⇀ ↼ ⇀ ↼ Character Information ⧖ Full Name: Khayri El-Amin. ⧖ Race / Culture: Qadir. ⧖ Age: 27 years old. ⧖ Gender / Pronouns: Male / He, him. ⇀ ↼ Core Concept Khayri El-Amin is a clockwork engineer and seafarer that has traveled the seas from Daendroc to Farah’deen. He is the captain of his unnamed crew and lives life as a missionary of his own sense of freedom. ⇀ ↼ Appearance Information Khayri possesses a great deal of scars on his body. The most glaring scar is that of an Ularen Lion’s brand in between his shoulders, below the nape of his neck. Khayri has a height of 5’9” (175.26 cm) and weighs 161 pounds (73.02 kg). He has black hair and tan skin, customary of his Qadir heritage. His Sirr al-Hayat is of white color. Spoiler: Art Spoiler: Art By @akusazero ⇀ ↼ Combat Style Duelist, Engineer, and Firearms Hunter. Hobbies and Talents (Optional) Alchemy Hobby, Technology Hobby, Medical Hobby, and Athletic Hobby. Proficiencies ⧖ Strength: 3 ⧖ Technique Parry. ⧖ Concussive Blow Pack. ⧖ Oceanic Pack.⧖ Constitution: 1 ⧖ Debuff Endurance Pack. ⧖ Familiar Disrupt Pack (from Race).⧖ Intelligence: 4 ⧖ Tech Assimilate. ⧖ Tech Exhaust Pack. ⧖ Tech Charge Pack. ⧖ Hook Shot Pack.⧖ Wisdom: 2 ⧖ Medical Revive Pack. ⧖ Medical Barrier Pack. ⧖ Chem Hyperfocus Pack (from Race).⧖ Dexterity: 4 ⧖ Deadeye Luckshot Pack. ⧖ Fleet Footed Pack. ⧖ Soft Landing Pack. ⧖ Escape Artist Pack.⧖ Faith: 0 ⧖ Magic: 0 ⇀ ↼ Languages ⧖ Zahram. ⧖ Droque. ⧖ Intermediate-level Altalar. ⧖ Common. ⧖ Intermediate-level d'Ithanie. ⧖ Beginner-level Sofaal. ⇀ ↼ Life Story / Plot Hooks ⧖ Khayri El-Amin was born in Talant Omä-Sul on February 15, 284 AC. He was born into slavery, and grew up with Qadir, Daendroque, and Teledden culture. ⧖ Asha Corsairs raid the plantation which Khayri worked on. Khayri is freed, who steals a golden headband from the cadaver of an Elven lord on the way out. He is brought to Hallonq, and is raised there by revolutionaries. He learns clockwork and is properly tutored in the Daendroque language. ⧖ Khayri joins Asha & Daendroque revolutionaries on raids against coastal slave camps. In 304 AC, Khayri decides to find education in Al-Alus. He travels through Silbrae and Califaera before getting there. After mastering the clockwork engineering that he studied, he meets a Songaskian named Jamat Diawara. The two purchase and modify a ship together which they name the "Scorpion." ⧖ This ragtag crew docks at the harbors of the capital city of Regalia on June 12th, 308 AC. Khayri was interested in the nature of the archipelago because of the recent Clicker Crisis. Khayri has spent months in and out of Regalia since then, continuing to be the free spirit that he is. ⇀ ↼ Spoiler: Edit Log v2 6/19/2020 - Added a sentence at the end of the Life Story to keep up to date with IC progression. 6/20/2020 - Added a sentence in the middle of the third paragraph of the Life Story. - Added a sentence at the end of the Life Story. 6/21/2020 - Added another item to Inventory. 6/22/2020 - Added a voiceclaim. 6/28/2020 - Added x2 items to Inventory. 6/29/2020 - Added x1 item to Inventory. 7/4/2020 - Inventory update. 7/5/2020 - Changed 2 GIFs. 7/8/2020 - Fixed spelling error. 7/15/2020 - Added to Personality and Abilities. 7/19/20 - Added a tease towards Khayri's true goals in Basic Information Expansion. 7/20/20 - Added Daendroquin as Khayri's Home Language. 7/22/2020 - Added Personality Expansion in case any World Progressions include Khayri; I'd like his quirks to be written and such, so. - Added +5 Perception to Body Training due to Qadir update. - Added "Clocktik Spider" to Inventory Information due to Qadir update. 7/28/2020 - Fixed a small typo in Personality Expansion. - Added x1 item to Inventory. 8/1/2020 - Edited Life Story to include a small amount of more detail. - Added more details in the Life Story. 8/2/2020 - Added Visual Information Expansion. 