned all he could and he learned pretty much everything besides what he should have. He was only interested in boxing and wrestling, taking down numerous sparring partners or enemies in the midst of battle, disabling and ruthlessly crippling them. At age 16, he stood at 7 foot and he discovered one thing, when he battled challenging opponents he noticed that he grew taller or short or his body suddenly condensed which threw him unbalanced, almost losing every battle that he transformed in. Techniques and maneuvers he learned in theory, he refined and used in battle, building his own style of unique take downs and grappling. Although take downs rarely happened due to his body size, he would be able to get one down every once in a while. December 19th, 277 AC - April 9th, 283 AC Stopping his raiding career of eight years was Kieran who traveled south, towards the ruins of the Allorn Empire, the former powerhouse of Aloria. A year had passed until he reached the edge of the North Belt, barely seeing the tip of Daen. A few weeks had passed until he built a small boat and successfully landed on Daen but his boat unfortunately fell apart when he landed, letting it drift into the ocean as it broke into pieces. Months passed as he traveled through the jungles using any type of item to hit animals for their resources to which he caught on quickly, he was dehydrated and starving, arriving near a single house seeming like the farthest building from what seemed like a windmill but he started to black out, seeing a single blurry sight of a woman. Hours later did he finally wake up to a tan Cielothar, tending to him, wiping his sweat, and cooking a warm meal for him. Never had he felt this warm besides his parents who cared for him, and never had he been so relaxed, away from the constant battlefield and fighting. The genes of his warrior body were quickly put to work, making him feel energetic and strong again from the constant care of the Cielothar but still rested for he wanted to spend more time in this environment of calmness. The Cielothar seeing this and a faint color of green around his body giggled, summoning five birds that hung the clothes that Kieran wore and cleaning the house he was in. Looking around the house did Kieran witness a sewed fabric actually talking, or rather moving their mouths as they seemed to talk. The Cielothar handed a bowl of soup to Kieran and touched his hands while giving the bowl but she saw the color around him turn pink as she started to blush. Years later was Kieran tending to yard work, cleaning the few patches of crops around his house and pulling the weeds while watching a tan Cielothar push a young girl on a swing, she screamed and giggled in excitement as she kept 'flying' and 'falling' in a loop with a bright smile. July 14th, 283 AC - September 24th, 293 AC Kieran and his wife, Eliza bore another child, another girl. Content with his life was Kieran as he'd forgotten of the battles and blood he's spilled as he enjoyed this peaceful life. Nearly a decade after he arrived was the peace shattered as hundreds and thousands of Cielothar arrived in droves and waves towards the south with some Ailor's behind them. Recognizing the insignia of some of the guards near them did he know they were from the Regalian Empire, he made haste to his home and led his family underground, a place he dug through the years as a countermeasure if his family was to ever be attacked. He however did not go down with him but stayed in the house, waiting to see if some arrogant Regalians dared to break into his home without leaving with a scratch or two. Killing tens of soldiers and sitting on top of bodies was Kieran exhausted as he grew into the life of a farmer, not honing his art of fighting for more than a decade that had rusted away. Tens of more soldiers arrived, seeing the bloodbath of Kieran's strength and chased after him using calvary, infantry, and even archers as he led them away from the home but he saw a small detachment heading towards the house. Anger and worry fueled him as he stopped, his height growing to 7'5 and his body turning into that of a musclegod as he rampaged through the soldiers and ran towards the house but he saw only blood as there was none in the house anymore.. only blood. May 27th 294 AC - May 25th, 305 AC Spending months searching tens of miles was Kieran who found no trails of his family and he rampaged, destroying the ground and breaking small boulders, not touching the forests as he made his way back to his home of the last ten years or so and packed his family's belongings, making his way back towards the north with a furious and cold face. Taking four years was Kieran able to return to his lands once more, meeting with his parents as he grieved in silence, away from the prying eyes of his people and his parents. Wearing the necklace of his wife that he grabbed from his Daen Home was embedded with transparent gemstones, Topaz, the center topaz was truly transparent with no color but as it stretched outwards was the colors change from a faint red to a slight dark red on one side with the other