Basic Information : > Name: Kahi Khomen. > Nicknames: Kiki, Keys. > Age: 19. > Gender: Female. > Race: Feka Asha. > Weapon of Choice: Rolling pins. Skill Information : Point Pool: 24 from Age, 10 Talent, 10 Hobby. +10 Dextrous Rogue (+5 from Talent, +5 from Racial Boost) +15 Baking Art (+10 from Hobby, +5 from Points) +5 Mixology Art (+5 from Points) +5 Percussion Instrument (+5 from Talent) +14 Uninvested. Body Shape: > Physical Shape: 0 + 0 = 0 > Body Shape: Slim. > Body Fat: Moderate. Languages: > Common | Free. > Ibeth | Learned from mother. Visual Information : > Eye Colour: Tawny Brown. > Hair Colour: Mink Grey. > Hair Style: Twin braids, or let down. > Skin Colour: Pale. > Clothing: Anything with ruffles, a full skirt, and pastels. > Height: 5’2 | 157 cm. Personality : > Alignment: Chaotic Good. > MBTI Personality Type: Consul [ ESFJ ] > Faith: Agnostic, 0/10. Life Story : Kahi Khomen was born to Khotep and Sythaeren on a cold morning in May, within the confines of her father’s estate. Despite being an undesirable child, she had the good fortune to grow up with three elder siblings; Panya, Safyia and Kesi. As all four were born from wedlock and a veritable secret to hide in her fathers eyes, they grow up confined within the basement of Sythaeren’s estate. Her mother tends to dote on her from time to time, given her father neglects the offspring of his actions; rather focusing on his business and other such aspects of his life. Given the circumstances, the situation was never meant to last. Her fathers wife ends up discovering the whole affair on one fateful eve, ordering her mother dead and absconding the litter into an orphanage. Now left without the financial support of her father and the emotional support of her mother, Kiki finds comfort in being defended by her more rambunctious siblings, rather than a deity or faith - choosing to believe that if any higher power truly were 'good', her life wouldn't have been filled with such suffering. Eventually these three lifelines of hers end up going their separate ways in life; knights and bardship, taking to the more violent side of life. Kiki, however, discovers her aptitude for baking, particularly pastries, and ends up excelling in the field. Becoming a sort of local hero, renowned in her small section of Ithania for her sweets and breads. Tragedy never strayed far from Kiki, though. A band of particularly drunk and zealous Ailor took wartime fancy to the bakery, as they had done with most other parts of town; except this time, they decided to take it too far. Kiki’s place of work ends up burning down, sending her spiralling into the depths of loneliness once more. With this urge seating itself in her head and taking hold, she decides to abscond to Regalia. Seeking better conditions, a mixing pot of cultures that she may be able to fit into, and a much larger market to sell to.
My only point of review is this: Could you elaborate on why specifically Kahi is agnostic in the Life Story? Is this a result of Unionism failing her through Ailor burning her bakery, or does she have other beliefs about the various gods and faiths in Aloria. Mark your edits in red and @tag me when you're done. Happy editing!