⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻ ⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻⸻ ║❅╠═══════════════════╣⋇⋆✦⋆⋇╠═══════════════════╣❅║ ║❅╠═══════════════════╣⋇⋆✦⋆⋇╠═══════════════════╣❅║ ❮❮❁|Basic Information|❁❯❯ ✦|Full Name: Kayhdin/Kay'lynne Meztli Kee'lyth ✧|Aliases: Pestilence, Virtue, Xytli Raquavt ✧|Nicknames: Kay-Kay, Dinny✦|Race: Half-Maquixtl ✧|Subgroup: Sentli ✧|Recessive: Isldar✦|Age: Twenty-Five ✧|Birthday: March 24th ✧|Zodiac: Aires✦|Gender: Genderfluid ✧|Pronouns: She/Him/They✦|Occult: Born Mage, Body Arkenborn ✧|Dimension: Void✦|Combat Style: True Mage ❮❮❁|Core Concept|❁❯❯ ✦|Character Summary: Kay is an Arkenborn mage and healer, dedicated to the protection of others, and those closest to them above all else. ✦|Religious Beliefs: Kay is Agnostic in their beliefs; at one time raised a worship of Estelley, they have since distanced from the religion, though their lack of belief does not include a lack of reverence and respect that they hold towards most religions and deities. ║❅╠═══════════════════╣⋇⋆✦⋆⋇╠═══════════════════╣❅║ ║❅╠═══════════════════╣⋇⋆✦⋆⋇╠═══════════════════╣❅║ ❮❮❁|Proficiencies|❁❯❯ ✦|Strength: 0 ✦|Constitution: 0 ✦|Intelligence: 0 ✦|Wisdom: 2 ↪|Chem Hyperfocus ↪|Chem Cleanse [Maquixtl] ↪|Chem Mend✦|Dexterity: 0 ✦|Magic: 12 ↪|Magic Bolts ↪|Magic Counter ↪|Magic Cleanse ↪|Magic Resist ↪|Magic Snare ↪|Magic Warp ↪|Magic Smog ↪|Magic Shove ↪|Magic Feather ↪|Magic Isolate ↪|Magic Revive [Maquixtl] ↪|Adapt Safeguard [Magical] ↪|Adapt Wardrobe [Magical]✦|Faith: 0 ✦|Languages ✧|Natl, Common, Altalar, Sulvaley, Daen ║❅╠═══════════════════╣⋇⋆✦⋆⋇╠═══════════════════╣❅║ ║❅╠═══════════════════╣⋇⋆✦⋆⋇╠═══════════════════╣❅║ ❮❮❁|Plot Hooks|❁❯❯ ✧|tba
@Caelamus Was cured of vampirism and turned into a Cahal. The vampirism section and any correlating parts have been removed. Cahal abilities and a section to the visual information for form aesthetics have been added. In addition, the alchemy was reworked for the update and five points were added to one hand blunt combat. All changes marked in red.
@Caelamus Kay was cured of Cahalism in the Old Town Sacrosankt. All Cahal sections and abilities were removed, and all visual information was updated to mundane.
Claimed for re-review. Basic Information This is fine Skill Information This is fine Visual Information This is fine Personality This is fine Life Story I do gently suggest you un-spoiler your life story, but otherwise, this is fine. Approved. @PeBB3L
Well figured I would go ahead and do a quick post-curing and finally mundane rework. The twelve free points were invested into Exist Sorcery as well as six points from One-Handed Blunt, as the character did not make much use of the skill and it seemed to high to be justifiable.
Re-Approved. I had already marked this as re-approved after rating your post as "agree" but for some reason, it was set back to re-review, so I'm replying to this simply to confirm that I've already re-reviewed this app.
Bababoom, Kayhdin was adopted by Aedalyn Kee'lyth, adhering to the new laws in place. Not pinging or marking for re-review. P.S. WELL, somehow the prefix disappeared, so never mind on the marking. So sorry about that!
@Acosmism Reworked with the new proficiency system and all that jazz. In addition, he was changed to an Exeiiya Cielothar from a Hyliel due to no longer being in OOC contact with his father's player, and making a more sensical life story with that change.
@Acosmism Astral Being 1, Magic Sight 1, and Curing Knowledge added. Progression Skills updated to reflect.
@Acosmism So sorry for the double tag, but I also wanted to note that I moved three points from Polearm Combat to get the Exist Lavvanya Volacorum pack.
Just logging this here to avoid future confusion. Kay is now bigender, hence the change in names, pronouns, and all that stuff.
@Yurs Infected with Vampirism, so Vampiric Form and the Kit have been added to the application. The four points went into Sensor Magic, Shadow Magic, Afflicted Predator Pack, and Afflicted Heartbeat Pack. In addition I swapped out Axe Combat for Unarmed. All changes are marked in red!
@Volaie Switched one point from Constitution to Dexterity to remove Light Shielding and add Parkour Pack. I also swapped Storm and Water Magic. Kay is also now a Bonded Vampire and specials were updated for that, marked in red!
@Acosmism Indirect Anarchy Silvenism added, backstory adjusted a bit to accommodate. Character was also changed back into a Half-Isldar/Half-Maquixtl as they originally were, so specials and abilities have been switched. Lastly, one point was moving from Dexterity to Charisma, removing the Parkour Pack and adding the West Linguist Pack instead. Changes in RED! Also, if I could get some of the replies cleaned up on the app, that would be great!
@Caelamus The Void Silvenism was removed from the character. While the ideas planned with the aspect of the character were interesting, they never played out and after a time it simply felt like it wasn't fitting for the character.
@Scribbe Reworked for the new Magic update! Two points were moved from Strength to Dexterity to gain Greater Mage.