8/6/2020 - Edited Inventory Information to accommodate for having his person looted. - Replaced +15 Thin Blade Combat Skill to +15 Blades Combat Skill. 8/7/2020 - Added more aesthetic formats. 8/9/2020 - Mishap on the format where I forgot to add certain aesthetics in Relationships. - Updated Inventory Information. 8/11/2020 - Clarified details in Visual Information Expansion. 8/17/2020 - Updated Inventory Information. 8/28/2020 - Changed Khayri's age from 35 to 28. 7 proficiency points were taken from +15 Blades Combat Skill to accommodate for the decrease in age. - Clarified the dates of certain events in Khayri's Life Story. 9/17/2020 - Updated Skill Information to the new proficiency system. - Removed Perception Training Racial Boost that was kept in due to oversight. 9/25/2020 - Updated Inventory Information. - Allocated 2 points from Sword Combat to Sailing Art. 9/29/2020 - Added Captain Command and Sailing Art ship names. 11/9/2020 - Fixed the theme song because the previous version was removed from YouTube. 4/21/2021 3:33 AM - Updated to the revamped Proficiency System. 5/23/2021 6:39 PM - Partially updated to fit the Qadir Update. Still TBD. 5/24/2021 10:09 AM - Finished updates to the application for the Qadir Update. 4:07 PM - Finishing touches. Everything is up to date now. @Antimreoir 5/28/2021 1:47 AM - Added +10 Hobby Points. - Allocated 5 proficiency points from Sailing Art to Modern Altalar and Fist Combat. 6/2/2021 9:29 PM - Added the new Clockwork Point-Buy, allocating points to fit in 3 packs. 6/3/2021 3:13 AM - Added another Clockwork Pack after removing points from Construction Art. 11:19 AM - Changed the visual reference of his face before Basic Information. - Added quote before Basic Information. 12:57 PM - Added "Brass-adorned Bronze Firearm Clockwork Device" to Inventory Information. 6/4/2021 2:47 AM - Removed "Modern Altalar" from Languages because I removed "+3 Modern Altalar" earlier. 6/21/2021 7:01 PM - Updated Precaëlle to Talant Omä-Sul in Life Story. - Added a sentence to the end of Life Story. 6/30/2021 10:33 PM - Changed Theme Song. 7/28/2021 10:56 PM - Added quote after Personality. 9/14/2021 6:33 AM - Allocated 5 Construction Art points to Sword Combat and Wall Climb III. 8:28 AM - Switched Roguery Wall Climb III with Clockwork Technik Wall Climb III. 9/19/2021 3:01 PM - Edited app per reviewer's review. 9/27/2021 2:27 PM - Updated the Inventory Information. - Removed +3 Fist Combat. - Removed +3 Arcanology (Artifact Knowledge). - Added +3 Linguistics (Daendroque). - Added +3 Admiral School, attended at the Silverwind Pirate Commune. - Transitioned from the old Clockwork point-buy into the new Engineering point-buy. 9/28/2021 2:56 PM - Reverted the colored text for the changes in the application to the default color. 10/1/2021 5:08 PM - Added hyperlinks to Skill Information areas where someone may need further information. 11/21/2021 8:04 PM - Updated to the new Character Application Template. 11/23/2021 2:05 PM - Fixed edits that the reviewer asked for. 1/5/2022 11:30 PM - Updated to Qadir Racial Abilities & Specials. - Allocated 3 point-return to Fist Combat. 8/28/2022 7:30 PM - Updated to current standards. 8/29/2022 8:00 PM - Added hyperlinks. 7/25/2023 2:52 AM - Updated to Spring 2023 standards. 7/26/2023 2:06 PM - Added Intermediate-level d'Ithanie to "Languages" to accommodate for Khayri's frequent, annual or biannual visits to Ithania. 8/5/2023 5:15 PM - Allocated 1 proficiency point from Constitution to Arcane. - Added Chem Talent, Gadget Combat, and Chem Enrage Pack following the roleplay to learn them. 8/12/2023 6:26 AM - Added unicode dividers between sections. 8/16/2023 9:21 PM - Changed sheet song. 8/17/2023 7:03 PM - Updated Tech Suit Pack to its new Tech Defense Pack name. 9/2/2023 7:10 PM - Added "Art" section to Appearance Information. 2/4/2024 2:31 AM - Updated proficiencies. 2:57 AM - Added Combat Style and Hobbies and Talents (Optional). - Added hyperlinks to proficiencies.
