Needs Help/Review Khione Savhot

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Character Information:

• Full Name: Khione Sahvot
• Heritage / Culture: Isldar
• Age: 24
• Gender / Pronouns: Female
• Religion: Khama
• Occult: Exist Mage
• Character Occupation: Adventurer

Appearance Information:

• Eye Color: Silver
• Skin Color: Neutral pale
• Hair: White/desaturated mid blue streaks
• Height: 180 cm
• Body Type: Fit
• Additional Features: Mid length hair

Skill Information:

• Hobbies and Talents: Sparring, Adventuring, Reading, and improving her magical skills/knowledge. Talented in close ranged and long ranged fights, able to see far away (60ft), proficient in Stealth.
• Mechanics:
  • Isldar is immune to the harm from frost or cold sources, they do not suffer loss of vision or orientation during a blizzard or weather conditions. As well as not be affected by Magical Weather Area Effects. Can sing frost into the water, causing ice crystals to form that do not melt when exposed to heat.
  • Starting Combat in a cold weather environment (with blocks of snow or ice present), Isldar gain +2 Attack Stat (breaking Cap up to 11) for every Attack Emote. This is limited to mountainous regions and Magical Ice Area Effects, but when the snow has blanketed Regalia during winter, this applies to the whole map for a 1-and-a-half-month period between November 15th and January 1st, but the bonus is halved to 1 instead of 2.
  • Isldar hold power over the passage of life and death. If they are near a person who is about to die, they can either ensure that the soul passes into the afterlife and is not stolen by other entities or prevent it from even detaching from their body, thus turning that person into an Undead forcibly (keep in mind, doing either has moral weight and is judged by Religions). Additionally, Isldar can see the Soul Rivers, the natural pathways souls take to reach the afterlife, and can tell if a person has died if they know their true name.
  • Isldar have natural suppressants in their own mind against interference and meddling from the outside. Even with OOC consent given, Isldar minds have stronger protection against any form of Mind Control. Their emotions are also not readable by those who can read and change emotions, unless they specifically let their mind be entered. Finally, Isldar minds also hold strong protections against the prying of Spirits. While they are not immune to a Spirit's influence, Spirits cannot easily detect their vices and ambitions to seduce them.

Backstory/Plothooks:

After being shunned by her family for being weaker than her sibling, she spent her days learning and perfecting her combat skills and knowledge. Studying battles that would be available to her, and honing her stealth for when the moment needs it. Now she's an adventurer doing what she wants, no pressure to uphold anyone or anything, just simply getting stronger and smarter as she goes around the world.​

Combat Proficiencies and Abilities:
Attack Stat: Strength
Defense Stat: Constitution
[14/14 points spent]
Proficiency Points: 2

• Strength: 7
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• Constitution: 3
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• Intelligence: 0
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• Wisdom: 0
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• Dexterity: 4
  • [Sharp Reflexes Pack]
• Faith: 0
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• Magic: 0
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