ranging to and from blue. May 26th, 305 AC - November 27th, 307 AC Fierce struggles and battles warred as the Skaggers of the North fought against the waves of the Regalian Empire, numerous other warriors and fighters joining in to assist as they slaughtered any enemy that passed but with time, they were surrounded and killed with at least ten Regalians against one Skagger or Velheimer. In a small battlefield, a skirmish if you will, was a battle of a beast and warriors against a company of Regalian Soldiers, surviving the onslaught was one of few survivors, Kieran along with other warriors but of those fallen were his parents and familiar faces. Constantly fighting gnawed at his mind as he killed hundreds of men whether through guerilla warfare or straight fighting as he racked up his body count but the war came to an end when Drixagh was burned to the ground and thousands of bodies laid waste to their lands. Burying all the warriors he could find was Kieran then traveling farther north to clear his mind for a year or two before traveling back south to Drixagh and weirdly, to Regalia. December 7th, 307 AC - Present Date Kieran slowly traversed the seas and land to make it to the capital of the strongest empire in the world, glaring at the Regalians who provoked him and looked at the guards who did the same. Living in the capital for more than a year did not change Kieran's stance of hatred of the Regalians who marched onto his homes and ruined the peace but he found comfort in some Velheimers who stayed in the capitals, the soldiers and nobles of House Viduggla and House Sorenvik. But he did quickly pick up on a new form of hand to hand combat from the East, sparring with his teacher whenever he could. He didn't stop with that and went to start wielding heavy weapons that 'felt right' in his hands. Quickly using his fists and heavy weapons to solve any problems that involved him. Walking past Old Town was a guard in trouble as he assisted him with the intent to use this to his favor in the future but as he prepared to leave with the guard and his soldiers was he suddenly grappled and turned consequently after into a unique kind of sanguine, a Cratos.
Hi there! Basic peer review: * Any optional information should be put into a spoiler (found in the little + while editing). * You haven't stated what Culture your character is. an Ailor has both a lineage and a Culture. link here: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Cultures * If you have no special traits/mutations you can just leave it out of the application.
You need to describe your tech form in at least one paragraph while adhering to the bloodline rules. I would recommend using the core option, if you wish to use the question option then I will request you maintain three sentences minimum per answer. Vampires have no respect for religion. Bears do not travel in packs. You should not be writing this from a first person perspective. Cratos Bloodline does not fit the character's niche and neither does the life story accommodate nor justify the proficiency points. Please make edits to the life story to remove first person narrative and tie in proficiency points. These reflect years of the character's life, equally, dedicate a paragraph to elaborate his life as a vampire. However that being said, the way it is written does not convey the vampire mentality very well. I would recommend you reference the main vampirism page to garner a better understanding. Tag me and highlight edits whenever you're done sunshine.
Increased the points in Unarmed, decreased Eastern Unarmed, removed Marine Tactics, and increased the Body Stat. Edits in Blue @Caelamus
Timeskipped his age by 40 years or so, he's still a Cratos but he has more backstory now. Added points to proficiency's and changed Kieran's lineage, added more items to inventory, added a language, removed some stuff from relationships and dislikes, edits in Blue. @Caelamus
Changed +20 Throwing into +10 and added it to Hunting Knowledge. Also forgot that Cratos had a body stat cap, changed it to 40. Edits in Blue. @Caelamus
Approved, however I will be locking proficiency additions for awhile. You should not be changing proficiency up too much. Any further edits need a lot of reasoning for why or if we decided to make a change to the system. @Yui_Drax
Kieran is currently cured, am I able to add a note to the stat saying that his stat would be 70 when his bloodline is dormant and 40 when his bloodline is awakened? @Caelamus
Updated the app for the new prof system and moved points around to make him less likely to be killed. @Caelamus
Reduced Two-Handed Blunt Combat to 10 (5 Age + 5 Racial ; so frees 10 Age Points) and invested 2 into Metallurgy Science and Needlework Art. Invested 3 into Cooking Art and Horticulture Art, also gave nice descriptions to all my proficiencies and some to my basic information. All these new proficiencies is what I would expect Kieran would learn from his life story and thought it would add more depth into his skills rather than just making him into an emotionless war machine. Edits in Blue. @Caelamus