Spoiler: Edit Log 6/19/2020 - Added a sentence at the end of the Life Story to keep up to date with IC progression. 6/20/2020 - Added a sentence in the middle of the third paragraph of the Life Story. - Added a sentence at the end of the Life Story. 6/21/2020 - Added another item to Inventory. 6/22/2020 - Added a voiceclaim. 6/28/2020 - Added x2 items to Inventory. 6/29/2020 - Added x1 item to Inventory. 7/4/2020 - Inventory update. 7/5/2020 - Changed 2 GIFs. 7/8/2020 - Fixed spelling error. 7/15/2020 - Added to Personality and Abilities. 7/19/20 - Added a tease towards Khayri's true goals in Basic Information Expansion. 7/20/20 - Added Daendroquin as Khayri's Home Language. 7/22/2020 - Added Personality Expansion in case any World Progressions include Khayri; I'd like his quirks to be written and such, so. - Added +5 Perception to Body Training due to Qadir update. - Added "Clocktik Spider" to Inventory Information due to Qadir update. 7/28/2020 - Fixed a small typo in Personality Expansion. - Added x1 item to Inventory. 8/1/2020 - Edited Life Story to include a small amount of more detail. - Added more details in the Life Story. 8/2/2020 - Added Visual Information Expansion. 8/6/2020 - Edited Inventory Information to accommodate for having his person looted. - Replaced +15 Thin Blade Combat Skill to +15 Blades Combat Skill. 8/7/2020 - Added more aesthetic formats. 8/9/2020 - Mishap on the format where I forgot to add certain aesthetics in Relationships. - Updated Inventory Information. 8/11/2020 - Clarified details in Visual Information Expansion. 8/17/2020 - Updated Inventory Information. 8/28/2020 - Changed Khayri's age from 35 to 28. 7 proficiency points were taken from +15 Blades Combat Skill to accommodate for the decrease in age. - Clarified the dates of certain events in Khayri's Life Story. 9/17/2020 - Updated Skill Information to the new proficiency system. - Removed Perception Training Racial Boost that was kept in due to oversight. 9/25/2020 - Updated Inventory Information. - Allocated 2 points from Sword Combat to Sailing Art. 9/29/2020 - Added Captain Command and Sailing Art ship names. 11/9/2020 - Fixed the theme song because the previous version was removed from YouTube. 4/21/2021 3:33 AM - Updated to the revamped Proficiency System. 5/23/2021 6:39 PM - Partially updated to fit the Qadir Update. Still TBD. 5/24/2021 10:09 AM - Finished updates to the application for the Qadir Update. 4:07 PM - Finishing touches. Everything is up to date now. @Antimreoir 5/28/2021 1:47 AM - Added +10 Hobby Points. - Allocated 5 proficiency points from Sailing Art to Modern Altalar and Fist Combat. 6/2/2021 9:29 PM - Added the new Clockwork Point-Buy, allocating points to fit in 3 packs. 6/3/2021 3:13 AM - Added another Clockwork Pack after removing points from Construction Art. 11:19 AM - Changed the visual reference of his face before Basic Information. - Added quote before Basic Information. 12:57 PM - Added "Brass-adorned Bronze Firearm Clockwork Device" to Inventory Information. 6/4/2021 2:47 AM - Removed "Modern Altalar" from Languages because I removed "+3 Modern Altalar" earlier. 6/21/2021 7:01 PM - Updated Precaëlle to Talant Omä-Sul in Life Story. - Added a sentence to the end of Life Story. 6/30/2021 10:33 PM - Changed Theme Song. 7/28/2021 10:56 PM - Added quote after Personality. 9/14/2021 6:33 AM - Allocated 5 Construction Art points to Sword Combat and Wall Climb III. 8:28 AM - Switched Roguery Wall Climb III with Clockwork Technik Wall Climb III. 9/19/2021 3:01 PM - Edited app per reviewer's review. 9/27/2021 2:27 PM - Updated the Inventory Information. - Removed +3 Fist Combat. - Removed +3 Arcanology (Artifact Knowledge). - Added +3 Linguistics (Daendroque). - Added +3 Admiral School, attended at the Silverwind Pirate Commune. - Transitioned from the old Clockwork point-buy into the new Engineering point-buy. 9/28/2021 2:56 PM - Reverted the colored text for the changes in the application to the default color. 10/1/2021 5:08 PM - Added hyperlinks to Skill Information areas where someone may need further information. 11/21/2021 8:04 PM - Updated to the new Character Application Template. 11/23/2021 2:05 PM - Fixed edits that the reviewer asked for. 1/5/2022 11:30 PM - Updated to Qadir Racial Abilities & Specials. - Allocated 3 point-return to Fist Combat. 8/28/2022 7:30 PM - Updated to current standards. 8/29/2022 8:00 PM - Added hyperlinks. _
@Jouster I'll be picking this up for review. Please make the following edits and tag me once complete: If I'm doing this right, physical stat should be 23 (15 from melee combat, 7.5 from sailing) Pick one personality type and make the religions add up to 10 :gun:
@Azas The edits have been made in orange! Khayri reaches the Finders Qadir physical stat limit due to his metallurgy investment.
@Azas I've updated this character application to the new template. I am asking for a re-review, please.
@Jouster Please make the following edits and tag me once complete: I'm sure you can do more with the core concept, there's a lot more to Khayri than just clockwork and piracy Please list the points spent on point buy categories in the proficiency section for ease of review The free language is based on where they grew up now, so Faraddi wouldn't be an appropriate choice in this case
